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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute

Hey...that song have my name!

hehe then jiyado read the next parts as soon as i post it will have ur name as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting teaser. Laksha missing ragini wavv. I want him to realize importance of ragini in his life. Waiting for next update. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi mate... Hmmm I need time to read the whole parts... Will you give me that time read the prologue it was awesome.. Liked it...

Love you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow very nice teaser..loved it😳😳..waiting fr the update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hi mate... Hmmm I need time to read the whole parts... Will you give me that time read the prologue it was awesome.. Liked it...

Love you...

Sure pls take ur time and read all the 11 parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc teaser.
Cont soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please post the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi, everyone sorry for the late update i had a sudden exam .. so without irritating u more here is the update.. pls do go through it and leave ur comments...

Part-12

A month later-

Laksh was standing on the window of his room cluching ragini's picture close to him..

Laksh pov-

Ragini tum kun chali gayi mujhe chodh kar. Kitni bar.. kitni bar call kiya par tumnee toh ek bar bhi baat nahi suni. Har din tumhe kitne call karta hoon aur tum ho .. roz sochta hoon ki aaj toh phone par baat karogi, par nahi, tum .. tum toh itni naraz lagti ho ki bas ek hi bat puchti ho ki divorce papers sign kiye ya nahi... .. Kya ek bar bhi meri puri baat nahi sun sakti, ek bar bhi nahi.. mujhe nahi pata pyar kya hota h , kesa hota h .. aur yeh mein tumse nahi keh sakta ki I love u cause iss mamle mein bahut kacha hoon Darta hoon kehte hue ki I love u kyunki tumhe nahi kho sakta.. IDK what love is , but what I know is ki I need u, zaroorat ho tum meri, adat ho , lat ho.. nasha ho.. dekho na yeh karma jesa tumne chodha tha wesa hi h ha dress meri wese hi rakhi jese tum rakhti thi.. Tumne bina kahe meri zindagi badaldi thi ragini.. mujh jese careless insan ko sudharne lagi thi..tumhe pata papa k bahut dantne p bhi roz office late jata tha, par jab tum aye toh roz aarti karti thi aur I used to get up early in the morning... The sad part is I never noticed oit nor valued it until.. until u left me pls pls iss stupid insan k paas ajao na Pls ... Aacha pyaar mat karna par sirf ladne hi aajao.. Tumse bina lade neend nahi aati h mujhe.. acha I promise jab tak tum nahi kahogi tab tak room mein nahi aaunga... aur pata h tumhari sexsy si kamar.. uske bina khana phika lagta h..(laughs a little).. Pls ragini I will never again hurt u.. I am a duffer and stupid in terms of Love.. u loved me so much.. but I did'nt resipocated.. but this time I want to love u back.. love u back .. pls ek bar meri baat toh sunlo.. ek bar.. pls ek bar give ur Laksh a chance.. Bhagwan ji.. Pls help me ... pls.. mere saath dusri baar bhi who mat karna jo pehle kiya tha.. iss bar jee nahi paunga.. ls help me...

In Mumbai-

Ragini is sitting on her bed cluching laksh's photograph close to her .. talking to him..

Ragini POV-

Laksh ji! Aap kyun un papers par sign kar dete? Kyun roz- roz, bar- bar call karte h ?.. jante h aapki call ko ignore karna kitna mushkil h humare liye.. humein kyun kamzor kar rahe ho aap.. pls humein akela chodh deejiye na.. Door kar dijiye nah apne aapse .. Hum aapke gunehgar h.. aapke parivar k.. sanskaar k .. aapke bhai k gunehgar h.. dhokha diya h app sabko aur sabse bada aapko.. Mazak udaya h.. apke vishwas ka .. aapke jasbaton ka.. yahi huari saza h .. karmon ka fal h.. infact I don't deserve to be here .. I should be in a jail.. I am a criminal.. laksh ji u deserve a better life and a better and more compatible life partner.. laksh ji! Humein Ragini ko apni zindagi se nikal bahar keejiye.. I derive to alone to rot here all my life.. u .. u should leave me and Move on .. and I am sure u will soon find a perfect match.. a person.. who will love .. who is not a criminal.. who is good.. who derives to be with u.. who can be ur solemate...( saying this she chokes and cries .. cries bitterly, she had anger, rage and disgust for herself.. for stooping so so sso.. low..)

In MM-

Laksh was talking to ragini's photo when sanskaar came running..

Sa(excited)-Lucky... Lucky..

L(composing himself turned to sanskaar)- Haan Bhai

Sanskaar hug laksh..

L(shocked)- Kya hua sanskar

Sa- tere Liye good news h

L(reaking the hug)- Mein chacha banana wala hoon kya

Sa- Shut-up.. IDIOt.. wese wali good news nahi, Yeh dekh(shows him some papers)

L- Yeh kya h

Sa- Mumbai. Ek project k liye maheshwari karma nad sons k kisi ek owner ko Mumbai jana h.. so u can go and bring Chachi too

L- really.. wese kya yeh baat sach h chacha - chichi wali..

