SWASAN SS-A LOVE STORY AND A BET(Updated part-2 on page- 22)

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Hello everyone back with a new story on swasan. Half credit goes to prithi for the idea of the story.
Thanks prithi for giving me idea.

CHARACTER SKETCH

Sanskar Maheshwari- Owner of maheshwari industry. Very arrogant. Very serious about work. Hate love. He doesn't believe in love.

Lakshya Maheshwari- Sanskar's small brother who loves ragini alot. And wants to marry her. But he can't married to her due to his family because as his family says"Bada bhai ke rehte hue chota bhai kaise first shaadi kar sakta hai". He badly wants that his brother should married soon.

Ap and dp- Parents of sanskar and lakshya loved their children alot. Always support there decisions.

Swara bose- A girl who is full of love,fun,adventures and ready for any challenge. She loves her family alot. And her best friend is lakshya. And also she is personal assistant of sanskar maheshwari.

Ragini Bose- A sweet innocent girl who love lakshya but can't marry due to sanskar. She also want sanskar should marry soon.

Shekhar and sharmishta- Parents of swara and ragini. They kept there daughter like a princess.

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PART- 1


Maheshwari' Office
Canteen
Swara and ragini were chit chatting in canteen. Till then lakshya came with a sad face. Which makes swara and ragini tensed.
Swara- What happened lakshya? Why you are so sad,
Lakshya- Nothing yaar wohi old topic bhai is saying no to marriage. That's why i am sad and i can't marry ragini due to him.
Ragini- I am also tensed when he will get married so i can marry my lucky.
Lakshya- I am also waiting for that day. When that day came you will became my wife.
Swara- Guys stop this topic. Today is our first day in this office l. And we are talking why sanskar sir is not marrying. Please guys stop it.
Lakshya- Ha you will not understand our feeling swara.
Swara- Aere i am not saying that i known you want to marry with ragini but you can't marry her because of your big brother. But ab ismai meri kya fault hai.
Lakshya- I known swara i don't known when my brother will like a girl and marry her.
Swara(naughtily)- Vaise lakshya i think your brother will like boys only. You known na what i am saying.
Lakshya(angrily)- Ragini tell your sister stop to shut varna i will kill her.
Ragini- Swara shut up stop this rubbish.
Swara- Ok ok i am sorry. Vaise bhi sanskar sir ko koi aise hi nahi impress nahi kar payegi.
Lakshya- Acha how can you say that?
Swara(proudly)- Look lakshya every girl is not intelligent and beautiful like me so they cannot impress him. Now you understand what i am saying.
Lakshya(think something)- On that case now i challenge you aise karo kuch bhai fall for you.
Swara- What! Lakshya are you mad. He is my boss how can he fall for me. Aur vaise bhi this is my first day in office. Mujhe aaj hi job se fired nahi hona hai. So please i am not accepting it.
Lakshya- Hawww the great swara bose get scared. Ok no problem swara darr gayi.
Swara- Look lakshya i am not scared from anyone. Buttt
Lakshya- What but. Accept na you get scared from my bro. If you are not scared then accept my challenge.
Ragini- Lakshya are you in sense what rubbish things are you talking.
Lakshya- shhh i known ragini what i am talking. Please keep quite for sometime.
(To swara)- Now tell me swara are you ready for this challenge or you get scared.
Swara- I need to go washroom.
Swara leaves.
Ragini- Lakshya are you idiot why are you doing this. You known na sanskar hate love but you(she was cut off by lakshya)
Lakshya- I known what i am doing.
Ragini- If you known then stop this nonsense.
Lakshya- Why stop ragu? Whatever i am doing is right for us and for them also.
Ragini(confused)- Them means?
Lakshya- Them means sanskar and swara. I want them to became life partner.
Ragini- But they are so opposite from each other.
Lakshya- So what? You known na north pole attract South pole. So sanskar and swara are north pole and south pole. So they will attract each other and finally they will fall in love and then they will get married and then we will get married. As everybody says 'ek teer se do nishane"
Ragini- Are you sure laksh?
Lakshya- Yes i am sure ragu. But for now we only want swara to accept this challenge ok.
Ragini- Ok.
Till then swara also came from washroom.
Lakshya- So miss bose are you ready for the challenge.
Ragin(acted)- Swara are you sure to accept this challenge because everybody in this office knows that sanskar is so strict.
Swara(monologue)- I think ragini is right. I should ignore lakshya.
Swara(to ragini)- Yes ragini i think you are right.
Then lakshya and ragini thought that there acting have backfired so lakshya signal through his eyes to ragini.
"Stop your overacting please"
Ragini(to swara)- No.. ...no swara i think you should accept this challenge and show this lakshya that a swara bose can do anything. Show him that any boy can fall in love with you. If you can't then you known na lakshya will make fun of you.
Lakshya- Ya swara ragini is right i will make fun of you.(with evil laugh).
Swara- Ok i accept your challenge mr. Lakshya maheshwari.
Lakshya(handshake with swara)- Ok miss Swara bose i am also ready. If you won i will give you anything whatever you want. But if i won then you have give me whatever i want ok.
Swara- Ok done.
Till then a staff member came and informed them that sanskar sir are calling them in his cabin.
Swara,ragini and lakshya goes to sanskar cabin.

