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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
I didn't comment on this one till now right??
Sowwie!!
But I loves this too equally. Beautiful one. How SwaSan hate each other but end up getting attracted and then finally falling in love!!
Just loved how Swara waited till the end for him and thaat beauriful hug and kiss!!
Loved it to the core. I know the commt is short I'm actually out and I wanna mment befoee I forget as I'm too occupied these days.
Sorry!!
Sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nimmi sweetie...

Im speech less...it was stupendous... baby..

Loved the royal setting...swara n sansku initial denial to proposal...but finally sansku after getting his ego hurt...nods for wedding...their meeting was quite touching in literal meaning...

Loved how he promised her to maintain safe distance till she is willing to takethis relationship forward...n their frienndship bloom n when it converted into strong love they even did not know...n finally battle happen...
Not sure about their future together ..she confessed her love n he recipricated..n finally after promising to be back n winning battle ...they were together...ahhh fantastic..muahhh

Waiting for more..i want comedy know...

Love
Talia



Muah back Talia.
🤗.

really happy that you found this story so good.
thank you for reading and like the story.
and for your compliments babes..

love you girl.
thanks again.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome os.. Loved it entirely...
It reminded me angel...
It's so refreshing...
Do write more.. I love ur works a lott..
Thanks for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Wow nimmi you're so good at writing ANYTHING and EVERYTHING...
This os was so good...right from the start to the end. The way both of them denied each others wedding proposals was so genuine and so was the part where swara rejected sanskar (deep mark on ego) then their first meeting and sanskar's lets cut to the chase attitude and straightforward proposal and swara's straightforward yes... All of it was wow

Then their marriage...:D:D:D:D:D and the awesome gift given by sanskar to swara on their first night :D:D then their progressing camaraderie and development of feelings and knowingly or maybe unknowingly falling In love... Then the point where they had to part ways to wage their respective wars...and swara's realization and no nonsense confession and sanskar's reply...all of it was too good

And swara not believing that it was the end...why would she??after all sanskar had promised to return and he was a warrior... Then his return and them forgetting all rules and boundaries... On the whole it was awesome

Lovely OS, love ya and tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nimmi🤗

Sorry for being late.

Thank you so much for this OS. This is definitely my favourite genre😃.

Ya..Mewar and Marwar's ever present enemity😊. Don't know why Rajput empires were busy in fighting amongst themselves rather than collectively fighting their enemies. Awesome concept Nimmi👍🏼. So, our Sanskaar and Swara are from enemy kingdom. And their marriage is gonna be a political alliance.

Swara is a brave and strong, truly a Rajput princess. She seriously have guts to reject Prince of other state which was I think was a big deal at that time. Nevertheless, looks like her rejection gave a huge blow to our Marwar prince ego😆. It has intrigued Sanskaar. And his No converts to yes😲.

And what an amazing first meeting. Full on sparks flying from both the sides😉. And I love Swara, carrying a dagger with her😊.

Woah.. Sanskaar ripped away that veil😆. In first meeting only there hate towards each other turned into attraction. Sanskaar is too fast.. And unsurprisingly Swara's No also changed to yes😳. Sanskaar's proposal was amazing😃.

Nimmi, many scenes reminded me of the movie Jodha Akhbar. It was a beautiful movie😊.

Be it present era or past one, our Sanskaar is expert in giving wonderful( and very thoughtful) gifts to Swara😃. That dagger was an amazing gift. Swara's trust in Sanskaar is not at all surprising, she shouldn't have married him if she didn't have any trust on him.

Nimmi, you wonderfully showed the slow and gradual process of them falling in love with each other.. from them being comfortable with each other to then falling in love. Loved all the small moments they shared together like discussions on battle stratergies, her discreetly watching him practice, them sharing their secrets with each other, her cooking food for him with her own hands❤️.

Sanskaar is definitely a man of his words. He didn't break his promise. And despite being a king, he slept on the hard floor. Sanskaar said it right that "Swara is his strength"😳. They both are each other's strength.

Their confession just before the war was so simple but was amazing and so emotional😃.
Jauhar scene...Jauhar and Saka were two practices of immense bravery and courage, though its also very scary concept.

Womens and men at that time were so brave and courageous. Some time back I watched a documentry. In that they showed that place in Mewar where a real Jauhar occurred in history. Really salute to all those people who sacrificed there life for their motherland and their honour😊. But just imagining those scene is so chilling and scary.

Swara has her full trust upon Sanskaar's promise. Till the very end, her beleif on him didn't falter a bit😊. And he came back and fullfilled that promise.

And their meeting was so beautiful. But *ahem ahem* Sanskaar and Swara are too forward for their generation😆. But seriously, their public display of affection was lovely😳.

Thanks for this another amazing OS Nimmi😃. Really loved it. You have written it so very well. Loved both Swara and Sanskaar. And their love story was beautiful😳.

Thanks once again
Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

I didn't comment on this one till now right??
Sowwie!!
But I loves this too equally. Beautiful one. How SwaSan hate each other but end up getting attracted and then finally falling in love!!
Just loved how Swara waited till the end for him and thaat beauriful hug and kiss!!
Loved it to the core. I know the commt is short I'm actually out and I wanna mment befoee I forget as I'm too occupied these days.
Sorry!!
Sakshi



Thank you so much Sakshi..
🤗

don't be sorry. you are busy yet you dropped such sweet message here, read the story and loved it.
so big hugs for that.

thanks again sweetie.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Awesome os.. Loved it entirely...

