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Aaahh!!
M so frustrated with the show. ..n m losing scope for a good RagLak story for rashmi devi. ..so just trying to put up my ideas here...
Hey listen...I AM SORRY!!!
So this is the time when Ragini comes to mandap with shattered eyes seeing Laksh marrying with another girl...
Ragini: Laksh!!!
Each eye turns to Ragini from the two couples..
Swara: Ragini.. Ragini tum yahaan toh woh kaun..
Laksh: meri patni...Kavya..
Ragini: Laksh..aapki patni hum hain..
Swara: aur iss ladki..a..kavya...is'se toh tumhari ab tak shaadi bhi nhi hui...
Laksh: toh ab kar loonga..
Ragini is shattered...tears are continuously falling from her eyes..she is crying but without a voice ..with no expression on her face...it is hard to understand that does he really betraying me or it is a nightmare. ..
Thousands of thoughts run in her mind in a second. ..she is not able to get it..its so fast that she isn't understanding...she is trying to frame n join his words together again to know what he actually meant by saying meri patni...
Ragini: toh hum kaun hai Laksh..
He bitterly giggles..
Laksh: meri sabse badi galti..lekin ek baat kehni hogi..that u r jz hungry of love..I mean woh pyaar chaahe kisise bhi ho..Swara ne pyaar diya toh apne maa papa ko unite kiya .Maa ne pyaar diya toh unhe unka haq dilwaya..dadi maa ne pyaar diya toh mujhse pyaar karne ko tayyar ho gyi..Sanskar ne pyaar diya toh inn sab ke khilaaf ho gyi..aur maine...maine pyaar..sorry JHOOTHA pyaar diya toh u got consummated with..
Before letting him complete his sentence a hard hand comes to his cheek...it was shekhar...it is so hard that it made Laksh bend..
Ragini is still not believing her ears n eyes..she is in a state of shock..but just in a couple of seconds another crackle came..
Damn it!!! Laksh slaps his father in law..okay okay..at least a man aged as his father..
Ragini is looking at it like WHAT!!! Before she could do something, Swara grabs Laksh's collars..
Swara: how dare u Laksh..how dare u slap my father..
He pushes Swara who is balanced by Sanskar...
Laksh: mr shekhar gadodia..ur daughter
n he points his index finger towards him...
N a hand holds his finger in its fist...it is Ragini...
Anger, fury and especially pain can be crystal clearly noticed in her dreamy eyes...Laksh, for the first time, saw such beautiful eyes..her eyes have confused expressions...he cannot get if those eyes are drowned in fury, love, pain, betrayal, anger, confusion, obsession or what..the thing he can notice is that her eyes are red..
Ragini slowly n really slowly shakes her head in NO, DON'T EVEN DARE TO DO IT...
Laksh is confused..is this the same Ragini who used to be shy while shaking hands with him, who was so secretly happy with his touch..
Wow!! She is someone new...
Laksh: Ragini leave my finger..
Ragini, without saying any word n just looking in his eyes, leaves his finger..he can see the scratches made by her nails on his finger...
Tears are continuously shedding. .they aren't stopping but she isn't crying. .Laksh can sense that her heart is crying ..she needs a shoulder to cry but she is now strong enough to control her sobs..
She silently goes upstairs.. it is so silent that her Payal ki jhankaar can be her..
Chhan chhan..it is so nice that Laksh cannot stop him from closing his eyes...the voice slowly fades whereas everyone is waiting for Ragini. .there is pin drop silence...
In the room...
Ragini enters with cold expressions inside. .she shuts the door, locks it.. she goes in front of the mirror n suddenly the cold expressions turn warm...
Slowly n slowly she starts to sob..she starts crying badly covering her mouth as tightly as she can so that no one listens to her cries..she falls on her knees. .
She closes her eyes tear streams consecutively fall from her eyes..her eyebrows curve..
She lips just a single word without uttering voice..."maa"...
It has been five minutes she is in the room.. she stands and goes to the cupboard.. takes out a bag, puts some clothes unlined.. zips up her bag..
N starts crying. ...
Now she wipes her tears off..her kaajal smudges..she doesn't notice that..she takes the bag n comes downstairs.. again with cold expressions..
As she reaches the floor from stairs she looks at AP DP n other family members. .she goes to SwaSan who are standing besides Laksh..
In front of them..
Swara whispers: Ragini.. .
Ragini has no expressions on her face..just she comes with a bitter n small smile taking Swara's hand in giving it in Sanskar's..n her smile again disappears..with corner of her eyes she looks at Laksh, who is doing the same.. pretending to ignore her but looking at her secretly..he notices her kaajal smudged on her cheeks n his eyebrows curve...yes he feels bad..he does..he made her cry so much. ..
(Tainu itna main pyaar karaan
Ik pal vich sau baar karaan)
She again takes her wheel bag n without uttering a single word, without changing her bitter expression she goes towards the main door.. all are looking at her from the back..she wipes her tears once again..
(Tu jaave je mainu chhadke
Maut da intezaar karaan)
He unwillingly n unknowingly steps towards her but kavya holds his hand..he looks at her n then Ragini with teary eyes...
