SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 41

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Thank you Vini for your lovely comment. I always get so happy to see you Res right away. And your comments make me so happy 😃. You feel this one was short 😔. Will try to make the next chapter long.

Love,

Nita

very nice nice to see sanskaar fighting for swara .

Hi Nita...
Read all parts of story together.

I loved it.
The way you portrayed every scene, character, situations, their reaction is so much captivating.

I am happy to see the forced relationship turning into understanding and friendly.
Though it is not love yet but I'm sure we will soon witness this shade of their story too.

I also liked the fact that you didn't make Lakshya whole negative here.I had liked SanLak bond in show at start but then you know where did story go..

I am happy to read it here.

And yeah your writing is also very good. I liked it.
Thank you for pm.
Waiting eagerly for next part 😊 😊

I have only 1 chapter left...I will not tell you what I think about this yet😎

I will finish it, then I will throw my tomatoes 🤓

OK. I will just write a new comment here. Forget the res. comment few pages back.

Let me clear it for you, I WILL NOT THROW TOMATOES AT YOU...But give you a HUGGG🤗 I didn't know you had this side talent of yours. You sure are creative dear. Forget about vmz, this one is so creative👏⭐️

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I really had to make sure to not confuse myself with the characters and to NOT to think about the show. Because you have made some completely diff family trees. It is a big change, but I'm interested in that.

First of all I really LOVE the idea of Sanskar being the oldest and him having so much responsibility's. I actually can imagine him easily like that, and being mature and all. Thumbs up for that. I Love how he have to take care of his sister, and the rest of the family. I like that.

FORCED into marrying a stranger? 😲 I would have not punched, but killed Lakshyaji😡. and they did even forgive him? Like hell NOOO.
Lakshyaji is a positive character for now, I will hold my anger for now, and lets see how his character develops.

Ragini is kinda making me nervous 😳. Some bells are ringing in my ears. Ohh yaaa more is to come from her side.


Swara is always...and she just have to be the one who is always sacrificing herself. Ohh yaaa, it is in her nature I guess. But I do like that, because if not, she wouldn't marry a stranger. And SwaSan wouldn't happen so soon in this story.

Pari and Adersh: I love this couple, and their positive interaction with SwaSan. And she being her older sister? wow a great idea Nita. I specially LOVED the scene with the baby..Howww Sanskar...you see even the baby wants to be held by Sanskar😆


The SwaSan scenes are cute, and yet romantic. I can't wait for their relationship to develop. Ohh I can't wait🤪 I want a pull into the wall scene Nita😡😆


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My dear Nita, you sure are one creative girl. I loved this story, and I'm really interested, and want to know what happens next...Family Rasms, which means some SwaSan scenes☺️

Originally posted by: NitaReid

See i love Ragya and i will shower my love on both of them equally 😉. But i love Sanlak way more than Swaragini , so you know who is going to keep getting better and better at being good 😈.

Even I like Sanlak compared to Swaragini. Please do shower your love, it will help me vent out some of my love too.

Poor Swara there was no punches as she wanted. Husband and wife is an distant discussion to them but still as you said they slowly started to like each other company and becoming good acquaintance.😉 Swara saved Sanskar from his dilemma 😆

Long journey dies start with the first step. They have taken just that. Now they will feel less awkward with each other.

Poor Guy fell in love at first sight .. second night he might get lucky who knows he still got a day to convince is wife 😆

Wasn't that car journey some kind of hint?

I am happy you liked it . Every one know it they are perfect together 😉

Since Thanks are not allowed , i hug you tighter too 🤗for such an lovely comment and for being the ever encouraging person who makes me feel lot happier about my writing😃 Love, -Nita

What are friends for? 😳

As i said earlier i will try to start tonight .. No guarantees though on when i will be able to update it. I will let you know if i was about to update though😉. i try to make the next one longer 😊

Like I said take your time. But not too much time😉

Originally posted by: sarra0

I am slow but i do get there..thanks for PM 🤗...And i love that you read it ,waking up to find your comment makes me so very happy 😆

