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Originally posted by: Amrtina

Awesome epilog

Originally posted by: muktai

Hey Ahehli😊😊

Thank you so much dear.

You read it in a go? Seriously...😲

Take a bow then girl for such dedication, 👏sorry if parts bored you.😭

Yeah they suffered a lot but in the end they solved everything and emerged out more strong this time. Yeah 4 months have taken a toll on them. But as they say all is well if end is well.😊

You were crying? Then I will take it as compliment. Thank you girl.😳

Thank you so much for this dear wonderful feedback😊

Stay blessed-

Mukta

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Mukta,

The epilogue was - like one says - too beautiful for words.

Hey Nyna dear😊. Thank you so much for saying this, you are being so generous yaar.

You have an amazing way of bringing out their pain and anguish - both of them hurting and blaming themselves for hurting the other. Sanskaar is unforgiving of himself - he is convinced that he, of all the people, should have understood Swara's fears and should have waited patiently to explain things to her rather than blurt out his intial hurt feelings. Swara is also going though a bout of self-flagelation; that she was so quick to mistrust him despite his tremendous love and unshakeble trust.

You really feel so?😲 Then let me 🥳. Right now I'm

Both were at fault, they reacted according to situation in their momentary hurt, anger and as result suffered with the pain of separation for long four months. Sanskar is unforgiving of himself and somewhere that is justified too, don't you think so?

As he knew about her, how can he, who use to understand her unspoken words failed to notice her turmoil and even when she approached him asking the questions lingering in her mind. Swara on the other hand reacted the way situations occurred, anyone at her place would have reacted very same way, that's what I feel. No offence to anyone.

Both are so caught up blaming themselves for the misunderstandings that they actually wish the pain of separation as a just punishment for causing hurt to the other person.

Correctly said. They both were blaming themselves for being reason of other's pain, for hurting other, and as result went through pain of separation and were bearing that taking it as their punishment.

But thank God for Karmic intervention - finally the misconceptions are cleared and they find themselves and each other in the very room where they thought they had lost each other.

Finally everything cleared and they found each other in the very same room where they thought they had lost each other. And the rest is history of their togetherness.

And they decided to lose themselves in each other - which is a sort of finding themselves.

It was a beautiful story - please keep writing.

Thank you so much for finding it worthy enough of such wonderful compliment😳

love,

Nyna

Stay blessed and lots of love.

Mukta

PS: My apologies for the late response - was bogged down with professional and personal commitments.

Hey don't apologies for that. There is nothing to ask sorry for as I know how sometimes work can take toll. I am too busy with my personal and professional life. See how late I'm replaying.

Plus if I'm going to get such appreciation take as much as time you want I won't mind😉

Originally posted by: raaz19

Nice pm...loved every bit of it. ..

Wow was so nice to read both of them acknowledge there fear of loss...and how they tackled there insecurities was also beautiful...

Thanks for the pm...

Let me say the feeling of.love and loss was shared brilliantly...including the way sanskaar opened up about his insecurity and all...loved it the way he loved her from a long time...Indeed true soul mates. ...

Hope to read more of your stories soon..till then take care...

Razia

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome story dear loved it

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome..nice ending...

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Awesome Epilogue, i loved how you tied things up neatly and gave them an happily ever after. Totally loved it dear. Happy SwaSan makes me so happy too.

Love

Nita

Hey thank you Nita