#A_Relationship_Of_Pious_Love - SwaSan FF (Part 4 - Page 9) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear hi this is anusha.i read al 17 updates of this story in fb i loved it..good going ya!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update..
Precap is interesting..
Thanks for pm

Thanks alott n its my pleasure pious soul.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update.. Waiting eagerly for next part... Update soon yar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh thank god it was a prank call by our very own laksh and rahul
Else i got a heart attack on that day when i read the precap👏

Update soon
want to see how sanskaar will manofy swara
Its gonna be fun😉
Do PM next time
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awesome chapter. I was quite scared after last chapter but I just loved this one. 😳 so now can't wait for the engagement. update it soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the late update guys..i am having my exams...so i am late...!!!



Part 4
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#A_Relationship_Of_Pious_Love

Mumbai..
Maheshwari&Gadodia Villa..
Otherside swara heard someone came so she went out in fury that she will not marry anyone..Swara comes to hall...n Sanskar's back was infront of her..she yells
Swara : Nahi karni mujhe shaadi kisi se..
Sanskar truns n mesmorized to see swara..He looks at her in amusement..n also confused..All are looking at her confusedly because they thought she don't know anything..n Swara is looking hurt n with anger..Shomi got that may be she got to know about the prank by piya..n she takes a big sigh of danger...Swara was looking at all n then looks at Sanskar..as u know she has never seen sanskar's face..
Swara : Suna ap logo ne..nahi karni kisise mujhe shaadi..kisi se matlab kisi se bhi nahi..
Sanskar now got that she is his going to be bride n would be wife..n he is seeing her fury emotionlessly..then glares at laksh n Rahul like what you have done guys..Rahul n Laksh n Ragini saying sorry by making innocent faces..then Sanskar takes sigh..Shomi was trying to say something..
Shomi : Shona..there is nothing like..(interrupted by swara)..
Swara : No..there is so many thing..how could he do like that ?..What i have done wrong maa?? Ohh..my one n only mistake is i loved him..for loving him i am getting hurt everytime..maa..why ?? If he didn't wanna marry me then why he promised me n all that he will come n marry me..why ?? I have never asked him to promise me..but he did n i waited because i love him n trust him..but again he did the same..he has broken my heart...n now he is saying that he sent a good choice for me n that person will be perfect for me..(looking at sanskar)..Noo maa..no one can take his place in my life..n i can never marry anyone except him..though that person is more better than him..but i can't..okay i should end my love..life n marriage chapter here..(looking broken n angrily looks at sanskar thinking as other person whom sanskar sent)..
Sanskar observes her n getting her fury looks but smiles in mind n he also giving pissed of n deadly glares to laksh mainly n then Rahul...other peoples tries to tell swara but failed n then sanskar signs them to stay quite..n swara giving pissed of look n truns to go..but sanskar stops saying..
Sanskar : Excuse me..(with a calm voice)..
Swara truns to him n gives him an angry look..said..
Swara : Didn't you get me..?? I said i will never marry any other person in my life..i can live my life..because i have everything in my life..so u don't need to worry about me okay..i can be happy without marrying also..n tell ur your business client Sanskar Maheshwari not to worry about me..(saying this she again truns to go but again sanskar stops her )..
Sanskar : Who said you to marry someone else ??(while saying he went near her with a smile)...
Swara looks at him surprisingly..
Swara : What do you mean ?? OKay whatever..i just don't wanna hear any thing rubbish now..i know i am gonna spoil everyone's happiness for my marriage but its my final decision that i will never marry..i think u got it..(looking at sanskar n again truns to go but this time sanskar holds her hand)..
Swara looks more angry n looks at sanskar n tries to say something but sanskar cuts her off..
Sanskar : Who said you to marry someone else when..(pause for some second n said with a smile)..Sanskar Maheshwari himself is here to marry u..
Swara was shocked to hear sanskar's name..n she blinks in disbelieve..n suddenly her other friends also came down with uttara heard all this n shocked but uttara was happy..
Swara : (shockedly saying)..Sanskar..(tears rolling down from her eyes)..
Sanskar : Ohhh..yes madam..it's me..n what you have heard all those was bloody hell prank played by my cousin brother cum my buddy brother laksh n ur brother i mean my one n only brother-in-law Rahul..now can you guys explain the thing to her..(looks at laksh n Rahul)..
Swara was looking at Rahul n Laksh confusedly..
Rahul & Laksh : We are sorry di/bhabi..
Laksh : We did the prank to do fun with you n sanskar bhai..but it's got serious..i am very much sorry bhai n bhabi..
Rahul : Haan di..we are very sorry for this stupid prank..please forgive me..
Swara glares at Rahul..Ragini sees it n comes forward to swara..
Ragini : Swara bhabi please forgive them for last time..even i was with them..we got to know u love him unconditionally..thats why we did prank that how u react n seriously u reacted like the way we thought..okay okay please sorry...in this prank bhai has no hand he even got scold by chacha(uncle) chachi(aunty)...please forgive us..
