#A_Relationship_Of_Pious_Love - SwaSan FF (Part 4 - Page 9) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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waw.. amazing update.. hope sanskar will fall for swara soon.. thanks for pm ishanita.. continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plzzz don't disappoint us this time... I hope the engagement will happen with no problem... Plzzz pm me when u update the next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanita


Annual
Dearie look I tell u
Re means she is reserving her comment to elaborate layer as right now she is busy
And that's why she wrote unres
Now pm means personal messenger that can be sent to one or more people for telling that u have updated ur story so they can read it ...last tym I pmed my frns. ...but as my exams are there so this tym I cudnt ...if u eidh u can send on...by the vsiya.Ber is kamila Di u can take help from her...she herself is an amazing writer
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thanks alottt ishita for ur explaintation..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai dear...😊
nice one...diffrent one...sanskar is completely work holic...and swara is opposite to him...eagar to knw who love will start btween them...its one sided love but want to knw how love will start for sanskar...intresting...continue...😊

Thank you for PM...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please update this soon...and yes we love the bold sharp minded businessman even if he is a bit cold hearted at the start...
Swara as a fashion designer is amazing...The family bond is also nice...

Looking forward to reading about the engagement party...

Wow update fast...If possible please pm me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
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#A_Relationship_Of_Pious_Love

England...
Sanskar landed in England at evening time..then he straight left for his own Hotel..its like cold there..so he wore an waist leather coat..muffler..looking damn hot..after some time he reached hotel n checked in..all welcomed him warmly n he asked his employe to come to his room asap..his bodyguards is going with him like his shadow..till he reached his room..a male servet came n sanskar takes out his coat n handed him to give..then sanskar looked at the time..n asked to some of his employe who just entered his room..
Sanskar : Is everything done..mike ?
Mike : Yeah..sir every lil thing is going absolutely fine as u said..this time no problem will happen..we know u will choose the best canfidate like always..n yeah no one got to know the reason why are you...(mute conversation)...but..(inturrept by sanskar)..
Sanskar : Well..done..mike..(with a smile)..n no need more informations for now..now u may take your leave i wanna stay alone..
Mike : Alright sir..(saying this he went)..
Sanskar takes a sigh...n thinks something n smiles...
Then he reached for his stuffs..suitcase n all..n he got his guitar..he takes it out..n went towards his balcony..n seated on a chair..n looks at the sky n takes a long sigh n smiles n then set the guitar in his arms..n again thinks something n closes his eyes peacefully..
He started playing guitar...he is playing a plain..soft..malodious..heart touching tune..which will make ur heart flow with it..like; it will give u immense peace..suddenly he stopped...n thinks..
Sanskar : How can a girl wait for you so long..??? The girl have so many patience..ohh god..she even never saw me..as mom said..n she never tried to see me through pic..i heard without seeing me she loves me but how can she love me like this ???!!! I wonder..!! How i will make sure that she will be happy with me..i promised my mom..dad..her mom..dad n even to her also..but i am wondering..if i can't give the love she deserve what she have for me also..she is well established..as i got her infirmation..through me too never seen her..but she is one of the best fashion designer of India..a modern girl..but her way of love for me is making her different in this century..how man ? HOW!!?? AHHH..okay lets face her on our engagement day..
He cleared his thoughts..n went back to his room..then slept on bed...

