SwaSan & RagYa FF - Behind Enemy Lines - Pt 7 on Pg 21 (05/10/16)

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Superb update

I hope they comes to know that princess is ragini

Please update soon

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Update soon read all the parts together and must say I am enjoying there story...sanskaar the bossy one and swara the leader...haha let's see how long they stay like this and fight with destiny...

Please pm me when updated. ..raz

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Yes yes, i did like it... Very much...😃 Sanskar teaching swara how to sword fight, coz he saw potential in her, was interesting.. A captor teaching his captive the best defence.. Shows another level of self-confidence😛 Swara is soo feisty, its quite charming..😉😉 And laksh and ragini are progressing pretty fast😳 loved the update.. Greedily asking for a sooner next update😆

Hey, thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you are liking the progress and found the Sankar-Swara interaction interesting. Ragini is grateful to Lakshya for saving her life and is starting to step out of her shell.

I am working on the update. Will be posting soon :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Kaveetha
It was vry nice.. Plz update d nxt part...😊

Hey thanks for liking! Will be updating soon :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892
luved it
raglak moments r awsm

Thanks for reading. More Ragya moments to come :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: sneharay
Lovely update..😊

Thank you! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Vishi-
Awesome update ❤️
loved training session ❤️
SwaSab closeness ☺️❤️
Plz update soon 😳

Hey, thanks for reading. I am glad you like it! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: rbb1
Really nice update wow they still don't know Ragini is the princess , hope you post the next part soon

Thanks for reading! Lets see how far the girls can keep the cat in the bag ; )

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sudhi03
Superb update
I hope they comes to know that princess is ragini

Please update soon

Thanks for reading. The girls sure know how to keep a secret :D

Update will be up soon :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: raaz19
Update soon read all the parts together and must say I am enjoying there story...sanskaar the bossy one and swara the leader...haha let's see how long they stay like this and fight with destiny...
Please pm me when updated. ..raz

Hey Raz, thanks for reading! I am so glad you are liking the story. SwaSan are surely ruffling each others feathers :D