The 3 held theirs ears in apologising way..Sanskar looks at them n smiles..then looks at swara but he got that this sudden prank already made a fear inside her mind n heart so he think now its his duty to solve it because last time incident of his delay for marriage has made the prank situation very tensed so he need to make it light..so he truns to swara n now also he is hoding her hand..then when swara feels the gaze of sanskar in her so she looks down because of embarassement that she said so many things to him without any reason..but she has a courage so she was going to speak..
Swara : ahhh..i..I...
But sanskar cuts her off again..so she looks at him with moist eyes...
Sanskar smiles n bent down infront of her in his knees..n holds her hand..everyone was looking surprised that what sanskar gonna do..laksh n ragini was super surprised with his mom..dad n sister..n his bodyguards gets dumb badly with shocked..but stays quite..sanskar looks at everyone smiling with a naughty glint in his eyes..
N then he looks at swara who also shocked..
Sanskar : Swara..i don't know that i can love you the way you loved me since so many years or you will love me..as u all know i have never thought about love so it would be impossible for me to fall in love before..i am a practical person..though a practical person i value emotions..but in my life i prefer my mind first then i prefer what my heart says because heart always stay join with emotions..so in that case my heart always heard my mind..n after seeing a beautiful soul infront of me n with so much unconditional pious love for me that i can never deny to give you a place in my life or in my heart or mind..as i said my mind is always work as my heart because i give less importance to my heart..okay leave my side but i promise u with my all being that i will never ever leave your hand in our way of life..i will try to give you the love u deserve but i am not sure when i can love you like you do..i will try my best to fulfill your every single wish/demand/desire which you will adore..i will give you every happiness which a pious soul like you deserve..So will you give me the opportunity to fulfill my every words which i have given you as a life time promise?? Will you be my partner in my way of life ?? Will you be SWARA SANSKAR MAHESHWARI ?? Will you MARRY ME Swara Gadodia ??(he said his every words with full of sincerity n with a lil signature smile of Sanskar)..
Swara was in 7th sky..she don't know what to say..she has happy tears in her eyes..n then she nodes in yes..she makes him stand n hugs him tight..sanskar was surprised first but he too hugs her because she was crying badly in his arms..he don't know why she is crying so badly..he tries to console her but sujata stopped him..
Sujata : Sanskar..no..let her cry today how much she want..it will surpress her inner pain which she got in 2years..but always hided from us..because its not easy for a girl of india who stay in this society..n whose engagement got delay for long 2 years so she have to face many things..but my brave DIL beard all..n never cried but today her patience of being a strong woman has broken when she got that her man is here to handle her from all the rubbishes which she beard in those 2years..so let her cry to make her heart light..(says with a smile)..
Sanskar feels bad so he says sorry again to swara who was hugging him n crying then heard him now..she was feeling safe in his those strong hands..she feels his fragrence which is giving her immense peace to be with him..n giving her strength to wash out all pain from her heart..because now he is here..but when she heard him saying sorry again..so she breaks the hug n feels bad seeing him saying sorry many times so she said this time..
Swara : Don't be sorry more..u have given me every happiness by being with me..so i don't want anything in my life except you..that you have given me..n from now no one will feel guilty what happened 2years ago..n i want to start new..n i forgive you laksh..ragini..n you too Rahul..(smiles)..
The 3 smiles with relief...
Laksh&Ragini : Thank you bhabi..n please bhai you also forgive us..(with a pleading look)..
Sanskar : When the main person has forgiven u all then i also forgiving u 3...
Rahul : Thanks di n jiju..
All smiles..n then Sanskar looks at his bodyguards who were holding percels n flowers..signs them to come near..n they come near to sanskar..then he takes flowers n chocolates n the jewelery set..n looks at swara who was looking at him..
Sanskar : Ahh..these are for you for our first meeting..i thought to give you..i know it was weird that in our engagement ceremoney so many things happend..but please will you accept my small gifts..
Swara smiles..n takes them n sanskar smiles..
Then dida said..
Dida : ahh..guys..its getting late..guest will also start coming after lil time..so stop this emotional chapter..its happy day today that swaru got her love today..(winks at sanskar n sanskar looks weirdly n then smiles)..
Dadi : Of course..all go back to ur works..
Shomi : Ahh..suju i am so happy today..n Sanskar my dear son..thank you so much for all this happiness..n we trust you that u will keep your every word..
Shekhar : Yeah..i am proud of my Son-in-law..bravo man..(then hugs sanskar n sanskar too responses)..
Raam : You keep my head high my son..well done.. !! (With a pride)..
Sujata : Ohhooo..now leave all this..sanskar you need to freshenup..n my dear laksh n ragini happy that u guys come early..(hugs them n kisses on their forehead)..now Rahul will show u 3's rooms..rahul go with ur jiju n laksh bhai n bhabi..
Rahul : Okay (happily)..
Laksh&Ragini : Okay chachi..
Shekhar : Lucky beta don't hesitate at all its ur home only..n ragini u also..
Shomi : Haan..(smiles)..
Ragini : Okay aunty..
Shomi : N uttara..please take ur swara bhabi to get ready..her every make up got spoiled by crying..(makes faces)..
Swara : Maaa...
Shomi : Okay okay..now uttara take her inside..n sanskar u too go with rahul..n ragini n laksh too..n get ready guys within half hour..
Sanskar : Okay..aunty..
Uttara takes swara n Rahul takes sanskar with laksh n Ragini..
Then all elders takes a sigh of relief ..

