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divya2913

@divya2913

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

superb os dear loved it

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

this is beautiful...really beautiful...
marwars nd mewars enimity...nice...
beautifully portrayed the build up of love... the trust nd the devotion for other...wonderful work nimmi..

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

nimmi give me ur other works too plz...angel one.. m still not able to find it

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Vini224
Wow! What a beautiful story of the warrior prince and his princess.
Starting from their rejection of the alliance ,the marriage proposal and their journey towards falling in love with each other ,the love confession and Swara's firm faith in Sanskar that he'll come back to her,everything was just amazing.
The way Sanskar proposed is the best ever,simple and straight.😳

thank you so much Vini for reading and liking the story.
😳.

I am so glad you found their journey amazing.

and I just noticed.. Sanskaar is always simple and straight to the point in my stories.😆

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome...so beautiful

Thank you so much Sneha😳

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Ohh my my..

That is awesome..

Perfect combo of patriotism, love hate and selflessness...

Just loved it...

I was like well be back together..

Will sandbar be back from the war for his princess..

Awesome.

Thank you for the PM..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
Beautifully written

Thank you Prithi😳

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Nimmi
Such a nice OS.
Loved both the characters
This made me to remember Prithviraj chauhan ka Johar scene.
Nicely described Swara's feelings

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Nimmi sweetie...

Im speech less...it was stupendous... baby..

Loved the royal setting...swara n sansku initial denial to proposal...but finally sansku after getting his ego hurt...nods for wedding...their meeting was quite touching in literal meaning...

Loved how he promised her to maintain safe distance till she is willing to takethis relationship forward...n their frienndship bloom n when it converted into strong love they even did not know...n finally battle happen...

Not sure about their future together ..she confessed her love n he recipricated..n finally after promising to be back n winning battle ...they were together...ahhh fantastic..muahhh

Waiting for more..i want comedy know...

Love

Talia