OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. - Page 8

Originally posted by: 7APK

Awesome OS ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ... 😳

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Wow Wow Wow!! I absolutely loved this one...fabulous!! 👏 🤗

I did not expect the second twist...you satisfied every cell in me which loves mysteries! 😃

May I request a sequel please? Lots of potential for continuing this...😛

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Wow.. Awesome... Loved it a lottt...

The entire stry is superb...

Please can u cont it... Like Swara n Sanskar meeting again... As she hopes...

Please try to cont it...

Thanks for the pm dear😊

Originally posted by: AditiPant

Wow man I'm so spellbound, speechless and out of words...such a clever plot...wow girl you're amazing

So finally you wrote a os on my favorite genre... Thank you so much for that...what a great plot, what a great bonding between sanskar and swara, what a great revenge by sanskar and what a great deal of justice done to each character

For a second I was considering the fact that laksh was the culprit... Especially when sanskar said to swara that his new phone looked expensive... But ultimately it turned out to be wrong and sanskar was not sanskar...he turned out to be someone else... What was his real name BTW??? Well I guess that question is gonna remain...

And finally we came to know that sanskar belonged to the elite special defence forces...and was here to avenge the murder of his friends...wow man if there was anything we had expected, it was not this... But still, everything was amazing... And the way swara displayed her trust in sanskar and didn't reveal anything about the selfies was great...and sanskar's note in her car was adorable... Because he wanted her to remember him forever...I'm sure she will

One request- please convert it into a ts and return with a second part...we all wanna see them meeting again...kindly consider

Loved the os and the lovely and clever plot... Return soon with something more (can never have enough of your writings) till then, love ya and tc dear

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Awesome one nimmi

sheer brilliance

sanskar was such a mystery

loved it

poor guy from headquarters totally confused on what to do

Loved it really a lot

Originally posted by: showrav24

superb update dear👏

loved this os series

mostly this & previous one

hope we get second part of this os

waiting for next one

Originally posted by: navyasingh

Nimmi🤗

Can I say I am really loving this concept of many small stories from different genres😃.

And this was an amazing OS Nimmi⭐️. I enjoyed it a lot. In between you introduced a brilliant twist. I was seriously shocked because I really never accepted the story to go that way. I really can't figure out that what comment should I type down for this brilliant fic. I am really stunned, speechless, shocked and amazed😊.

Woah... Swara is in full on angry mood. She is a fiesty girl. Why do I have this feeling that this blue eyed, pretty sunny boy is gonna be Sanskaar😉.

Adarsh, Laksh and Ragini... they all are very sweet. Ragini is somewhat like Bozo here, extremely good with computers. Laksh is a funny and likeable guy😊. And Adarsh is a tough man. Swara has one lovely team with her

Seems like that crime scene is extremely brutual. I am sure they will crack the case soon.

And I was right. That sunny boy is Sanskaar😳. And he heard Swara's curses regarding him. Oh.. I love Swara. Instead of being or saying sorry to him, she was checking him out🤣😳.

Sanskaar is also pretty cool and a smart guy. In the very first meeting he liked Swara. And our girl is also fascinated by him😊.

Seems like our famous five cracked the murder case. But oh the evidences get lost. Someone is definitely a traitor amongst them.

How lovely.. Swara and Sanskaar can communicate with each other without even saying a word😳.

Sanskaar's plan of catching both the culprit and the backstabber is good. Haha.. totally loved what Sanskaar said about selfies and us channelling our ancestors😆😆.

Adarsh also has a bad timing😡. He broke such an adorable moment.

OMG... WHAT😲..I was really wondering that who is the traitor in the team. I had my doubts in all 3, laksh, Ragini and Adarsh. But I never imagined that the person would turn out to be Sanskaar.

But that person's name wasn't even Sanskaar. Was the crime Branch sleeping for all this time. Someone outsider infiltrated there department, and they didn't even know.

And when I was thinking my quota of surprises for this fic is over😆, you introduced a one more twist. Sanskaar and that couple were from defense forces😲😲. So Sanskaar is not a bad guy as I was thinking earlier.Wow Nimmi, it was brilliant story with an extremely brilliant plot👏.
It was a very good plan by Sanskaar😊. He perfectly infiltrated the crime branch sneakily. And was involved in a dealings of a murder case, without even raising a single ounce of doubt. Deleted all the evidences, so he can catch the criminals by himself. And he didn't even leave any single of his trace behind, not even a bloody picture. An extremely brilliant plan by him⭐️.

Friendship is a very beautiful bond. Swara was feeling guilty when she doubted her friends. And Sanskaar undertook this risky operation to avenge and provide justice to his friends/team members who were murdered brutually.

I am happy that Sanskaar atleast left a pic of him and a note with Swara😃. Although I am sure Sanskaar that Swara would have remembered you regardless of a pic or not. But still it was a very lovely thing, that he left a pic as his memory with her.
I really hope that they meet in future as Swara wished for😳. And Nimmi if you are thinking of writting its sequel. Please do it😃. Not at all presurring you. But would like to read that when and how do they meet next time, and what would be their reactions. Vaise this too has a perfect ending😊. It kind of justifies the tittle..mystery. Which is left to the reader's own imagination.

I loved Sanskaar😳. He was just amazing, intelligent and brilliant.

Brilliant work Nimmi⭐️. Told you na that I am speechless, can't figure out that how I should praise this OS. I Really loved it😃.

Thank you for writting it and sharing it with us.

Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

That's it!
I give up.

my commenting skills are masha allah as it is.. how could I possibly reply to your wonderful wonderful comment Richa?
I love you, i love your words, I so love your comments upon my stories, I lvoe that you love my stories.. and I just love everything about you. Bas!
🤗.