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After half hour..Swara was getting ready again nicely..making her perfect this time she keeps her hair loose..n then uttara sees the gift which sanskar gifted swara..n tells swara to open it..swara opens it..n all friends of her..ragini..n she was surprised..its a platinum with dimond set..its beyond beautiful..
Swara smiles..
Swara : Uttara..ur bhai choice is very good..woow..
Uttara : Why not ? After all he chooses you at last today..n so its normal that his choice is up to the mark..(winks at swara)..
Swara : Uttara..you naughty..(laugh..)..
Piya : Swara..he is soo hot n charming..dashing..hayee..i will go flat on jiju..
Swara : Piya..u are..(but smiles n remembers as a lost one thinking..sanskar's angelic face..his sparkle brown eyes..how he tall..how his straight body matched him..how he proposed her..how he consoled her n everything..n again smiles n said)..
He is damn perfect for me..he is my Man..my love..my life..just love you..Sanskar..
Piya n uttara n all looks at swara n smiles..n starts teasing that comes in sense...
Piya : Swara..waaah..what a love..!!(winks at her)..
Uttara : bhabi..i think bhai will start to love you soon..i know my bhai..lil bit crack..but its ok..narrow minded but okay..angry young man..but its too okay..but he accepted you with whole heart like you..though he now also don't love you (sad)...but its super okay right??
Swara observed her sad face..but smiles n says..
Swara : Beyond okay..n i will love to see how he start to love me..i am happy cause he is all mine now..(laughs)..
Other too started laughing..then finished her make up n then put the necklace on her neck n earrings on ears which sanskar gifted n got ready finally..
All gives her compliment n she smiles..like sanskar will be flat to see her..n mesmorized..swara shies..

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After Rahul taking sanskar to his room..n he saw that his room is fully decorated like he love to stay..in his choices everything..n smiles seeing it..
Sanskar : Ooo..khool..as i like..i must say its damn good..
Rahul smiles hearing him..
Rahul : Why not jiju..! After all my di decorated ur room with the choice..u like it..she knew it that u will like the room like this way..
Sanskar was surprised but then smiles..
Sanskar : Ohhh..thats nice..she knew everything..n it will easy for her with me..because u know right..
Rahul : I know jiju..n don't worry..di too understand you very well..n she too know that u don't like crowd n u like to stay silent n alone n all..but i think today will change ur mind may be..(winks at him)..
Sanskar : Not at all..but i really liked ur sister attitude..which i have seen in a girl though i don't talk to girls easily without any office work..they are not like swara.
.ur sister is different that one i like..n her courage..thats woow..i must say..
Rahul : Ohhooo..jiju..i know..but now u go n freahen up..n i am coming with your sherwani which di designed for you specially..
Sanskar : Okay..man..i will go n freshen up myself..
After freshen he comes out n sees a sherwani is on his bed n he takes the sherwani n looks impressed that really swara know him very nicely..its a silver colour sherwani with some standered rich work on that which represent a personalities charm like sanskar...
Sanskar wears the sherwani n looks damn handsome...he wears his black classic wrist watch..at that time Rahul n Laksh entered the room with a smile..
Laksh : Wooow..bhai..u r looking so dashing..really bhabi's work n choice suits you really very well..
Rahul : Right laksh bhai..
They both are wearing sherwani laksh is yellow colour..n Rahul blue colour..they too looking very nice..
Rahul : Guys..time up..its engagement time..so lets go..
Sanskar : Okay..lets go down..
Laksh : Yeah..or we will not they will think that you went back or eloped from engagement..(naughtily winks..n laughs with Rahul)..
Sanskar : Thats not funny at all guys..(with a angry mood)..
Laksh : Okay..okay..lets goo..
They went out for hall..

