OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. - Page 7

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Nimmiii 🤗

Doll.🤗

Eeekks you started a new Series

And this is the first one i read and OMGG what was this?! I always knew you were good at suspense and thrillers because of Angel and the awesome twists you gave there but this one toh OMMGG so bloody brilliant 😲👏👏

Now you are making me blush. thank you for your generous works sweetheart. gaahh.. you reminded me of Angel. my true love.

I loved the bonding between Adarsh Swara Laksh and Ragini and then 'Our' Sanskaar too, 'twas so good to read . And the case itself was so intriguing I was literally biting my lower lip off thinking who the traitor would be, I suspected Adarsh and Laksh and for a teeny weeny second Sanskaar too as I'm very well acquainted with your twists 😆 but I banished the thought! And DAMMIT when I read Sanskaar was an imposter I literally had a brain freeze and had to re read that part like 3-4 times till it sunk in 😲😲

I loved the twist, so brilliant it is aajhgfdzrhfg ❤️👏.

Thankh ku thankh ku..❤️.
You do know me well doll. and yup that's why you guessed it right in the beginning. but then we love our Sanskaar. can't think of him as traitor.😆.
gee.. I am so glad you loved the twist.

All of them love their Sanskaar, that made me so proud for some reason 😆 😎.

we are Jabra fans of that guy. that's why!😆.

And that part where Sanskaar leaves a pic of him (his only pic) as a memory with his Swara aawww I was legit swooning at this man and his gesture ❤️.

He is our forever special guy nahi!

And also PLEAASSEE give a sequel to this one, I wanna know how they meet again 😲

will sure do baby doll.🤗

Fabulous job nimmi,Keep giving us more such OS's .

Thank you so much once again.
Oye I wrote many more OS's. would love to have you there too.😆🤗.

Love,

Doll

Love ya.

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Really will you?? Thank you Thank you Thank you sooo much!! I'll be waiting!!🤗I love you!!

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Fabulous OS Nimmi! 🤗 I loved it

I had guessed that the mole was Sanskaar but the second twist took me by surprise! Awesome twist that was👏 He was one of the good guys but was just from a different team. And then the ending was so cute😳 This deserves a sequel. I need to know when that "someday" will come in their life when they meet again & how!

Thanks Yukti for suggesting this one otherwise I would have missed out on a good story 🤗

Originally posted by: Sanavi

What a mind blowing twist...
Must say , u hv a knack of twists.

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Ha.. Ha... Ha.. Man you imposed doubt seed on Laksh and Adarsh.. When a writer do this then it's definitely not them.. Then my doubt turn on Ragini and Sanskaar.. But that selfie confirmed it.. It's Sanskaar.. I love to solve this kinda enigmas machi... Mmmawh for you giving me this... CBI missed me.. 😆 ..

Love you... You won't change.. Still telling me thanku... Puking.. 🤢

Originally posted by: ishanita

I want part 2 hamaari mange puri karo...laal kile pe dharna denge...we want part 2...

What yaar ?

Every tym I read u I think it is d best n nothing can be better than this ...but I always forget that u are nimmi...kasam khaake baithi ho to prove me wrong ...every tym fresh topic ...fresh story...starplus tagline suits u best...rishta wahi soch nayi...

Bw m again going out of topic ...yaar Angel hangover nahin uttar ra...I wanna ask Maddy's new profession which he has now opted?

Love

Ishita...but naam pataali Devi hone m der no large GI if u didn't give part 2 ...ok😆

Originally posted by: Sanya17

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 wow such an amazing story I had no idea who was the traitor and I tried not to guess because I smhw knew that the traitor will be someone unexpected and same thing happened I didn't expected this at least not in this way, when I got to know it was sanskar I was so shocked and confused but when read the whole story twice I understood hats off to you.👏👏 I was literally scrolling for more but there was none 😭

But fulfill our demand of part two

Originally posted by: -LumosMaxima-

Brilliant!!! I am kind of speechless right now. This is so so good. Wonderful os. please Write one more part where they will meet again. I really want them to meet again. Please continue this one. Will be waiting for their 'someday' :)))

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nimmi jaan...

Brilliant and outclass...enjoyed it alot...full suspense n mystery...i was suspecting adharsh n lakshya..but amazing twist n turns...

Sooo a very different type of love between swasan...far from each other..but still they will meet one day...muahhh

first Historical fiction n now this crime story of swasan..loved both...excited for next...

Will wait for comedy n supernatural...everything ..excited

Update soon...

Love

Talia

Originally posted by: M_Annu

I AM SPEECHLESS...WHAT COULD I SAY FOR THIS ONE..THIS IS THE BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ..JUST HATS OFF TO U..LOTS OF LOVE FOR YOU NIMMI..I LOVE THE WAY HOW YOU SHOW SANSKAAR'S CHARACTER ALWAYS DIFFERENT..MEANINGFULL..OUT OF THE WORLD..THE MISTERY OF SANSKAAR..JUST BEYOND OF ANYTHING..!!