Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
poor both of them. i hope they will meet soon. beautiful and emotiojal update. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Felt bad for them
But beautifully written 👏
Update soon




P.s- Swasan story ko bhi update kar do 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg !!

Harshita !!

Please get them together soon !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww what a lovely and emotional episode
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Felt bad for them
But beautifully written 👏
Update soon




P.s- Swasan story ko bhi update kar do 😉

I am ready with the 1st part but what to do here is the climax of this but I will try my best
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read both the parts together. Awesome updates.
Its good that Ragini realized her mistakes and asked for an apology from each and every one.
Bt the next part made me sad. Feeling vry sad for RagLak. That letter written by Ragini for Laksh made me sad.😔 I thought that Laksh will b able to stop Ragini at the airport, bt he was not!! Plzz RagLak don't divorce each other.😭
Beautiful updates. Plzz update soon. Thanks for the pm.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Felt bad for RagLak
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Posted: 9 years ago
first sry fr I didn't comment 9th part bcoz I m little busy
nw only I read both parts..it's so emotional nd luvly update..
awsm part especially laksh dialog about ragini saree(hip) dat's simply brilliant...
excited to read nxt update
thanks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi, sorry for the late update i know u want ragya together soon but till then ... sorry and i welcome all the eggs chappals and rotten tomatoes..

Part -11

Around 2:30 am. Ragini's flight landed in Mumbai.She composed herself and soon called her friend reena

PHONE-CONVo-

R- Hello! Reena

RE- hi rags . Reached here

R- yes

Re- K ! U come out I am waiting

Ragini meets reena and they both leave for her new place. Ragini has taken a house on rent just adjacent to reena's.

In the car- R- Who tumne music school mein baatki

Re- Haan 2 day iv k liye call ayega

R- thanks

Re- tumhara ghar clean kar diyah, set kar diya h aur kuch fruits, milk and bread are there in the refrigerator mein rakha

R_ thank u

Re- OHO! Ragini dosti aur pyaar mein no sorry no thanku Aacha abhi rest karlena kal na mene chutti li h.. Supermarket jayeng..

R- Okay..

Ragini reaches the place and her house she changed and went to sleep... All the time thinking about Laksh whose memories were bringing tears in her eyes and pain in heart...

Next Mrng- in MM 7:00 am everyone came out of their rooms but were shocked to see laksh sleeping with head resting on center table and some paerds under it. Also his lashes were wet.Seeing this sanskaar decides to wake him up.

Sa-(tapping his shoulder)- Lucky!!

L(got up)- Ragini!!

But realizes that it is sanskaar

Sa- kya hua lucky tu yanhan aur upar room ka door bhi open h

Ap- laksh ragini kanhan h!

On hearing this laksh was reminded of yesterday's events and he broke down hugging sanskaar

Sa- lucky !! kya hua bolna!!

L- bhai voh RAgini.. ragini..(cried)

Sw- Laksh kya hua ragini ko bolo???

L- bhai voh mujhe chod ke challi gayii durr ... Mumbai

Sa- kya??

Laksh handed him the 2 papers and went to his room, on reading them Mf too felt broken..

Swara immediately called Ragini

PHONE-CONVO-

(Swara keeps the phone on speaker as the family should know everything)

Sw- Hello ragini

(ragini was crying when she recived the call and hence she composed herself and spoke up)

R- hello swara!1

Sw- pagal ho dimag kharab h tumhara aeese kissiko bina bataye Mumbai jaane ka kya matlab h abhi k abhi ghar wapas aaoo

r- aree swara kitna chillaogi humpe wese tell me dadi ko bataya

Sw- nahi and u r coming back saman pack karoo and come back

R- swara pls ab tum humpe bhi bossgiri mat karo hum sanskaar nahi h (laughing a little) samjhi!!

Sw- ragini kya keh rahi ho tum kyun chali gayii

R- hum itne galat h na swara ki humara koi haq nahi banta h uss ghar mein rehne ka, laksh ji par apna rishta thopne ka. Aur swara hum unse bahut pyaar karte h, unko pehle hi itna dard de chue h aur janti ho jab jab unko dard hota h toh unse zada takleef humein hoti h. Pehle bhi unse dhoke se rishta joda tha... toh esa rishta kese chalta tumhi batao..hum unhe kush dekhna chahte h ab agar unhone papers sign kardiye hon toh pls lawyer ko call karke proceedings k liye baat karlo.. humari chinta mat karoo hum Mumbai mein h humari dost k pass hi; Ab shayad laksh ji ko jaldi hi unki pasand ki modern wife mil jayegi..( saying this her throt choked0

The mf felt sad on hearing this also sanskaar felt guilty for her situation he felt that as if he was the reason for it..but ragini again spoke up

R- swara aaj jo kuch bhi humare saath ho raha h jo kuch bhi hua h uske zimmedar hum h agar pehle hi sanskaar ki baat mante toh itna mess up nahi hota par ab job hi I want to make my present and future better aura b humein kewal court proceedings k liye hi call karna , kyunki tumhari yaad aayegi toh kamzor pad jayenge..(saying this she cut the call and cried loud)

Soon ragini composed herself and called dadi and told her about her decision and convenced her somehow not to create a new mess of it)

Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah
Aayat Meaning: Verses from Quran are called "Aayat"
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Rivayat ki tarah


Ragini after all the phone calls gets out of her bed and gets ready n fills her pation with sindoor and wears her mangalsutra and prepares her breakfast. She then sits on the breakfast table but for 15- 20 minutes she felt perplexed that what to do next as if waiting for laksh to come and serve her...

Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Marne talak rahegi
Marne talak rahegi
Tu aadat ki tarah

Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
O tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah




In MM . after some time laksh comes down and takes his breakfast. Soon after finishing it he keeps his plate in sink and serves another plate and for a few mintues he feels confused at his action , as if waiting for ragini to come and have it..

Ye teri aur meri
Mohabbat hayat hai
Har lamha isme jeena
Muqaddar ki baat hai

Kehti hai ishq duniya jise
Kehti hai ishq duniya jise
Meri jaan-e-mann
Iss ek lafz mein hi chhupi qaaynaat hai..




Soon ragya realize that they r no more with each other and they get teary eyed. Ragini kept her head on the table and cried her heart out where as laksh composes himself and leaves for the office..

Mere dil ki raahaton ka tu
Zariya ban gayi hai
Teri ishq ki mere dil mein
Kayi Eid mann gayi hai


In the evening laksh for a few minutes felt uncomfortable on his bed as if waiting for ragini to come and fight with him , ragini there could not sleep she feels like something in her day is incomplete as if waiting for laksh to come and irritate her.

This realization of being away from each other brings tears in their eyes and they sleep with wet lashes ...

Tera zikr ho raha hai
Tera zikr ho raha hai
Ibaadat ki tarah

Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
O tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah

Hmm...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. I hope laksha will realize soon his feeling and go to ragini to bring her back. I want ragini become successful in her life. Waiting for next update.

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