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Mumbai...
Maheshwari&Gadodia Villa..
Its evening time in Mumbai..All are very much happy that finally everything is gonna be happen right this time..because their Sanskar itself made sure that he is coming india to marry their swara...Shekhar n Shomi is doing decoration preparations..sujata is looking at the food items..Raam is inviting everyone...n Dadaji is just ordering all to do things right way..
Shomi : Shekhar..u see sanskar is coming for my daughter..but its only 10 days..after that what he will do..?? If he marry swara then will he take her with him or not ?? Will swara go with him ??(tensed)..
Shekhar : Haan thats true also..i am thinking about it too..is sanskar only coming here to marry her then he will again go back to his life like before..i am getting confused yaar..i know sanskar will do what is best for both of them..i have no worry about swara..because she is mature..
Swara comes there n heard all..she is wearing half thigh length jeans pant which is above from her knee..n white waist sleveeless tops..her hair is tied up with bun..n hairs falling on her shoulder..she is just looking too hot..n cute in her this look..okay..as swara heard all..so she went near her parents...
Shomi saw her..
Shomi : Shona..tum kab aye..?
Swara : Maa..i just come when u both are discussing about my departue with sanskar from india..(she laughs n all looks at her)..
Shekhar : Why are you laughing ??
Swara : Papa..u know...i am not afraid at all..n why i will be..tell me ?? Papa..come on..he is going to be my husband..he would have the right to take decisions about me n us like i have for him n us..but this time i would like to go with him if he takes me with him.. I will be happy if i get the chance to be with him...u all know i love him..why don't i will be happy??..point hai na..n if he don't take me then may be he would have a reason...but will never leave me in half way i can say about it by seeing sujata mom n raam dad..Sanskar is their son..so i would be proud to get a life partner like him who adores his parents most in the his life..(said all this with a hoped eyes of trust)..
Sujata n raam are very much happy to hear..
Sujata : Hayeee...thats like my daughter-in-law..(hugs her)..
Raam cares her head..n sujata kisses her forhead..
Raam : we could never get a better life partner for sanskar than swara..thanks beta for loving our sanskar unconditionally...
Swara : No..dad..i am lucky to love a person like him...i know he is become my life without seeing him..but i can feel his presence in between u guys..(hugs both of them)..
Shekhar n shomi looks happy with tears..
Shomi&Shekhar : Hume koi bhul hi gaye hai..sirf mom n dad..no maa n papa..??!!(makes a cute faces)..
Swara smiles at both of them n runs to them hugs them..)..
Swara : I love you all..
Rahul comes from behind..n tells..
Rahul : Dii..ur friends are coming for ur shopping of engagement..now go n get ready..i will be waiting for you here..then we will leave for shopping till then ur friends arrive..n where is uttara meri behen ?
Uttara : here..i am...bro!..okay wait i will come with swara bhabi..okay..
Rahul : Okay..meri drama queen..now go with ur bhaaabi..(winks naughtily)..
Uttara : Bro..thats not fair..i will shoo u...(angry)..
All laughs at their lil fight...n then Swara n uttara went upstairs..after sometime they left for shopping with swara's friends..then done their shopping...then they went parlour for facial n all..rahul just acted like as bodyguard of them..haha bechara rahul..
Rahul : (thinks)..jiju..how u will handle this unique creature..my only sister..8 wonder of world..u guys didn't see her real look now also..yaar..save my jiju..please come fast..i can't handle ur would be wife for some more years..(making sweet faces n helpless faces)..
Then they left for villa..because its quite late at night..

