SwaSan & RagYa FF - Behind Enemy Lines - Pt 7 on Pg 21 (05/10/16)

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Vishi-

@Vishi-

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome update
Swara hates Sanskaar oh I mean he is capable of bringing out strong emotions 😉
want SwaSan to spend sometime together
waiting for next update..
Plz update soon 😳

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Aroha

@aroha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Hi..
Amazing plot..
Interesting story..
Waiting for SwaSan Scenes..
Thank you for this story..
Plz update soon..

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sudhi03
superb update

Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Build up swara sanskar's chemistry pleaseee.

Awsome updates.

loved both the parts.

update sooon.😃

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Awesome!! I'm loving how the story is shaping up.. Swara is being unnecessarily harsh with sanskar, trying to override her attraction perhaps??😉😉 Ragini falling into the stream and injuring herself... Poetic payback??😆😆 i dunno how to explain this, but there is a certain warmth to your story.. Loving it!!👏
Love,
Akshata😊

Hi, thanks for reading!

Ragini falling in the stream - poetic payback! I didn't think of the scene like that while writing but I like the connection. Thanks for that. Swara is in her over-protective mode especially now that Ragini is hurt and Sanskar didn't let her jump in the water after Ragini. :D

I am glad that you like the story! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: alisha17
Awesome update
Story is getting interesting
Can't wait for next part

Hey, thanks for reading. Really happy that you are liking it :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: piccola1
Liking the sassy Swara and the soon to be super frustrated Sansky !😉😆

Hey, thanks for reading :)

If Swara keeps her antics up, Sanskar is going to be be super frustrated. :D

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: rbb1
Nice update thank you

Thank you! For reading and liking :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Vishi-
Awesome update
Swara hates Sanskaar oh I mean he is capable of bringing out strong emotions 😉
want SwaSan to spend sometime together
waiting for next update..
Plz update soon 😳

Thanks for reading and liking. Sanskar is already having that effect on Swara ;)

Will update in a day :)