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Sanskar..Rahul..Laksh reached Reached hall room..already guest came..now waiting for the girl of todays night because boy is already here..Shekhar n Raam introduced Sanskar with their some business clients..who are strictly said that they can't even take the name of sanskar before he don't say yes..all are like family so they agreed n they are faithful to shekhar n Raam..
Raam : Mr.Sheth..meet my Son Sanskar..
Mr.Sheth looks at him..
Mr.Sheth : Hello..sanskar beta..hows you ? Hows everything??(frankly)..
Sanskar : Hello..yeah i am good n everything is going perfectly too..
Like that shekhar n Raam made him met with all which he don't like at all..but Shekhar n Raam do it intentionaly to irritate him n then they said sorry to make him irritate n laughs..sanskar gives them ahh shit look..after sometime swara comes down with uttara n ragini n her friends..swara was looking stunning..Sanskar sees her n mesmorized again in her beauty..he thinks she is really pious with heart n beaty also..Swara looks at him n smiles..Sanskar too smiles..
Laksh gets shocked n surprised to see ragini in yellow colour lehenga which is matching with him..n compliments her with eyes n she shies n tells thank you..uttara goes near her brother..
Uttara : Bhai..(saying she hugged him n then breaks)..
Sanskar smiles seeing her..
Sanskar : So..hows my doll ?
Uttara : Bhai..super duper..because i am with bhabi n rahul bhai always..n our whole family..i love them..
Sanskar : Hmmm..i can see..but i really missed you my doll..
Uttara : uffoo..u know i really missed u too..u know i love you very much..
Sanskar cares her hair n smiles..
Then ragini brings swara next to Sanskar..n they looks at each other..n swara smiles..
Sanskar : Thanks for wearing my gift..n u r looking gorgeous..(said normaly n he just come to his ownself now hahaha)..
Swara : Thanks..n thanks too for wearing my designed sherwani..i hope u like it..(smiled)..
Sanskar : Ahhh..yeah..its very comfortable..thanks for it..
Then shekhar announced for ring change ritual..
All headed for it..shomi gives swara a ring of male platinum dimond ring..swara make sanskar wear the ring in his hand hand ring finger..then Sujata gives sanskar a ring of platinum with a big dimond on it..its elegent..he makes her wear it on her left hand ring finger..n all claps with happiness..
Then uttara n rahul announced for a performance n rahul..uttara n ragini n laksh dance on Bole churiya..( from Kabhi khushi kabhi gum film)..
After their dance Rahul tells everyone that its a special dance for someone special..
Then a girl come from behind n starts dance on dewaani mastani song..(from Bajirao Mastani film)..
N its swara..its describe her love for sanskar..n all looks at her n smiles..sanskar surprised to see her dancing..n he observes every words of song n her dance..n he smiles whole heartly finally...n swara finishes her dance n smiles loving at sanskar n then all..n leaves stage..so went to her friends..

Precap : Picnic..Sanskar visits office..masti of Rahlak..n..SwaSan..

Hope you all will love this..say about swara n sanskar avatar if you all like..i would like to know..n i have written it in fully in English..i think some wanted it now they are happy..keep reading..next update will be little late..stay tuned..!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its beautiful🤗🤗
The proposal...Hayee Iam dead officially...☺️

Thanks for the PM
Love,
Prerana😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update 👏
Please update your story in fb also please 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome chapter. swasan engagement. sanskar proposal was beautiful. 😳
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Wow superb update... Thank you for the pm..

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