Aw loved the bonding between sanskar and baby and jealous adarsh was cute...but sanskaar is sanskaar in anything he has a natural gift...and alreasy shiwing he will b perfect father he has already part farthered the idiot...Part fathered the idiot indeed😆, well Sanskar will be a perfect father 😎

Swara imagination 😆😆 soon as her imagination started running riot i knew no slapping, punching, hitting, biting, hair pulling, eye gauging was going to happen...even in this she is worried about being blamed for thingss...maks one wonder how often she has been made a scapegoat by her uselss family? That she is worried she will b made to b at fault when clearly not her doing...Well i made him part fathered the idiot as you said and getting into fight with Lakshya like on the show wont match that description of Sanskar being the head of the house or the mature one for the matter. So sorry to not fullfill your dream . Well i will try to cover Swara backstory by next chapter or chapter 6 max

Pari, adarsh, fate, us we all know swasan r destined to b.

Sanskaar angry on swara behalf at being duped..its nice to c the little friendship starting between swasn...ill have to settle for sanskaar getting over his anger at his own duping...I am happy to know you are liking swasan friendship ..

so ragani green eyed monster isnt spared...she didnt like to c swara sanskaar happy...y shud she care she got wat she wanted laksh...it was her who refused to give HAQ to him...and may do so again tonight 🤣🤣...her madness starts b4 lucky was asked to apologise to swara..there is just something wrong in her make up...and laksh will b as clueless as b4...Well how can i spare Ragini, She is my favourite villian in the show. I try to keep her less evil and more HAQ minded . Everyone seems so worried for lakshya whether he will get his HAQ or not 🤣🤣

I cant wait to c protective angry sanskaar when swara is at risk...and determine wat sujju is like with swarz compared to ragani...Suju is coming up in the next chapter and i am seriously in dilemma whether to make her call Swara ladoo or not after you reminded me about the scene😈

Swara doesnt hold being forced to marry against her family...ur right saint swara...Swara only wants to punch Lakshya, Family all forgiven. but unlike the show i feel not make Swara think her family is right but rather it just she accept them with all there flaws😆

Ah u r trying to divert my attention so i stop asking laksh to b hit and instead ask for ragani to b tortured 🤣🤣 its not going to work i will just ask for multiple people to get hit...and list is long enough already...Is it working 😉. So now you are going to ask Swara to slap Ragini next 😆

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Nita,

So baby Adarsh junior (for lack of name in the instant case😆) bonds so well with Sanskaar that he does not want to go back to papa 😆😆 Well Sanskaar is irresistible - even new-borns now know it.I come up with new character and i should name them too, even i am tired of writing baby , so for now i use Adarsh junior😉. Sanskar is irresistible indeed😊

Swara has an over active imagination - so she was afraid that the confrontation between Lakshya and Sanskaar would end in blows and punches😉. But then she is actually afraid of Ragini's reaction and that AP would somehow find Swara to be responsible for the whole fiasco - some flashbacks would reveal why, I guess.😲 Well i covered Sanskar relationship with his family, will try to cover Swara relationship and why she is thinking along the lines soon.😊

Thankfully Sanskaar was not as belligerent as Swara imagined. Cute how they bond over every interaction, especially Sanskaar saying that he would ensure Swara gets a chance to punch Lakshya.😉 I am happy to know you liked it. Yeah Swara says i will kill laksh to get Sanskar smiling, Sanskar saying he will let Swara punch Laksh to get Swara smiling . You see Soulmates😉

Sanskaar has always been a big brother and a sort of father figure, too, but now he also has to behave like Swara's husband. As usual his stance was impeccable - he accepts Lakshya's lame, in-the-name-only apology for himself but firmly insists that he apologise properly to Swara 👏👏 Yes Sanskar need to be perfect father figure, brother and now Husband too 😆

Ragini has mixed emotions - is not as happy as one imagines she should be, after all, she is married to the one she loves. Further, during the journey to the hospital, she is apprehensive as to what Swara's reactions, regarding the way Lakshya lied to get them married, would be, and then she is actually jealous that Swara and Sanskaar are already sharing a warm bond - ice gathering in her soul😡😡 What does she want??? Well it just Ragini😆, She loves Swara when she choose too and feel jealous when she choose too😉 Love -Nita

Do update soon.

