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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: StarshineHues
Oh this looks so interesting and promising my Senorita !!
🤗🤗

What did Lucky and Kavya do now. Ugh.

I love that you've set this in the music world, that's what we had all wanted to see when the RagLak separation track started.

Please update real soon.

Love you !! 🤗🤗

Thank you so much Adi🤗

Actually this was in my mind since then but couldn't pen it now then.

Let's see if I can post the first chapter tomorrow..

Love ya🤗🤗

Thanks for the support😳

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Thank you so much Adi🤗

Actually this was in my mind since then but couldn't pen it now then.
Let's see if I can post the first chapter tomorrow..

Love ya🤗🤗
Thanks for the support😳

Always !! 🤗🤗

And yay I can't wait !!

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Chapter 1

The story starts a year before the prologue.

Ragini came running into the house. She was sweating and panting. Sharmishta got worried on seeing her.

Sharmishta-"ragini kya hua beta tum haanf kyu rahi ho?"

By now swara who was in the kitchen also came out.

Ragini holded her mother by her shoulders and started circling with her.

Ragini-"maa aap yakeen nahi karengi hame scholarship par University me admission mil gaya hai"

Sharmishta could not stop herself. She started crying.

Sharmishta who lived in the servant's quarter of a big musician Tarun Basu.

Tarun Basu,a kind hearted man did not leave the widow and two daughters of his best employee Shekhar Gadodia all alone after his death.

He tried helping Sharmishta financially but she was not connected to the musical world. So she was hired as the cook of the house.

Swara who was also listening to this had tears in her eyes.

Swara could never forget the day their father's body entered the house.

Ragini wasn't old enough to understand the meaning of dearh.

She said-"ohh papa is having a long sleep but when will he wake up?"

But swara knew he would never get up. She could not forget how her mother was lying in a corner after his death or how his grandmother threw them out calling her mother manhoos(inauspicious). She could not forget Mr. Tarun who took them to his house.

She did not like seeing her mother cook for them.

Mr. Tarun's wife and daughter Kavya never respected her mother.

Swara grew up faster then. She had to give up her studies. She learnt cooking but decided not to cook for basu family.

Mr. Tarun owned number of restaurants around the world and she requested him to hire her there.

Swara came out of her thoughts. She hugged her little sister.

"I am proud of you ragu mai chahti hu tu hamesha kaamyaab ho"

Ragini was beyond happy. She was a bright student and she was only studying to free her mother and sister from the clutches of poverty.

Her first love was always singing. When she was young she would climb the wall and watch kavya singing like a rockstar with her fake mike and guitar.

How much she envied her life. Since then she wanted to be like her. A singer, A rockstar.

Even after all this years she wanted to be like her.

Kavya who was studying abroad. She was living there with her brother Kartik.

Ragini wanted to be like her. She was extremely excited about her studies. Mr. Tarun would support her and would be happy to hear the news.

Swara had set the table.

Ragini-"I am going to tell Mr. Tarun"

Swara-"what's the hurry pehle dinner karo phir chali jana"

Ragini sat down. All they had on the name of furniture was this broken table and 3 chairs.

"I will buy you the most expensive dining table one day maa", she thought to herself.

"Oho daal makhni swara tumne zyada to banayi hai na. Ye meri favorite hai"

Swara laughed-"haan haan bohot zyada banayi hai kal tak khati rehna"

As she was about to eat a servant came running.

Servant-"Sharmishta tum yaha baithi ho pta hai Mr. Tarun ko heart attack aaya hai"

They were shocked. A day that had started so well ended in tragedy.

So how is it?

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AshaJyothi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Very Nice Dear Aww My Ragini is Innocent n Brilliant too Swara is also very Good in helping family matters n Very good Update but Sad that Tarun heart attack and waiting for Next one thanks for pm dear

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: azira07
Very Nice Dear Aww My Ragini is Innocent n Brilliant too Swara is also very Good in helping family matters n Very good Update but Sad that Tarun heart attack and waiting for Next one thanks for pm dear

Yeah she is too innocent but the cruel world😭

Thanks dear🤗

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Thanx dadi maa for the update.. .
Ragini is too cute... her dream is to free her mom n sis from.poverty ..poor Swara she had to leave her studies...
Mr tarun is too good.. I hope he lives...

Update soon

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Thanks for the update Dadi maa 😉

Ragini is so sweet and innocent ... Hope she manages in this cruel world

He got a heart attack😲 Now what will happen?

Update soon

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove
Thanx dadi maa for the update.. .
Ragini is too cute... her dream is to free her mom n sis from.poverty ..poor Swara she had to leave her studies...
Mr tarun is too good.. I hope he lives...

Update soon

Thank you dear🤗

You'll have to wait to see if he survives or not?😊

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD
Thanks for the update Dadi maa 😉
Ragini is so sweet and innocent ... Hope she manages in this cruel world

He got a heart attack😲 Now what will happen?

Update soon

Aww thank you anjale🤗

Wait for the next part to know his fate😆