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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prerulalli

Simply Superb nimmi 👏

The way in which they denied their proposal in the beginning as they belonged to the rival states and the reasons behind the rejection is so genuine 😊😊😊

When the messenger arrives to Mewar and says that the family has accepted the alliance YET the PRINCESS declined,, That was it for our Prince 😆 (Ego hurt very deeply)

When they meet for the first time with the veil in between as the barrier , Both of them are curious enough to see each other

Sanskaar pulls down or rather tears down the veil and gets astounded seeing Swara ,Same is the case with her 😳

The No-Nonsense Proposal from Sanskaar and Swara's immediate reply "YES"

The marriage 😃

The charecter of Sanskaar is so similar to the one in the serial :
He never forces her
He never feels embaressed to sleep on the ground to give max comfort to his WIFEY...

On and On and On


The dagger as gift to her on thier suhaagraat😆



Their story proceeds in a slow way without any hush push😊

Knowingly or Unknowingly they fell for each other in their journey together😊😊

When the day comes , when they have to go to wage the war
Swara no longer waits to disclose her feelings o her WARRIOR HUSBAND😳

The Proposal and the kiss of assurance that he will be back soon is so heartwarming and her belief on his words that he keeps his promises... such a lovely bond they share👏👏👏



When the ladies see the black flag hoisting , they preare themselves for JOHAR, yet swara belives that her man will come for sure😃😃
And yes he does ,Y wont she know her husband's archery skills😉


She runs towards the entrance ignoring all the rules...So does he 😉😉😉

The final hug and kiss 😳


No words to express😛😛


Wonderful OS👏


Lots of love,
Prerana😊😊😊



wow Prerana..
thank you so much darling for this detailed wonderful comment.
🤗.

I am so glad you liked the story.
thanks again.

Lots and lots and lots of love.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! What a beautiful story of the warrior prince and his princess.
Starting from their rejection of the alliance ,the marriage proposal and their journey towards falling in love with each other ,the love confession and Swara's firm faith in Sanskar that he'll come back to her,everything was just amazing.
The way Sanskar proposed is the best ever,simple and straight.😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res for now will try to unres soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Nimmie!! That was Splendid !!🤗
Worth it. Njoied fully🤗
TC🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Nimmi!! 🤗
It's been ages! What a lovely OS! Really enjoyed it- such a dashing Prince and his brave warrior Princess- sighhh!! Am rather obsessed with writing historical myself at the moment so especially enjoyed this. From the way Sanskaar was intrigued by the refusal and their explosive first meeting, which was redolent slightly of the nicer elements of Jodha Akbar and the their beautiful and slow falling in love, with the wedding night conversation being so wonderfully portrayed. The icing on the cake for me was the ending- loved that whole sequence and by the time that happened I wanted to stand and cheer and clap for them!

Great work like always Nimmi!

Love,
Shru xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Awww.. Nimmi.. this was so beautiful. And to be honest I could see glimpse of Angel here!! When Sanskar was about to go in the war and before going theu confessed. And the hug when they met in the graveyard! Goody I still can't get over them! The storyline was really interesting. Fiery Princess and the Brave Prince!! They met and there was a spark!! And as they started spending time.. the spark turned into a fire of passion!! Goddd.. it was all so nice! Pardon me for anything silly.. I have 103 Fever currently and I am roaming in SwaSanlicious land for relief!!



aww Saumya..
🤗

thank you so much dearie.
and you reminded me of Angel. I miss him so bad. that's why back to Swasan again.

thank you so much for reading and loving the story.
and please get well soon.
take care of yourself Saumya.
lots of love and best wishes.❤️
take rest and please get well soon.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Helee

it is so beautiful...! 😳



Thank you Helee.
😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjaan210

The feels!!! Nimmi i was jst missing angel sooo mch now tht we r evn done withe amazing end of the hound n huntress..
The os is awesome!!!!



Thank you so much Meghal🤗

Angel is with us forever.
thank you for loving Angel, hound's tale and now this story too.

Love.

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