Unres wow nita this was fantastic , I had great expections for this conversation but u by far exceeded them. Reading their the conversation it just struck me hiw beautifully u orchestrated it and u gave this convo between them such significance not only cos it discusses their relationship and way forward but it shows swaras trust in sanskaar and although she ,unconciously is treating him like her soulmate and life partner. A girl like swara who is so good at keeping her pyn and thoughts buried just so others are not hurt , its difficult to talk to just anybody abt such a sensitive issue especially when it involves family. Its is this trust and honesty that only comes in front ones life partner without fear of retribution.poor swara having to live her life with what others want for not her but ragini, its not easy not to resent this forced upon her life but as every girl needs a best friend and most off us r fortuate enuf to find it in our sisters. It is Pari's understanding and patience to listen to her baby sisters shattered dreams and hopes without condemnation , scolding or chiding and her well thought out great advice that opened swaras world on choosing to make it work fir her happiness. A sister is a bond that starts at birth and not even death can break it but as a sister if 3 younger ones and one older it comes with great responsibility and if nurtured well it us a girls greatest treasure.so as a sister i appreciate ur take on Pari's and swaras relationship and the careful way in which u carved it, Nita.
Sanskaar , a wonder ful man ( a man afta my own heart if it wasnt already taken ) he is so strong in His silence, u create such powerful aura around him . he is so patient in is silence listening attentively yet giving her the assurance to open up with out fear or discomfort that was fabulous , which wife doesn't want her husband who listens to her pour out her deepest fears , disappointments and shattered dreams with such patience, nycly done Nita.swaras pyn and elation after learning to play the guitar and tennis really tugged on the heart strings , well depicted dere.while reading this i cant help but draw comparsion between swasans relation and raglak, swasan marriage although arranged compared to the love marriage of raglak have a far strong foundation for their relationship which is supported so strong by the pillsrs if understanding and honesty. While swasan have taken many baby steps in their lives wuth each other it makes fir giant leaps in their relationship , raglak in my opinion have yet to strike ground. Sanskaar explainatiin if his concept of love and his willingness to wait for it to happen was fabulous yet he even made peace with abandoning it so that his cousin can marry wuth a small compensation of kavita being a good person or so he thought until she eloped.He was really sweet in explaining His decision to marry kavita , I can't explain it but there's sumthing abt that part of the convo that seems a little more than it is I can't put my finger on it maybe u can explain it nita.u created such great undertones in their interaction so far that gives such great hints of them having a great journey ahead . sanskaars decision so well thought out for their future with a mature handling and great responsibility towards swaras happiness and comfort. Sanskaar bless his heart is already giving swara first priority and cementing her in His life although he us now doing it unconsciously without acknowledging the slight entry she's making into His heart , very subtle but so poignant. Thanking you for explain ing swaras not expecting much from her father and his non existing parenting , this really shows how much sanskaars presence in her life is appreciated and how much more his stance off support to her is significant in the road ahead which bodes well for them. This conversation is really a make or break off their marriage and the outcome of it was two strong individuals going forth off their own free will to create a solid relationship with each other.I know u will try and to give sanskaar an opportunity to make up for swaras shattered dreams. The elders if these families are responsible for these two girls pyn , stolen childhood and broken dreams by the actions and non actions to stop the injustices served to them by one woman's obsession , manipulation and pride. Its criminal of Ap to have been given free rein to ruin her child who was forced to grow with her mother's priming her from princess to queen which is only gonna be a hinderabce in ragini life.Ap is kind off delusional with a sharp cunningness pushing her child to conform to her iron rule and it seems there's nothing genuine abt her , I hate that she wouldn't compliment swaras food bcos it was better than Raginis , very small minded person. I am disgusted by her .For the very first tym I was feeling bad for Ragini , I am shocked reading her story which u illustrated so vividly and painfully that it actually touched me. Poor ragini had no support from her father growing up with her poisoness mother it would be unnatural if she did have jealousy festering in her towards swara but commendable to u that she NVR acted on it until the keer incident which was a great backfire to her.her guilt of it and her envy for swara life turning out well was marvelously described.her understanding off not wanting what swara has and appreciating what us hers was well written Nita. U r an amazing writer but just how good I never truly understood until this chapter , it takes real talent for a writer to write such an unbiased story even though in ur heart of hearts u r swasan fan , that is true genius of u. I applaud ur skill and yr ability to write with impartiality not allowing ur personal preference to dominate the story.👏 Thank you for helping me look at ragini in a slightly different way . wonderful chapter great exceptations for the next.
I hope I was able to give this chapter the comment it deserves , nita
Edited by taniks - 9 years ago