It reminded me angel...
It's so refreshing...
Do write more.. I love ur works a lott..
Thanks for the pm dear😊



Thank you so much Teddy.
🤗.

Angel eh! he is forever with us.

a big thank you once again for loving my works.
Love.❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: AditiPant

Wow nimmi you're so good at writing ANYTHING and EVERYTHING...

This os was so good...right from the start to the end. The way both of them denied each others wedding proposals was so genuine and so was the part where swara rejected sanskar (deep mark on ego) then their first meeting and sanskar's lets cut to the chase attitude and straightforward proposal and swara's straightforward yes... All of it was wow

Then their marriage...:D:D:D:D:D and the awesome gift given by sanskar to swara on their first night :D:D then their progressing camaraderie and development of feelings and knowingly or maybe unknowingly falling In love... Then the point where they had to part ways to wage their respective wars...and swara's realization and no nonsense confession and sanskar's reply...all of it was too good

And swara not believing that it was the end...why would she??after all sanskar had promised to return and he was a warrior... Then his return and them forgetting all rules and boundaries... On the whole it was awesome

Lovely OS, love ya and tc



Aditi..
*big bear hugs*

aww thankh ku darling for the compliment. you are too kind.
and for reading the story.
and for loving it.
and for this wonderful comment.

I am so glad you found it so good.
big thank you and bigger hugs girl.
🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: navyasingh

Nimmi🤗

Sorry for being late.

Thank you so much for this OS. This is definitely my favourite genre😃.

Ya..Mewar and Marwar's ever present enemity😊. Don't know why Rajput empires were busy in fighting amongst themselves rather than collectively fighting their enemies. Awesome concept Nimmi👍🏼. So, our Sanskaar and Swara are from enemy kingdom. And their marriage is gonna be a political alliance.

Swara is a brave and strong, truly a Rajput princess. She seriously have guts to reject Prince of other state which was I think was a big deal at that time. Nevertheless, looks like her rejection gave a huge blow to our Marwar prince ego😆. It has intrigued Sanskaar. And his No converts to yes😲.

And what an amazing first meeting. Full on sparks flying from both the sides😉. And I love Swara, carrying a dagger with her😊.

Woah.. Sanskaar ripped away that veil😆. In first meeting only there hate towards each other turned into attraction. Sanskaar is too fast.. And unsurprisingly Swara's No also changed to yes😳. Sanskaar's proposal was amazing😃.

Nimmi, many scenes reminded me of the movie Jodha Akhbar. It was a beautiful movie😊.

Be it present era or past one, our Sanskaar is expert in giving wonderful( and very thoughtful) gifts to Swara😃. That dagger was an amazing gift. Swara's trust in Sanskaar is not at all surprising, she shouldn't have married him if she didn't have any trust on him.

Nimmi, you wonderfully showed the slow and gradual process of them falling in love with each other.. from them being comfortable with each other to then falling in love. Loved all the small moments they shared together like discussions on battle stratergies, her discreetly watching him practice, them sharing their secrets with each other, her cooking food for him with her own hands❤️.

Sanskaar is definitely a man of his words. He didn't break his promise. And despite being a king, he slept on the hard floor. Sanskaar said it right that "Swara is his strength"😳. They both are each other's strength.

Their confession just before the war was so simple but was amazing and so emotional😃.
Jauhar scene...Jauhar and Saka were two practices of immense bravery and courage, though its also very scary concept.

Womens and men at that time were so brave and courageous. Some time back I watched a documentry. In that they showed that place in Mewar where a real Jauhar occurred in history. Really salute to all those people who sacrificed there life for their motherland and their honour😊. But just imagining those scene is so chilling and scary.

Swara has her full trust upon Sanskaar's promise. Till the very end, her beleif on him didn't falter a bit😊. And he came back and fullfilled that promise.

And their meeting was so beautiful. But *ahem ahem* Sanskaar and Swara are too forward for their generation😆. But seriously, their public display of affection was lovely😳.

Thanks for this another amazing OS Nimmi😃. Really loved it. You have written it so very well. Loved both Swara and Sanskaar. And their love story was beautiful😳.

Thanks once again
Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗



and you are here.
and I love you.. Bas!
and how I am supposed to reply to the comment so wonderful.. you know I suck at commenting.
so gonna keep it super lame and short..
but very very heartfelt..

thank you Richa.. a big big thank you🤗.
Love you girl.
thank you for reading my stories, lvoing them and always leaving your wonderful comments for them.

Love❤️



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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Res!

Nimmi - Will unres in leisure , once I am able to snap out😳😳

Nyna

Dear Nimmi,

That was indeed a dreamy story - both married as part of an political alliance though the sparks flew at the initial meeting itself (he says no but is stunned that she could say no to - certainly intrigued is our Marwar prince). Attracted despite the veil so it is obvious that the first glance would set them ablaze.
And he is confident of 'taming' the spirited princess - well he could - only by allowing her to tame him.

Such a tantalising love story as both take the time to slowly fall in love - somehow falling in love slowly is beautiful.

Yes who cares about codes, conventions and society when all that matters is holding and being in the arms of the one you love.

Lots of love,
Nyna




Nyna.. *big Hugs*

thank you so much for such a lovely comment.

I love these lines. so beautiful.

And he is confident of 'taming' the spirited princess - well he could - only by allowing her to tame him.

Such a tantalising love story as both take the time to slowly fall in love - somehow falling in love slowly is beautiful.

Yes who cares about codes, conventions and society when all that matters is holding and being in the arms of the one you love.


Thank you so much once again.🤗.




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