Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: rbb1
Hope we get an update soon

Sure sure iss bar no late update

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Sure sure iss bar no late update

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: rbb1
yay your great thanks

Hey mate hope ur not angry.. I will update today itself

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Part-16

Hi all this is part 16 .. well I know it's not up o the mark but still pls Do read n leave ur comments behind..

Laksh left .. n ragini stood numb but then she opened the gift .. it had audition froms of various singing competitions..

N a letter. Stating how he wants her to be Ragini 1st n then any other identity.. he wanted her to search herself n be herself...

After reading that ragini decision to fulfill this wish of laksh... n hence she started working... various auditions .. huge crowds n what not.. but finally 2 months later-

India-Fo

In Mumbai,

Ragini is standing next to a big stage of an auditorium. Her dress perfectly complementing her beautiful face and melodious voice. She is happy, excited and nervous as well.

R(in mind)- thanks laksh ji apne humari zindagi har barki tarha issbar bhibadaldi..

she was standing backstage, manager enters..

Manger- mrs. ragini after this performance 2nd is ur turn.. be ready n bestof luck..

Ragini - thanks ...

soon the performer just before her starts singing .. now the manager is standing next to her.. she close to give her performance

but...

suddenly her phone vibrates...

R- hello!

It was a neighbor from Kolkata Kali badi...

Neighbor - hello ragini ur mom.. she.. she is not well her condition is serious please come asap

Saying this the neighbor cut the call leaving ragini all shattered..

She left her chance for singing after so long she just left from there in one breath .. she cancelled the earlier flight n then urgently left for Kolkata in another flight...

In Kolkata Kali badi -

Ragini came running..

She left her bag out n banged the door when shekhar opened the door..

R- baba Maa kesi h kanhan h..

Shekhar- mat karo baba mujhe.. u have lost the r8 long back itself..

R- papa .. aap yeh...

Dadi - tu .. tu atthe kayi ayi h mana kiya tha Na thare ko ki yanhan Na aayegi..

R-dadi ma Maa h kanhan.. kya hua h unhe ...

Just then swara enter...

SW - ragini don't u dare call her Maa . Because of today she is in this condition.. come let me tell you n show u how n what have happened to Maa..

Swara held ragini's wrist n pulled her to sharmishta room..

Sw- see this..

Sharmishta was lying unconscious on the bed..

SW- yeh Maa h aur unko zada stress ki wajah SE body mein blood ki clotting ho gayi h ..n u what she was so much worried about u.. because of she is here like this..

Saying this swara broke down... ragini already had tears in her eyes.. when dadi ma held her hand n pushed ragini out of the house .. her head hit the pillar n it started bleeding..

Dadi - don't come back ever .. got it n now get lost...

Saying this dadi shut the door.. with a bsng.. ragini pleaded dadi but in vain ... after some time she got up n moved away her heart was filled with guilt..

She wanted to go to a scared place.. she wanted to pray to any form to the Almighty for her mother..

She was then reminded of the mosque she visited the day before she left... she imply moved there removing her shoes there it self next to her luggage.. the weather wasn't that pleasant it was bad n it was like anytime it could rain... winds were blowing fastly when she left for the place...

Ya Nizamuddin Auliya
Ya Nizamuddin Sarkar
Kadam badha le
Haddon ko mita le
Aaja khalipan mein pee ka ghar tera
Tere bin khali aaja khalipan mein
Tere bin khali aaja khalipan mein
Ooo...

She started her journey... it wasn't that pleasant... the winds were blowing badly n there she was walking through a unmanned road.. it just had mud... n loads of thorns ..small stones n what nots..which stuck in her feet... leading it to bleed..

Rangreza Rangreza
Rangreza aa...
Ho o ... Rangreza Rangreza

Kun fayakun Kun fayakun fayakun
Fayakun fayakun fayakun
Kun fayakun Kun fayakun fayakun
Fayakun fayakun fayakun

Ragini.. she least cared about her feet or anything but all she wanted was her mother to get well soon.. she was waking through the road realising how her every action had caused pain to all others...

Jab kahin pe kuch nahi bhi nahi tha
Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha
Jab kahin pe kuch nahi bhi nahi tha
Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha

When she was close by her karta got stuck in a bush n was torn but she did not stop n continued to move ... she felt alone and all guilty.. she wanted all this to end today...

Woh jo mujh me samaya woh jo tujh me samaya
Maula wahi wahi maaya
Woh jo mujh me samaya woh jo tujh me samaya
Maula wahi wahi maaya

She reached her destination n sat at place.. she felt low in all terms .. her body felt week n her heart n mind were filled with guilt..

She wanted to be there at this place.. it felt peace giving...

Kun fayakun Kun fayakun
Sadq allahu ali ul azeem

Rangreza rang mera tann mera mann
Le le rangaai chahe tann chahe mann
Rangreza rang mera tann mera mann
Le le rangaai chahe tann chahe mann

She this time wanted the omnipresent power to soak all the pain her mother was suffering through ...

Sajra savera mere tann barse
Kajra andhera teri jalti lau
Sajra savera mere tann barse
Kajra andhera teri jalti lau
Qatra mila jo tere darr barse
O Maulaa...
Maulaa... aa...

She knew how he helped all.. how his heart was grand enough.. big enough... he was the one who could help her mother recover n gain conscious ...

Kun fayakun Kun fayakun
Kun fayakun Kun fayakun
Fayakun Kun fayakun fayakun
Fayakun fayakun fayakun
Aaa
Kun fayakun Kun fayakun fayakun
Fayakun fayakun fayakun

She sat there praying for hours when it started to rain.. people around asked her to come under the shelter...

Meanwhile, there sharmishta too gained conscious...

Jab kahin pe kuch nahi bhi nahi tha
Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha
Jab kahin pe kuch nahi bhi nahi tha
Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha Wahi tha

RaginI was moving towards the shed when her foot slept n she landed close to a point close to the enterance.. she tried getting up but her body did not support... it was too tired to do anything more..

Soon some people were donatingblankets n food to those in need n they left one for her.. she was almost unconscious by that n time... her body got heavy...n Then she fell on the floor...

Her body wet. . covered under a blanket...

What had happened to her.. will laksh meet her or will she die like this.. all alone due to her guilt...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago

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spatika

@spatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

awesome update..
continue soon..
thanks for PM..

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ShiriHoonMain

@ExoticDisaster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

superb update, plz update next part soon

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

OMG poor Ragini hope she will be okay thanks for the update can't wait to read the next part

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Thanks for choosing a option 😆
Oh poor Ragini.. she is suffering a lot..a lot..
I hoped Swara would help her but glad she didn't or we wouldn't have got such a beautiful update...
I hope Laksh reaches on time..missed Laksh in this chappy...
N how would Laksh react to it..he will scold her or what..
N Ragini can't die..her Laksh will save her for sure..
She is all alone in the crowd..😭
I wish, u were the writer of the show. .

Update soon plz...

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Poor ragini...she is suffering a lot.

What happened to her..

Waiting for your next update

Thanks for the pm

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Hi Harshu,😊
Nice update and emotional too...Felt bad for Ragini.😭 Hope Laksh comes and saves her and everyone forgives her.😊 Though everyone's anger is justified for what she did earlier, but now they should really forgive and accept her back bcoz she is really guilty for her earlier evil deeds and she is really suffering.😭 Update soon and thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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