Sa(turning red)-Nope, mene toh wese hi bol diya taki...

l- Taki jab champ aaye toh uski chichi usko mile

sa( folding his hands+ smile)- Shut up

L(teasing)- Sharma mat .. aur tu nah thoda time na ghar zada raha kar.. kyunki mujhe iss bar ghar par ragini ko tang karne m ein ek chotepartner ki zaroorat h..

Sa( going out)- Chal .. bakwas band kar aur project p kam kar.. pehle meri bhabhi toh la phir tere partner ki bari..

L- all the best

Sanskaar turns to him giving him a sharp glare..

L- mujhe toh karde..

Sanskaar ( smiling)- all the best..

Main khoya toh dhoondne na aaiyo
Chupke se ik khwaab mein jaaiyo
Honthon ki sat se mujhe bulaiyo

All the pain in Laksh's heart was lost, what all was now left was his happy smiling heart.. it was after so long that he was smiling .. he was really happy.. his eyes were smiling .. today he really and badly needed those rasogullas .. but he had to wait for ragini to make them..

L(holding her pic)- Ragini I'm coming...

Yahin hoon main
Yahin hoon main
Kahin na gaya tujhe chhod ke main

Suddenly it strats.. raining.. Laksh was so excited, that left the file in his room ran down stairs. He opened his arms as if asking this cool air to hug him.. And transport his love to ragini.. he let himself get drenched.. he let each raindrop touch him and felt their touch as if asking them to take his touch to ragini.. he felt them as if they carried her touch ..

L(bending on his knees)- ragini.. I am coming..
Yahin hoon main
Yahin hoon main
Jiya hoon tujhe hi toh odh ke main

Ragini who had slept crying cluching laksh's pic close to her heart, with wet lashes.. had a sudden, unknown smile on her face .. may be the weather conveyed its message or it was her heart that unknowingly heard Laksh's words

Hansna tu meri hansi
Karna wo zidd kabhi
Anjaani unhi adaaon se
Aankhein moond kar kabhi
Jee lena tu khwaab sabhi
Liye the jo meri baahon mein

Next Mrng in Mumbai ragini woke up so fresh and so happy after a month.. her tears vanished and her ... heart was so happy that it felt like dancing and not beating...

The wind entering from the open window of her room felt like laksh had sent them .. it felt like having his fragrance.. having his touch..

Jab yaad mein mera naam le
Tere bol ban jaaunga
Bahaane se tere lab chhu loonga
Naa hoke bhi ho jaaunga

Thinking this she picked up laksh's photo next to her bed and started revolving holding it.. she was jumping like a kid, like a mad person .. doing this she slipped on the bed.. and a memeory of laksh pecking her lips came into her mind.. her cheeks turned red at this..

Kehne dil ki baat tu aaiyo
Aankhon se phir sab keh jaaiyo
Mere ansune geet tu gaaiyo

There laksh's flight left the airport .. his avident smile and excitement was visible.. his eyes were like thirsty.. they were burning for having a glance of her..

Yahin hoon main
Yahin hoon main
Kahin na gaya tujhe chhod ke main
Yahin hoon main
Yahin hoon main
Jiya hoon tujhe hi toh odh ke main

2hrs later ragini got ready as well as laksh's flight landed.. it was still an hour for her to leave.. and she decide to complete her pooja.. but all her toughts were out of her control today.. they were wandering around him and this time it made her happy..

Dooriyan jitni hon, ho jaane de
Faasley naa rahein
Manzilein mill jaayein
Jo bhi kho jaane de
Raaste sang chalein

Laksh decided to go to her place.. Asap.. he took a taxi and moved to his destination..ragini went to prepare her breakfast and accidently prepared, it for 2 instead of only her.. she diid not realize it while preparing ... nor serving..

Jab raat koi na dhale
Subah main ban jaaunga
Bahaane se tere lab chhu loonga
Naa hoke bhi ho jaaunga

After making the breakfast she soon decided to place it on the dinning table.. when she realized that she unknowlingly prepared it fopr two .. her eyes were on the door as if waiting for him to come and join her.. but remembering her past .. she started feeling sad.. tears started to blur her vision..when

Tanhai mein naa ghabraiyo
Milne ek lamhe tu aaiyo
Us lamhe mein thehar sa jaaiyo

Her door bell rang.. she ran to the door and opened it.. her happiness knew no bonds seeing him .. her laksh on the door.. laksh had tears in his eyes seeing her.. her immediately hugged her.. a tight bone crushing hug.. ragini was shocked at this hugged him back.. they both had tears in their eyes...

Yahin hoon main
Yahin hoon main
Kahin na gaya tujhe chhod ke main
Yahin hoon main
Yahin hoon main
Jiya hoon tujhe hi toh odh ke main




Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful
Laksh was missing ragini badly,and ragini was also sad for her past deeds
Well executed.
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Beautiful

Laksh was missing ragini badly,and ragini was also sad for her past deeds
Well executed.
Thanks for the pm

thanks for reading

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