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England..
Sanskar wakes up in the morning with a warm smrik on his face..like he know what he need to do for the next..
Sanskar : Ahhh..Good Morning..England..be ready for me..
Saying this straight went cupboard n takes out his formal suits..n leaves for bathroom for warm shower..
After sometime sanskar came out..n gets ready for his meetings..he need to attend 3 meeting today..so he will stay here till evening then he will leave for india for second time in his life..Sanskar reaches the board meeting first..n the meeting was held for 3 hours..its gets successful..n then again he attend another meeting..that was held for 1 hours..its just a brief meeting..because after 10 days he will finalize the deal he think after watching all this is good..
Then after taking a break..sanskar calls mike to come to his room..because the meetings are held in his hotel only..A lil later mike enters his room..
Mike : May i come in sir ??
Sanskar : Yep..of course dude..come..
Mike : Sir..i know why u called me here..so let me tell you..everything is set sir..that person will try to ask u for that but its on you what will you do ??!! You have no pressure of this on you n u can just ignore it..
Sanskar : But i just need to learn him a lesson..i think i should do it..so lets Bang on !!! (with a smirk)..
Mike : Why not sir..of course..
Sanskar : As i know he is here to talk to me..so lets send him here..n lets begain the game...of Sanskar Maheshwari..how dare he.. ?? (Angry but then smiles blandly..)..
Mike : Okay..sir..he will be here within some munite..
Saying this mike went..n Sanskar smiles..n thinks it will be diguster for you..u wanted to buy me by ur silly bloody hell tricks..not now..u will pay for this..
Then after sometime a middle aged person with confident look comes in to sanskar room...n sanskars looks at him n smiles with smirk..
Sanskar : Ohhh..Mr.Samual Jackson..please come n sit here..
Mr.S.J. : Thanks alot.
Sanskar : So..mr.samual..what did you want to talk to me.. ? Anything special..??(behaving like he don't know)..
Mr.S.J. : Yeah..i just want ur some time..
Sanskar : Ur wish is granted already..now please shoot..(in a straight voice)..
Mr.S.J. : okay..first of i have proposal for you..
Sanskar : Yeah...so..then..what is it..??
Mr.S.J : Proposal is only Marriage proposal for you with my one only daughter Susan Jackson...
Sanskar : ohhh..okay..i will think of it..Hmmm...(thinking..)..
Mr.S.J. : Why..thinking..?? You know we going to do business together after your last meeting..n so i want our relation extend with a family relation that no one can break it..
Sanskar : How are you so sure that we are gonna do business together..i haven't give final decision now also..which i will give in my next conferrence..but u seems very confident..nayyee i don't like this attitude..old man..you need change of this attitude..
Mr.S.J. : I know you will accept my presentation only..because i know u too love profit n power..which will grow more if we get together in this business world..
Sanskar : Okay..i will think of much confident proposal..lets see..n your time is up..now conferrence time..now u may leave..
Mr.Samual leaves the room with lil bit disappointed look..but he thinks that sanskar will choose him only..when Samual left..n sanskar thinks..u are finish now man..(smiles bitterly)..

