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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res...Will unres with the other as well 😆

Unes

Hola Nimmi,

Look who is here to make one more unres out of our numerous Res.. It wont be detailed as i would like to but i want to get started on it dear..So i can catch up with you speed soon.. You will still keep writing about SwaSan right now that you got your intense track coming up next ..

I need not say it but i dont know how else too start..I loved it dear.. My prince and princess and there love story..Can it get more perfect..Ofcoure not.. I loved it how both valiantly loved there motherland yet refused to marry the other person as they were the reason for the death of their father and Brother ..I totally get them..You just cant make an alliance and except them to accept it when they have been enemies for so long.

Sanskar cant accept someone regected him, the brave prince of Marwar.. Well it lead to there first meeting and i loved it, Swara saying yes after meeting him once and he is proposing the minute he saw her.. Yeah guess there are forces that work beyond your rational mind after all.. I loved her condition but i loved him giving her permission to touch him whenever she wants more..It was just like how i expect Sanskar would react..

A dagger has a gift..That was so thoughtful and the present day Sanskar is presenting Pepper Spray as a gift on the Special Night as well..Such similiarties..I wonder what would Gabreil gift his kitten..Haha, sorry cant keep myself up from bringing in my Angel in each of my posts.

And their journey started , it was so beauitful ..She admiring him from afar ,them exploring the land together ,talking about there dreams and fearsand cooking for him..And them talking with each other all night, i can simply imagine those scene and i have this huge smile on my face when i read it ..

It is a historical fiction and ofcourse there will be a war..But i really loved how it paved way for her confession.. Just like Kitten,sorry cant keep myself from finding Similiarites .. Also Saka and Johar.. I know you will never let my SwaSan suffer such cruel fate but reading those words did make me feel the enormity of there situation..

And then he comes back victorious just like he promised and just like Swara i am so happy for my prince and his princess. He was wounded but still alive and back to her princess. What an awesome end to an awesome OS.. I love you Nimmi for writing this one..It was an very amazing historical based OS for SwaSan. And i dont think i need to say it but you are the Sweetest for still giving me this awesome OS about SwaSan..

Love

Nita

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anuja

@princess2791

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

so beautiful full of love. i dont have more word to discribe. continue soon waiting. take care.

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ooo nimmu this was again a masterpiece... Waiting g for more now...

Death can wait life cannot- this made me re.ember my 'angel'

Dostiwala luv u sooo much...😉.muahhh😳

Ishita😛

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Prerana

@prerulalli

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Simply Superb nimmi 👏

The way in which they denied their proposal in the beginning as they belonged to the rival states and the reasons behind the rejection is so genuine 😊😊😊

When the messenger arrives to Mewar and says that the family has accepted the alliance YET the PRINCESS declined,, That was it for our Prince 😆 (Ego hurt very deeply)

When they meet for the first time with the veil in between as the barrier , Both of them are curious enough to see each other

Sanskaar pulls down or rather tears down the veil and gets astounded seeing Swara ,Same is the case with her 😳

The No-Nonsense Proposal from Sanskaar and Swara's immediate reply "YES"

The marriage 😃

The charecter of Sanskaar is so similar to the one in the serial :

He never forces her

He never feels embaressed to sleep on the ground to give max comfort to his WIFEY...

On and On and On

The dagger as gift to her on thier suhaagraat😆

Their story proceeds in a slow way without any hush push😊

Knowingly or Unknowingly they fell for each other in their journey together😊😊

When the day comes , when they have to go to wage the war

Swara no longer waits to disclose her feelings o her WARRIOR HUSBAND😳

The Proposal and the kiss of assurance that he will be back soon is so heartwarming and her belief on his words that he keeps his promises... such a lovely bond they share👏👏👏

When the ladies see the black flag hoisting , they preare themselves for JOHAR, yet swara belives that her man will come for sure😃😃

And yes he does ,Y wont she know her husband's archery skills😉

She runs towards the entrance ignoring all the rules...So does he 😉😉😉

The final hug and kiss 😳

No words to express😛😛

Wonderful OS👏

Lots of love,

Prerana😊😊😊

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Saumya

@Saumya2102

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awww.. Nimmi.. this was so beautiful. And to be honest I could see glimpse of Angel here!! When Sanskar was about to go in the war and before going theu confessed. And the hug when they met in the graveyard! Goody I still can't get over them! The storyline was really interesting. Fiery Princess and the Brave Prince!! They met and there was a spark!! And as they started spending time.. the spark turned into a fire of passion!! Goddd.. it was all so nice! Pardon me for anything silly.. I have 103 Fever currently and I am roaming in SwaSanlicious land for relief!!

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Res!

Nimmi - Will unres in leisure , once I am able to snap out😳😳

Nyna

Dear Nimmi,

That was indeed a dreamy story - both married as part of an political alliance though the sparks flew at the initial meeting itself (he says no but is stunned that she could say no to - certainly intrigued is our Marwar prince). Attracted despite the veil so it is obvious that the first glance would set them ablaze.

And he is confident of 'taming' the spirited princess - well he could - only by allowing her to tame him.

Such a tantalising love story as both take the time to slowly fall in love - somehow falling in love slowly is beautiful.

Yes who cares about codes, conventions and society when all that matters is holding and being in the arms of the one you love.

Lots of love,

Nyna

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess2791
so beautiful full of love. i dont have more word to discribe. continue soon waiting. take care.

Thank you so much Princess.🤗.
You too take care dear.

Love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishanita
Ooo nimmu this was again a masterpiece... Waiting g for more now...
Death can wait life cannot- this made me re.ember my 'angel'
Dostiwala luv u sooo much...😉.muahhh😳
Ishita😛

thank you so much ishita🤗.

we will never forget our Angel eh.😆.

dostiwala love back.. Muah❤️..
thanks again dearie.