SwaSan SS: Love that binds two hearts- Ch.1 pg 6 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Gosh its already one year of separation..No doubt this is the reason that has bought Sanskar to become such a heartless and ruthless being..still in this avatar also he is awesome..would love to see him in this angry young man avatar and then melting down just for Swara.. Swara is as restless as him..their cosmic connection again..and the same scene where Sanskar helps her drink water..she is trying to remember that.. Oh the new music project..seems like both of them are finally going to meet after one year of pain and separation.. Would love to see how Swara will try to break Sanskar walls and Sanskar trying to stay away from her for her well being even hurts her so that she maintains her distance and Swara trying to come more closer..it would really be intense to see Swara wondering why Sanskar who is so ruthless with his employees turns soft with her.. Cant wait to read more.. Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb update sakshi 👏
Felt bad for sanskar
Ragini knowns swara his weakness and he will do anything for swara
But i loved it
And for swara she slightly remember sanskar i hope she gain her memory soon
Sakshi please pm me also na please 😳
Update soon



Thanks a ton for this comment Sujay!
Yup, she will gain her memory, but that will take some time of course.
I did PM you I guess!! Wait lemme check!
I'll PM you pakka next time, if I haven't this time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: svg98

Gosh its already one year of separation..No doubt this is the reason that has bought Sanskar to become such a heartless and ruthless being..still in this avatar also he is awesome..would love to see him in this angry young man avatar and then melting down just for Swara.. Swara is as restless as him..their cosmic connection again..and the same scene where Sanskar helps her drink water..she is trying to remember that.. Oh the new music project..seems like both of them are finally going to meet after one year of pain and separation.. Would love to see how Swara will try to break Sanskar walls and Sanskar trying to stay away from her for her well being even hurts her so that she maintains her distance and Swara trying to come more closer..it would really be intense to see Swara wondering why Sanskar who is so ruthless with his employees turns soft with her.. Cant wait to read more.. Update soon..



Hey!! Thank you so much for this comment!
Really made my day!!
I'm so happy that I'm able to write something good enough!!
Makes me too glad!
Will try to update real soon and cosmic connection, well this has to be one of the keys na to Swara recovering her memory? So it will be there often!
Thanks!
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
great concept sakshi & beautifully written.. 👏 keep it up waiting to read the rest of the part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Aahahaa humare SwaSan ka cosmic connection which we all love..
Loved the ruthless Sanky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Awesome post Awesome 👏👍🏼
Well to some extent the story matches my imagination... I thought to write but a Oneshot, a short one but ur imagination is far much better & detailed one as u are penning down many chapters

I wanted a full ML track so I imagined every1 will think Swara dead except Sanskaar & Swara with new identity but she's in Kolkatta only, she still wearing the SS pendant, the cosmic connection, Sanskaar opened a Music School in her name, there meeting in the music school ( I hope u didn't feel bad for I mentioned this as I feel something like this will come up in ur chapters), She joined there as Music teacher ... I imagined till here only

I frequently dont come in Forum as am busy with many schedules I didn't implement my thought but am very happy with ur FF as I needed wanted a track like this & believe me ur FF is much better than my thoughts, ur wordings, scenes much better than my thoughts

Awaiting for future chapters
Edited by isaritha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
where is swara ..Sakshi ... And my sansku dont know she is alive
waiting for the next update dear

And you know how i feel about the jeejaji and his sister in law scens😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Wow what a wonderful chapter my dear Sakshi🤗
Loved it a lot 👏👏

pls do update soon😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome update Sakshi
Loosing Swara has turned Sanskar into an angry person.That was to be expected,Swara was his everything.Love how he is trying to fulfill her dream.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Sakshi...
Just oneword...
Fantastic work...
U nailed it...
Great work on base of upcoming track..
I loved it...

Pls do pm me...

Love

Lekah

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