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Conferrence Room..
All clients are waiting for Sanskar's arriving..and in those clients one client is looking very tensed..don't know why..but he is hell tensed..just then Sanskar made his entry..n greets everyone n tells them to take their seats..then he too takes his place n he is very serious now because its now business..there should be no compromise for anything..sanskar tells every clients to explain their idea n project for sanskar's big deal offer..but no one can impress him a bit..he just want some unique thought which could be match with him in his future project..just now two clients only left n one is Mr.Samual Jackson..n sanskar looks at him..n with a smirk he tells..
Sanskar : Mr.Jackson..please go ahead..lets see what new you have in ur thought..
Mr.S.J. : Okay..so here it it..
He explains the whole idea of his project n sanskar seems lil bit impreesed..n Samual sees this n thinks he knew it that he gonna love this project..n sanskar also thinks..that person really said well before doing it..what he said he almost did it..but not now also i have one more client..lets see..
Sanskar : Okay..mr.jackson..its seems good..please wait for the final decision..
Then Sanskar looks at the next client n seems impreesed n smiles lil bit but hide it..
Sanskar : So..now its turn of Mr.Laksh Maheshwari..so please go ahead..
Yeah its his cousin bro..laksh..
So..laksh smiles lil bit..n stands up n starts explaining every each thing of this project n which prefers profit..also profit on every workers..every single thing..after sometime he finishes it confidently..n Sanskar was listening him very much surprisingly n with an impressed look..so sanskar says..
Sanskar : Well..done mr.maheshwari..u have done it..u have shown every single thing which will make this project perfect..which i liked very much..
Then he also asked to other board clients who are with him to company him..they also praised Laksh..then sanskar takes a decision..n Mr.Jackson now also seeing over confident..
Sanskar : So this project goes to Mr.Laksh Maheshwari..n his karma company..so guys its final..
Laksh was in 7th sky..n Mr.jackson seems angry..
Sanskar signs the project with laksh..n laksh also signs it..
Sanskar shakes hand with laksh by saying..
Sanskar : Congratulations Mr.laksh..hope we will work on it gracefully..
Laksh : Yeah..i hope so sir.(with a smile)..
All already left without laksh n sanskar n mr.samual jackson..
Jackson was in angry mood..n yelled..
Mr.S.J. : What the hell was this..?? You have given this project to him..what about our deal..??
Laksh was shocked hear this..
Sanskar : (looks at laksh n then Jackson)..who the hell are you to saying me this whom should i give this project..n as i said its upto on project idea..ur one was just good...but his one 100% better than ur..do you get that..(with a frowned)..N ur bloody hell deal..u wanna make me marry ur daughter..hahaha..thats funny..just let me clear one thing..Sanskar Maheshwari never make a deal on basis of any relation..he never ever join business n personal life together..he will never allow anyone to do this kind of thing apply on me through business profit..i don't make profit over any relation..that thing u get it okay..ohhh..by the way..u r totally finished today for this act of ur over confindent..i think u got it..(yelled n smirk evilly)...
Sanskar calls someone n tells him to come in..ahh that mike comes in..
Sanskar : So mike please give the bloody papers to him so that he can get a narrated confirmation...
Mike gives the paper to jackson n then leaves..jackson sees the papers n shocked..sanskar watches his expression..
Sanskar : Ohh..my god..! why are you lost..?? Okay let me tell you if u don't get me..okay..i just throw u out of the USA business board membership..thats u are nothing without a ordinary business man of NewYork..you followed me n tried to convaince me through marriage proposal with ur daughter..ohh crap..there u did blunder mistake..man..u tried to play with Sanskar Maheshwari..ohh now just go to hell..(with a angry glare)..
Jackson with a shocked face n insult left room..
Laksh saw all this n sanskar's angryness n shocked..then laksh says..
Laksh : What the hell is this bhai..??
Sanskar looks at him n gives assured smile..
Sanskar : Just what u heard n saw now..that is.. !
Laksh : But bhai u too did deal with ur brother ??(confused look bcuz as sanskar said he don't make deal with relation)..
Sanskar got him..
Sanskar : But u earned it my lil brother..u deserved it..ur work gave this to u..not my relation with u..if u would have not capable n better than him then i would give this to him only..though he did this cheap thing but..at last he crossed all limits so i had to do it..okay lets leave it..
Laksh : (understands n smiles)..okay bhai..now please lets go home together..
Sanskar : No yaar..i need to leave for india now after an hour..i think u know why..so lets go together..
Laksh : Ohh..yeah..congratulations bhai..at last u also gonna count in our cetagory of husbands..(winks at him)..
Sanskar : What..?? U will never change na..okay leave it..lets go with me..
Laksh : Okay..but first let me inform ragini..if she also want to go with us or she will come with all in ur Sangeet day..
Sanskar : okay..go ahead..laksh..
Laksh calls ragini n asked her..n then he smiles n cuts the call..
Laksh : Bhai..she will go with us..so lets leave now..i go home n pack my bags n ragini too waiting for me then we will directly come airport okay..see you there..
Sanskar : Okay..dude..just make hurry..u have only 1 hour..for it..because before next evening we need to reach there..its already here getting afternoon..n there will be early morning i think..so do hurry..n me too leave now see you soon..
They hugs eachother n leaves for their individual places..n sanskar seems happy..

Precap :
Sanskar calls sujata..
Sujata : Hello...sanskar..bol beta..
Sanskar : I can't come but i have a best proposal for Swara..the person is my business client from India..i think he is the perfect match for swara..n u know we are different..so i am sending him for this proposal..please handle the situation..i can't marry her..she deserves best mom..this time i am not sorry..because this time i am doing good for her...
Swara n all hears it n shocked..Swara is in tears..

Sorry for delay..hope u all will like it..n next part will give tomorrow..keep reading..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
Swara is very understanding 😳
Precap is shocking 😲
Sanskar 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing g update. .
shocking precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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no he cant do dis he wouldnt do this to swara plzzz no sanskaar...bt i hv faith in u do watever u want man bt dun separate swasan
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Omg different concept and a very interesting one too!! Love it plz do continue soon and plz on me the next parts!!

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