Love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nita dear. ..🤗 🤗

Owing my travel, am not able to give a detailed comment my dear. But I really liked this chapter. Swara's imagination of Sanskaar throwing punches at Lakshya was hilarious. 😊 Liked the SanLak conversation, and the way Lakshya apologized to both Sanskaar (though it was, as you put it, a lame apology 😉), and his more sincere and heartfelt apology to Swara, which he made after Sanskaar clearly told him how he had erred. Lakshya's intentions were not bad, though the method he chose was rather deceitful. But I think all of us would forgive him since he brought together SwaSan. 😆

Wonder why Ragini is feeling jealous? Does she not want her cousin to be happy? 😕

Looking forward to the next chapter

Lots of Love

Viji

Originally posted by: taniks

Chapter 2:

Omw wat a chapter this was , u have done so many things right in this chapter that irks me in da serial . u removed swaras rose tinted glasses on her view off so many ppl in this story and yet u kept the interest level still very high... Thank you so much Sabarshni 🤗. Swara will remain swara but slight modification from me on how she should view her family instead of as you aptly put rose tinted glasses. Well she is too good to hurt her family but doesnt mean she should just love them thinking there are saints😉

. Loved that u touched on that most irritating habit of ppl at Indian weddings , making a girl feel inferior cos she is not married.nice explanation for park and adarshs ignorance of swasans marriage.Indian wedding can easily turn into a nightmare if you met the amazing set of relatives you desperately try to avoid😆. Well i miss lot of weddings for reasons smaller than that and Adarsh had a good one .😉

Swara seeing shekhar for what he truly is is most appreciated by me , I loved that she has no expectations from him and she has accept him what he really is. Shomi character is also well known to swara there's no illusions on her part , really well done that u show this flaw shomi has when it comes to the love for her daughter vs her loyality to the man in her life, in the serial its her husband , here u changed it to her brother but u still got to the crux of her character. Swara relationship with her father is strained because she would dream of a perfect family and yet Shekhar happens to be her father😆. She loves him too but she has no expectation from him after all she lived with him for 24 years, she should know him by now. Shomi character wow amazing connection you found between shows Shomi and Shomi in my SS. I cant take the credit since it was not intentional. But atleast DP is an awesome brother than Shekhar the husband😉

Liked that u gave laksh I bit of decency when he thought of sanskaar and postpone da wedding but then u still showed off his selfishness in the very next scenario , NYC display of his contrary nature. That what makes Lakshyaji so special, he will do everything for his family and end up hurting them more by his impulsive decisions

Ragini is creator of emotional blackmail and with her greatest weapon of tears , does swara even stand a chance of rejecting the propsal.DP runs true to his character always willing to sacrifice swara in the name of family prestige,DP might love Swara has is daughter but as you can see prestige come first to him . He is wired that way and also Swara didnt stand a chance against Ragini tears but she might have escaped if she gotten a chance to convince lakshya😉

love that in this story swara is not a blind bat where she acts like an ostrich just keep her head buried , she is a very smart cookie here when it comes to her families reality.great that u lifted the blame from swaras eyes which she heaped onto poor sanskasar, dey needed that to move forward in their relationship without any mu's creating problems for them. I hate MU , so i will try to clear them as quick as possible😆, Swara is not blind bat about her family but she is still very loyal to them that she will go through lot of suffering if it means she can keep them happy😃

U moulded and very vividly highlighted swaras beautiful nature here but once again I must compliment u in showing another facet of sanskaar , him being a gentle man accepting the proposal on hearing off swaras acceptance without even meeting her, he NVR wanted to feel the pyn of rejection , wonderfully written that part. Brilliant, little humor to break the tension and heal any ill feelings between swasan and now a proper allocation of blame by swara onto the real culprit was a good end to any mu's between as dey take another step towards closing the gap between them.very interesting , this story has captured me.loving how u bringing them closer and knitting a strong bond between them. Thanks for da pm and thus lovely story..Nothing unites two strangers like an common enemy😆. I am happy to know you loved this story dear 😃