SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 42

Originally posted by: taniks

Chapter 3:

Such an impactful chapter , their understanding and caring for each other had increases in leaps and bounds here I liked the fact swara felt that she had the right to feel betrayed by him during his telecon with laksh that was such a wifely reaction which he interpreted so well and gave

An explanation that soothed her.They might totally remain obvilous to the fact they are married but still they will keep expecting the other one to act like there life partner😉. So expected Sanskar to stand by her and was disappointed with the telecon. And Sanskar escaped because his explantion soothed her or Swara would have been totally angry😆

their comfort level with each other has beautifully depicted by Sanskaar confiding in her His deepest feelings and the major guilt that he carried even though hewas puzzled and surprised that he was able to open up to her after just knowing her for a few hours.amazing part was her ablity to see his vulnerability, pain , insecurity of losing his parents and the impact it had on the shaping and moulding of the relationships with his cousin , aunt and sister , her recognition of His strength and His capability as the head off the family.There are soulmates and they will have this connection that will make them comfortable doing certain things they didnt do it with someone else before, and that why Sanskar felt comfortable talking with her about his pain which he didnt do it with his own family or friends . Swara recognized just how much perfect is the guy she married😉

Her sister reaction to their union was unpredicable and sanskaar was a bit stunned that she was once play a role of cupid in their lives.I loved pari teasing them and both their reaction . The bonding between sanskaar and the baby is also so cutely increasing and this little tyke along with its aunt are working their way into sanskaars well guarded heart at a rapid speed. I am happy to know you liked it, the baby and her aunt are working there way up in rapid speed indeed😆. I want Pari to be the Sister ,Swara never got in the show. Someone who loves her unconditionally, someone who would tease her and someone who knows what good for her sister. I share a deep bond with my Sister and i hate Swaragini forced bond right now. So i had to make Swara get an awesome sister and somehow i cant make Ragini the awesome one, so it is pari instead😉

Again u highlighted so many different aspects of sanskaar and the depth of his character which makes him so uniquely special. I love swasan but sanskaar is an amazing character which I adore the most , he is just a total package. An awesome chapter and a fabulous narration , thank you for the pm.Really happy to know you love and adore Sanskar, he is an total package indeed😆. And thank you for your lovely comment and the compliments😳 .

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: taniks

Chapter 4 : well written and this story gets better with each update-Thanks i am happy to know you are liking it dear😃

. Swaras imaginations is just too good but what's interesting is her elevation of sanskar to her hero, nicely done Nita.After hearing his side of the story she deveoloped immense respect for this guy and it soon elevated her to think of him as her hero. Who would kick and punch the villians for her in this case it is poor Lakshya😆. Also she didnt want him to get hurt fighting for her , hence no punches from lakshya side in her imagination.😉

This chapter fabulously displays their stance for each other and the strength of their beautifully blossoming relationship . swaras thirst for justice is very quickly overshadowed by her concern for the damage a confrontation will do to her husbands relationship with His brother and its effects it will have on her families opinion on sanskaar , she is protective of him.Again here u have given swara such wisedom in knowing her close ones and she reads Ap really well only concern is that somehow She is blind to Ragini.Well Swara trust on Ragini is always blind, i explain why later in the upcoming chapter but she can guess read the other character pretty well. Swara is an responsible one and she wouldnt want her thirst of justice to leave lot of damage in the aftermath.😊

Ragini is confusing to me but then I suppose that should be expected since she us a confused soul , I found her awful reaction which she masks so quickly looking at her sister who is happy and comfortable with a man she married just so ragini could get her love, a bit of selfishness mixed with a lot of jealousy. And she will remain confusing 😆. Lot of jealousy indeed and i expalin why about Ragini too in the upcoming chapers. Gosh i have some many things i yet need to cover

Sankaars drawing the lines and cementing his support and protection of swara to Laksh was endearing which won a piece of swara since its the first tym she received unconditionally support from anybody but it also didn't go down well ragini .No one would like there husband apologizing and definitely not Ragini after all Lakshyaji is her true love. But She is not matured enough to understand that apology is very much needed and could very well mend SanLak relationship that would have gone haywire otherwise. Sanskar will remain Sanskar .That is just perfect

.I like that Laksh recognised his brothers relationship with swara has reached such importance that he won't allow any injustice by anybody on her. Laksh love and respect for Sanskaar outweighs his ego and selfishness in that scene ,I just hope thus is not destroyed by Ragini who is not happy with the turn swasan relationship is taking.I told it someone also i made Lakshya apolozise not only because i want to keep SanLak bond intact but also because i was getting irritated with the lakshya in the show who keep blaming everyone else instead of owning up to his mistakes. So since i wont get a decent apology from him on the show. He atleast should do it in the SS😆.

Here again u showing the depleting off the gap between them by creating such a comfort zone around each other that they can tease and joke and laugh which really adds to their ever increasing bond. Really loving the husband in sanskaar , superb chapter So happy to know you are liking there increasing bond. Thank you once again for such a lovely comment .

