SwaSan & RagYa FF - Behind Enemy Lines - Pt 7 on Pg 21 (05/10/16)

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Brilliant update.! Really loving the pace and story line. Swara is very resourceful. And SanLak are outlaws? Oh this keeps getting better and better. Reminded me of the highland/outlaw fictions I have read. ;) Would love to see more of Ragini standing up to the outlaws, really liked her standing up to Lakshya. The SwaSan confrontation in Sanskaar's tent was really good. Looking forward to more.
Keep writing. :)
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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

The update was amazing!! Loving this royal avatar of Swara eventhough she's a handsmaid. Sanskaar has a cute boyish charm eh? Well waiting for SwaSan love story. The SwaSan part was too good. Swara trying to blackmail him but he obviously overpowers her and that intimacy rocks Swara's senses!!
Too good<3 Do update soon
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Vishi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Amazing update
loved SwaSan confrontation inside tent
Waiting for next update.
plz update soon 😳

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Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Superb update!! Loved every bit of it... Update soon😊

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Nice update thank you for posting it, I wonder when they will find out Ragini is the princess, hope they don't do anything foolish and get caught again

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Brilliant update.! Really loving the pace and story line. Swara is very resourceful. And SanLak are outlaws? Oh this keeps getting better and better. Reminded me of the highland/outlaw fictions I have read. ;) Would love to see more of Ragini standing up to the outlaws, really liked her standing up to Lakshya. The SwaSan confrontation in Sanskaar's tent was really good. Looking forward to more.
Keep writing. :)
-V

Hey thanks so much for reading and liking!

Swara is trying her best to get herself and more importantly Ragini out of this predicament. Ragini is very quiet and in-her-shell character in this FF, so that will take some time. But she stood up to Lakshya, so that's a start.

PS: Which highlander/outlaw stories did you read? Would love to know. I like such stories. :)

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
The update was amazing!! Loving this royal avatar of Swara eventhough she's a handsmaid. Sanskaar has a cute boyish charm eh? Well waiting for SwaSan love story. The SwaSan part was too good. Swara trying to blackmail him but he obviously overpowers her and that intimacy rocks Swara's senses!!
Too good<3 Do update soon
Sakshi

Thanks for reading! I am glad you like it.

Swara is really making some demands but mainly for Ragini. She did think they could escape but sadly for her, her plans were foiled. :D

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Vishi-
Amazing update
loved SwaSan confrontation inside tent
Waiting for next update.
plz update soon 😳

Thanks for reading and liking :)

working on the update

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb update.. 👏

Thanks a lot for reading! :)

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iykyk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hey!

Thank you so much for the pm. I'm loving the story so far. I love the gutsy Swara and I also love the way Ragini gave it back to Laksh. Waiting to see how the story move forward. Continue soon dear.

Love,

Ashi.

Edited by Cinderella3 - 9 years ago

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