Sanskar's Cabin
All three together says- May i came in.
Sanskar- Yes come in.
All three enters the cabin and sanskar stands up from his chair and stands in front of them.
Lakshya- Bhai i am so excited na i can't tell you.
Sanskar- Excuse me lakshya i am not your brother.
Lakshya(shocked)- Bhai what are you saying?
Sanskar- Whatever i am saying is correct. I am your brother in maheshwari house or outside from this office. But inside the office i am your boss did you get that.
Lakshya- Yes bhai sorry yes sir.
Sanskar- Good . One more think i known you and ragini are in a relationship but no romance is allowed in this office. Both of you understand that.
Raglak(together)- Yes sir.
Sanskar- Good. (Indicating towards swara) who are you?
Swara- Sir i am swara bose your new p.a.
Sanskar- Oh thank god you came finally. Varna mujhe toh laga mujhe apna pa khud bana padega.
Swara(innocently)- Sir how can you became your own pa. You can became my pa if you resigned from your post.
Raglak(monologue)- Is she mad??
Sanskar gave him a angry glare to swara.
Swara- Sorry sir.
Sanskar- You should be. I hate jokes.
Swara- Sir can i ask one question?
Sanskar- Ya you can.
Raglak(monologue)- Ab kya puchne waali hai meri maa.
Swara- Do you believe in love?
Raglak(shocked+monologue) Yeh certificated mad hai.
Sanskar(angrily)- Listen you i hate love did you get that. Don't you ever use this words infront of me. Ok
Swara can see hurt and anger in his eyes but don't known the reason.
Swara- Sorry sir i am really sorry.
Lakshya- Sir she is mad i am telling you sorry from her side. Please forgive her.
Sanskar- You three go to your desk right now.
Raglak and swara(together)- Yes sir.
Raglak and swara comes out of the cabin. But swara again enter in cabin and says
Sir i will not use "love"word but can i use "pyaar" word please.
Sanskar(angrily)- Youuu.
Swara runs away.
Sanskar- Mad girl(with a slight smile)
Monologue- Why i am smiling for her nonsense things. I don't known. Sanskar back to your work.
While outside the cabin swara sees slight smile on sanskar's face due to mirror.
Swara(monologue)- Hasaa toh phasaa.
She said this words and goes to her desk to work.
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End of part- 1
Please do like and comment.
Sorry for errors.
Don't ask for update soon it will get in April after i complete phir se.
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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INDEX
PART-1 on page 1
PART-2
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Res means reserved it means it has been reserved to update something in this post
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky


Res means reserved it means it has been reserved to update something in this post

K thanks
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nice character sketch..pls update soon..
waiting..
Edited by leku - 9 years ago
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Sujay 😆 ...really interesting update ...raglak planning... 👏
Swasan encounter 😳 😆 ...
Waiting (till april 😉 )...
Edited by leku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Loved the update 😊
Continue soon.. N pm me plss
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🤣love the character sketch
how ragya wanted their sanskar bhaiya to get married so that they can have their happily ever after
dont know why but CS got me laughing like nothing🤣 maybe after effects of crying as i was crying sometime before

oh god after reading the first chapter im laughing more and more🤣
"hassa toh phassa"🤣🤣
raglak are too smart ehh bechari swara ko phassa diya for their own 😉

raglak and swasa's meeting with their boss "sanskar" was like brigadier is narrating his commands to his new set of soldier's ... like "yes sir", "no sir"😆😆
and again raglak's monologue about swara in the cabin was also so funny😃😃
Edited by mystery75 - 9 years ago
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i loved d concept of your story ...absolutely...n luvd swara n sanskar's first encounter!! 😆 eager to knw wat happens nxt ...plz pm me the nxt parts if possible!!

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