Love

Nita

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Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow chapter 4 was amazing the bonding of the baby and sanskaar a jealous aadarsh what a picture perfect moment..

Could not help wonder what swansan would be like a family...to cute with swara and her worry for sanskaar she has such a lived imagination...she just to funny. ..must say they had a perfect bond over the whole scenario...

Wonder why ragani was so jealous after all she wanted to marry lakhs right?

Please update soon super excited to see what happens during the rasam ceremony of swansan which the show has totally forgotten about...

Please PM me when next update is up...

Take care raz

Originally posted by: Vini224

Nita

Your update is not short but I feel that way only because I want to read more of your story .Its soo good.I just want to keep on reading.But I know how hard it must be for you to write and update so frequently.So it's just my greed talking😆

You asked me after chapter 3 who else I wanted to see in your story, so I want to see dear Maasi and her famous dialogue too if at all it's possible for you to include her.😃

Originally posted by: abika

Lovely update

Originally posted by: bharath91120

very nice nice to see sanskaar fighting for swara .

Thanks for the pm .😊😊

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi Nita...
Read all parts of story together.

I loved it.
The way you portrayed every scene, character, situations, their reaction is so much captivating.

I am happy to see the forced relationship turning into understanding and friendly.
Though it is not love yet but I'm sure we will soon witness this shade of their story too.

I also liked the fact that you didn't make Lakshya whole negative here.I had liked SanLak bond in show at start but then you know where did story go..

I am happy to read it here.

And yeah your writing is also very good. I liked it.
Thank you for pm.
Waiting eagerly for next part 😊 😊

Originally posted by: -Lana

I have only 1 chapter left...I will not tell you what I think about this yet😎

I will finish it, then I will throw my tomatoes 🤓

Originally posted by: -Lana

OK. I will just write a new comment here. Forget the res. comment few pages back. okay forgotten about it😆

Let me clear it for you, I WILL NOT THROW TOMATOES AT YOU...But give you a HUGGG🤗 I didn't know you had this side talent of yours. You sure are creative dear. Forget about vmz, this one is so creative👏⭐️...Aww Thanks Lana.. I give you a Hug for not throwing tomatoes at me🤗. Also one hug for the lovely compliment which is bit exaggerated i am not that creative but i take it 🤗

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I really had to make sure to not confuse myself with the characters and to NOT to think about the show. Because you have made some completely diff family trees. It is a big change, but I'm interested in that. Poor you, just started watching the show and i messed up the whole family tree. 😆

First of all I really LOVE the idea of Sanskar being the oldest and him having so much responsibility's. I actually can imagine him easily like that, and being mature and all. Thumbs up for that. I Love how he have to take care of his sister, and the rest of the family. I like that. Adarsh doesnt do anything in the show inspite of being the oldest, so moving him to friend zone and making Sanskar the oldest 😆. He is the head of the family after RP death ,so he matured a lot faster despite his young age.😉

FORCED into marrying a stranger? 😲 I would have not punched, but killed Lakshyaji😡. and they did even forgive him? Like hell NOOO.
Lakshyaji is a positive character for now, I will hold my anger for now, and lets see how his character develops.It was a huge mistake indeed and if i was there i would have killed him too😆. But everyone in Swara family were forcing her too.Lakshya manipulated Swara decision by his master plan,but if he said no to Swara when she went up to speak to him , her family would have forced her to get married to a stranger too😡

Ragini is kinda making me nervous 😳. Some bells are ringing in my ears. Ohh yaaa more is to come from her side. More is coming from her side indeed😈


Swara is always...and she just have to be the one who is always sacrificing herself. Ohh yaaa, it is in her nature I guess. But I do like that, because if not, she wouldn't marry a stranger. And SwaSan wouldn't happen so soon in this story.Swara is a sacrificing and since SwaSan happened it is Sanskar job to make sure she doesnt sacrifice too much for her family and Swara job to make sure Sanskar doesnt sacrifice too much for his family too😉

Pari and Adersh: I love this couple, and their positive interaction with SwaSan. And she being her older sister? wow a great idea Nita. I specially LOVED the scene with the baby..Howww Sanskar...you see even the baby wants to be held by Sanskar😆 I need a happy family in the ss, the one that doesnt always has some drama in there life. Pari and Adarsh will be that couple . Can we blame the baby it is Sanskar after all😆


The SwaSan scenes are cute, and yet romantic. I can't wait for their relationship to develop. Ohh I can't wait🤪 I want a pull into the wall scene Nita😡😆 I am happy to know you are liking SwaSan scene. Still watching the pulling in loop are we😆😆


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My dear Nita, you sure are one creative girl. I loved this story, and I'm really interested, and want to know what happens next...Family Rasms, which means some SwaSan scenes☺️...Nope no Rasam except Rasoi Rasam , i dont want you expectation to increase and then disappoint you so saying it before hand. I wanted to do all the Rasam but then i realized i have no idea about them. So i dont want to spoil there culture with my version. But i still give plenty of SwaSan scenes a lollipop. Read it for that just like we watch the show for that ..