~SwaSan Drabble Series by Shona and Anna~ Page 16 ~New Drabble Updated

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Anna + Shona, It's superb!

Yaar haad hain! Whenever they tried to come close, something or other happen!

Don't know when it will happen Bt till then I don't mind this kind of situation ;)

God, you should write more.

Plz update soon & Love you both (As per Sanskaar's rule: No Sorry, No Thank You; So Love You) for the PM :)

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Goldie

@Goldie93

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Wowow..amzing..arrey yaar kash hojaata yaar in dono k beechsab kuch 😆😆 khair np..nxt part main hojaye..😳continue soon

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

❤️Anna and Shona❤️

LOVE YOU GUYS I SWEAR I AM DYING RIGHT NOW...

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

WHAT WAS YOUR GOAL WHEN WRITING THIS ... TRYING TO KILL US WITH LAUGHTER

LET ME TELL YOU IT WORKED ... BUT I HAD TO COME BACK TO LIFE TO WRITE A REVIEW OF SUCH A MASTERPIECE 👏

haiii ... sanskar and swara are never going to get things done in the MM ... kutch nah kutch toh garbar ho jatha hai 😆

Might as well sent them to there ... honeymoon SWEET in the names of our dear suju 😆

You two got me so badly ... I was like abb zainab chalo kutch kutch toh hoga * grabs popcorn* and gets ready for a blush-a -ton ☺️☺️☺️

but nooo 😆😆😆

its not SRK's movie its SWASAN's soo

kutch kutch ho tha nahi hai 🤣

( seriously I loved this more than I probably would have enjoyed seeing them you know *ahem ahem*)😳😳😳

The part when the bed breaks i knew that the MM clan would some how show up 😆

I seriously loved UTTRA AND SUJATHA

"what have you done ... that breaks such a durable bed"

🤣🤣🤣

I really want this to happen...it will be a dream come true

👏👏👏

Again thanks for the Pm ... ( maaf kar dena shanky )

and the amazing drabble ...it was absolutely amazing and so enjoyable ... cant wait for more.

❤️

ZAINAB

Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Awesome story but poor swasan it seems everything was working against their consummation even if dey were desperate for it. Families interruption was hilarious but really sweet to see the strength of their relationship and understanding when dey decided it wasn't the nite for them.although in most parts this piece was meant to be lighthearted which u did achieve but it also gave such great insight into swasans understanding and love for each other. I loved it, thks for the pm.

Edited by taniks - 9 years ago