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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Nita, I really enjoyed this chapter my dear. You explained so well, the intertwined upbringing of Swara and Ragini...and how, in a way, this constant tagging along with each other has worked to the detriment of both of them. Swara was the person who perhaps suffered more---she never got the freedom to pursue the interests she liked, the hobbies she wanted. It was always activities which the shy and withdrawn Ragini wanted to participate in. But Swara was forced to go along, to give company to her cousin. And what a very complex person Annapurna is! She was forced by Durga Prasad to give importance to Swara too; to make sure she also participates in those classes. But she always ensured the teachers praised Ragini even though Swara was the better student!

Poor Swara---she wasn't even particularly interested in those classes, but still she did her best in them and went along just to keep Ragini company---and despite that, she excelled in them.

Ragini--well, she is in a sense, as complex as her mother! She wanted Swara's company, but she was also consumed with jealousy at the thought of her cousin outperforming her always. So in a sense, Swara being tagged with her all the time, worked against her sentiments and interests as well.

This suppressed jealousy went on for so long, that when she saw Swara smiling at Sanskaar, she couldn't help feeling a pang, that Swara had once again done so well for herself---by getting married to a guy who was deemed to be perfect marriage material. Despite the fact that Ragini loves Lakshya, she is still jealous of Swara!

Hopefully, she would manage to get a grip on her emotions, at least now that Lakshya is giving her so much attention, wooing her in a very romantic manner. Ragini does appear to have a conscience here, she doesn't hate Swara, just has a lot of issues to deal with.

I loved the maturity and perspective which Sanskaar showed, and the way Swara confessed her emotions to him. So they have decided to give their marriage a try as friends and roommates. 😉 😊 If they develop feelings for each other, well and good; or else Sanskaar is willing to set her free, and has assured her he would manage the explanations to their families. It would be an interesting journye indeed for them: a girl who perhaps, does not believe in love; and a guy who believes that soulmates are rare to come by, and is prepared to settle for falling in love with the person he marries.

It would be a fascinating journey towards the goal of him realizing that Swara is indeed his soulmate; and Swara in turn, realizing that she has come to love him so deeply. 😳 waiting very eagerly to read more, to see how you being them to that realization.

Loads of Love,

---Viji
Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry forget this reserved post...😭
Posted at pg 88..😭

