SwaSan SS: Sweet Deals (Completed) - Page 7

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Nynaaa 🤗 This story is really the sweetest one..I was smiling all the while I read the first chapter😃
Me too - smiling to know that I could make you smile😊

The intro part was so fun to read..😛How innovatively you have written it..😃The recipe for Sweet deals being the highlight..👏Awesome mind blowing..It was so interesting..As you said, I found happiness already reading the intro itself..😃😃

I am so happy to know you liked it - as I mentioned I love reading recipes and watching cookery programmes (not equally enthusiastic about making them😉) though the highlight of the recipe is SwaSan and anything with them would definitley be a sweet deal!
And now coming to the ever sweetest First chapter..😳😳

I really loved the characterization of Dragon Das and Swaragini of course..😊😊The way you started the story is so so beautiful..The sibling bonding, Ragini who loves to be woken up by Swara, Swara who loves to take all the blame for their current state..Everything has been explained by you in a heart touching way..🤗 hugs to you for that 🤗

So they were born to an orthodox family, and both the sisters wanted freedom from the conservative nature of the elders, especially Dadi..But then when they finally got it, they got it at the cost of losing their family..Oh no..!Poor things..😭
I can't guess what might have happened to them..But now the sisters are living under the care of Mrs. Das..

You liked SwaraGini - I was a little apprehensive that the sisterly bond would be a little too saccharine sweet especially given the way the serial dealt with it. But guess I got it right. Swara is typical - ready to take the blame for everything but is quite natural she being the elder sibling and presumably would consider herself to be responsible for the younger one.

And as they say, be careful what you wish for - it might come true. They find that this adage is quite true. As to what happened to them, that is for a little later.

I really loved the description of Swaragini's current home and the bakery named Sweet Deals..😃Cute and innovative name by the way..
Really loved the way you described about the timings and strictness in the number of cupcakes..😳
And I have been to Vashi, when I came to Mumbai in the past, I have lived there while vacationing with my aunt's family..But now, they have don't live there..They have shifted..But hearing the place name was so nostalgic..lots of memories came into my mind..😊😊

So you are familiar with Vashi, great to know - so do let me know if I get any facts wrong (to confess, I have never been there, I did a google search on bengali communities etc. in Mumbai and zoomed in on Vashi 😳)

And coming to the most lovely part..The arrival of the stranger in that rainy night..Aww so romantic..Hope that the person was Sanskaar..Anyway I imagined him only..😉😆
And really loved his first meeting with Swara and their interactions..I was smiling all the while..I am eagerly waiting for the next update..

As to the stranger, will come to know in chapter 2, which I should be posting by tomorrow, maximum.

And I want to say that you are a really gifted and talented writer..👏🤗

- and that makes me thrilled to bits ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Love you
Naina

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Nyna..!! 😳😃

I am extremely sorry dear I am tooo... late in reply😭

No, please no apologies for delays in reading and commenting. please.

I actually had exams to go and even know I am having them ...damn it..😡and soo..it was not possible to read and comment only 4 days more then I will have the much awaited holidays I am really pissed off know...😕 I am not even able to update mine ..

I am both angry and pleased - angry that you are prowling this forum instead of focussing on your examinations and pleased that you took time to read and comment, but please exams are important.

I always waited to read your work ..and this is something too unique concept ..I liked it and with your writing I am damn sure it will became a masterpiece👏😃

You were waiting to read my work and are sure it would be a... I am truly at a loss for words and really humbled. Thank you.

The reciepe was absolute bliss ..I will try it ..later on ..for my future fics to come😉 you have written it in a very innovative way ..and the bakery name is wonderful ..say unique ..I loved it mainly and the restrictions of the bakery ,swaragini bond , and their past ... all were described very beautifully..

The recipe - please do use it - after all anything relating to SwaSan would be great and you dangle the bait of future fics to come (say, how many more days for your holidays?)

Navi Mumbai..!? Yay..!! It is were I stayed for 10 years ..and our family got transferred to chennai 3 years before...since then I have been missing it ...you are making me recall my days there ..thanks. lot for a Navi Mumbai backdrop ...

Navi Mumbai - am happy that I could bring some memories - bet they were lovely ones considering that you have spent almost 10 years. And Chennai must be a great contrast

And I suppose the stranger is our hero .. Am I right ..?

Waiting for future parts ..update as time permits..

As to the stranger - Chapter 2 will tell, I should be posting it soon - maximum by tomorrow😊

Once again a big "SORRY" ..!!for the late..

As I said in the beginning, No sorry!

Love

Soundharya..😆😃