Loved it dear...chapter 6 is fantaboulous...
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres wow nita this was fantastic , I had great expections for this conversation but u by far exceeded them. Reading their the conversation it just struck me hiw beautifully u orchestrated it and u gave this convo between them such significance not only cos it discusses their relationship and way forward but it shows swaras trust in sanskaar and although she ,unconciously is treating him like her soulmate and life partner. A girl like swara who is so good at keeping her pyn and thoughts buried just so others are not hurt , its difficult to talk to just anybody abt such a sensitive issue especially when it involves family. Its is this trust and honesty that only comes in front ones life partner without fear of retribution.poor swara having to live her life with what others want for not her but ragini, its not easy not to resent this forced upon her life but as every girl needs a best friend and most off us r fortuate enuf to find it in our sisters. It is Pari's understanding and patience to listen to her baby sisters shattered dreams and hopes without condemnation , scolding or chiding and her well thought out great advice that opened swaras world on choosing to make it work fir her happiness. A sister is a bond that starts at birth and not even death can break it but as a sister if 3 younger ones and one older it comes with great responsibility and if nurtured well it us a girls greatest treasure.so as a sister i appreciate ur take on Pari's and swaras relationship and the careful way in which u carved it, Nita.
Sanskaar , a wonder ful man ( a man afta my own heart if it wasnt already taken ) he is so strong in His silence, u create such powerful aura around him . he is so patient in is silence listening attentively yet giving her the assurance to open up with out fear or discomfort that was fabulous , which wife doesn't want her husband who listens to her pour out her deepest fears , disappointments and shattered dreams with such patience, nycly done Nita.swaras pyn and elation after learning to play the guitar and tennis really tugged on the heart strings , well depicted dere.while reading this i cant help but draw comparsion between swasans relation and raglak, swasan marriage although arranged compared to the love marriage of raglak have a far strong foundation for their relationship which is supported so strong by the pillsrs if understanding and honesty. While swasan have taken many baby steps in their lives wuth each other it makes fir giant leaps in their relationship , raglak in my opinion have yet to strike ground. Sanskaar explainatiin if his concept of love and his willingness to wait for it to happen was fabulous yet he even made peace with abandoning it so that his cousin can marry wuth a small compensation of kavita being a good person or so he thought until she eloped.He was really sweet in explaining His decision to marry kavita , I can't explain it but there's sumthing abt that part of the convo that seems a little more than it is I can't put my finger on it maybe u can explain it nita.u created such great undertones in their interaction so far that gives such great hints of them having a great journey ahead . sanskaars decision so well thought out for their future with a mature handling and great responsibility towards swaras happiness and comfort. Sanskaar bless his heart is already giving swara first priority and cementing her in His life although he us now doing it unconsciously without acknowledging the slight entry she's making into His heart , very subtle but so poignant. Thanking you for explain ing swaras not expecting much from her father and his non existing parenting , this really shows how much sanskaars presence in her life is appreciated and how much more his stance off support to her is significant in the road ahead which bodes well for them. This conversation is really a make or break off their marriage and the outcome of it was two strong individuals going forth off their own free will to create a solid relationship with each other.I know u will try and to give sanskaar an opportunity to make up for swaras shattered dreams. The elders if these families are responsible for these two girls pyn , stolen childhood and broken dreams by the actions and non actions to stop the injustices served to them by one woman's obsession , manipulation and pride. Its criminal of Ap to have been given free rein to ruin her child who was forced to grow with her mother's priming her from princess to queen which is only gonna be a hinderabce in ragini life.Ap is kind off delusional with a sharp cunningness pushing her child to conform to her iron rule and it seems there's nothing genuine abt her , I hate that she wouldn't compliment swaras food bcos it was better than Raginis , very small minded person. I am disgusted by her .For the very first tym I was feeling bad for Ragini , I am shocked reading her story which u illustrated so vividly and painfully that it actually touched me. Poor ragini had no support from her father growing up with her poisoness mother it would be unnatural if she did have jealousy festering in her towards swara but commendable to u that she NVR acted on it until the keer incident which was a great backfire to her.her guilt of it and her envy for swara life turning out well was marvelously described.her understanding off not wanting what swara has and appreciating what us hers was well written Nita. U r an amazing writer but just how good I never truly understood until this chapter , it takes real talent for a writer to write such an unbiased story even though in ur heart of hearts u r swasan fan , that is true genius of u. I applaud ur skill and yr ability to write with impartiality not allowing ur personal preference to dominate the story.👏 Thank you for helping me look at ragini in a slightly different way . wonderful chapter great exceptations for the next.
I hope I was able to give this chapter the comment it deserves , nita



Edited by taniks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Love you too Nita🤗

And please don't keep apologizing about your updates not being upto expectations .
Your story is awesome and your an awesome writer too.
I still can't believe this is your first story.You write like a well established writer.
Edited by Vini224 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nita
Again a superb update
Story of swaragini was very well written 👏
For the first time i felt bad for ragini 😆
Ragini is right in her point
Loved swasan convo sanskar believe in love 😳
Swasan understanding is awesome
Hope they soon fall in love 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super update dr...just loved it so much. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Un-Res comment on Chap 5, on Page 75, Nita darling! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update👏 loved swasan conversation waiting when they start fall in love each other & where there logic go😉 thanks for pm. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Un-Res my comment on Chap 6 on Page 79, Nita darling. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
nita dear only one word "SUPERB" 🤗

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