(K tere liye duniya chhod"di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke )
She goes outside n hides behind the wall next to the door n cries her heart out..
(Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake)
To be continued. ...
Hope u liked it..it is just to take my frustration out so I m ready for chappals n tomatoes...
I'll catch them..I'll wear the chappals n make soup with tomatoes..
But not eggs..m vegetarian lol..
M so frustrated with the show. ..n m losing scope for a good RagLak story for rashmi devi. ..so just trying to put up my ideas here...
Hey listen...I AM SORRY!!!
So this is the time when Ragini comes to mandap with shattered eyes seeing Laksh marrying with another girl...
Ragini: Laksh!!!
Each eye turns to Ragini from the two couples..
Swara: Ragini.. Ragini tum yahaan toh woh kaun..
Laksh: meri patni...Kavya..
Ragini: Laksh..aapki patni hum hain..
Swara: aur iss ladki..a..kavya...is'se toh tumhari ab tak shaadi bhi nhi hui...
Laksh: toh ab kar loonga..
Ragini is shattered...tears are continuously falling from her eyes..she is crying but without a voice ..with no expression on her face...it is hard to understand that does he really betraying me or it is a nightmare. ..
Thousands of thoughts run in her mind in a second. ..she is not able to get it..its so fast that she isn't understanding...she is trying to frame n join his words together again to know what he actually meant by saying meri patni...
Ragini: toh hum kaun hai Laksh..
He bitterly giggles..
Laksh: meri sabse badi galti..lekin ek baat kehni hogi..that u r jz hungry of love..I mean woh pyaar chaahe kisise bhi ho..Swara ne pyaar diya toh apne maa papa ko unite kiya .Maa ne pyaar diya toh unhe unka haq dilwaya..dadi maa ne pyaar diya toh mujhse pyaar karne ko tayyar ho gyi..Sanskar ne pyaar diya toh inn sab ke khilaaf ho gyi..aur maine...maine pyaar..sorry JHOOTHA pyaar diya toh u got consummated with..
Before letting him complete his sentence a hard hand comes to his cheek...it was shekhar...it is so hard that it made Laksh bend..
Ragini is still not believing her ears n eyes..she is in a state of shock..but just in a couple of seconds another crackle came..
Damn it!!! Laksh slaps his father in law..okay okay..at least a man aged as his father..
Ragini is looking at it like WHAT!!! Before she could do something, Swara grabs Laksh's collars..
Swara: how dare u Laksh..how dare u slap my father..
He pushes Swara who is balanced by Sanskar...
Laksh: mr shekhar gadodia..ur daughter
n he points his index finger towards him...
N a hand holds his finger in its fist...it is Ragini...
Anger, fury and especially pain can be crystal clearly noticed in her dreamy eyes...Laksh, for the first time, saw such beautiful eyes..her eyes have confused expressions...he cannot get if those eyes are drowned in fury, love, pain, betrayal, anger, confusion, obsession or what..the thing he can notice is that her eyes are red..
Ragini slowly n really slowly shakes her head in NO, DON'T EVEN DARE TO DO IT...
Laksh is confused..is this the same Ragini who used to be shy while shaking hands with him, who was so secretly happy with his touch..
Wow!! She is someone new...
Laksh: Ragini leave my finger..
Ragini, without saying any word n just looking in his eyes, leaves his finger..he can see the scratches made by her nails on his finger...
Tears are continuously shedding. .they aren't stopping but she isn't crying. .Laksh can sense that her heart is crying ..she needs a shoulder to cry but she is now strong enough to control her sobs..
She silently goes upstairs.. it is so silent that her Payal ki jhankaar can be her..
Chhan chhan..it is so nice that Laksh cannot stop him from closing his eyes...the voice slowly fades whereas everyone is waiting for Ragini. .there is pin drop silence...
In the room...
Ragini enters with cold expressions inside. .she shuts the door, locks it.. she goes in front of the mirror n suddenly the cold expressions turn warm...
Slowly n slowly she starts to sob..she starts crying badly covering her mouth as tightly as she can so that no one listens to her cries..she falls on her knees. .
She closes her eyes tear streams consecutively fall from her eyes..her eyebrows curve..
She lips just a single word without uttering voice..."maa"...
It has been five minutes she is in the room.. she stands and goes to the cupboard.. takes out a bag, puts some clothes unlined.. zips up her bag..
N starts crying. ...
Now she wipes her tears off..her kaajal smudges..she doesn't notice that..she takes the bag n comes downstairs.. again with cold expressions..
As she reaches the floor from stairs she looks at AP DP n other family members. .she goes to SwaSan who are standing besides Laksh..
In front of them..
Swara whispers: Ragini.. .
Ragini has no expressions on her face..just she comes with a bitter n small smile taking Swara's hand in giving it in Sanskar's..n her smile again disappears..with corner of her eyes she looks at Laksh, who is doing the same.. pretending to ignore her but looking at her secretly..he notices her kaajal smudged on her cheeks n his eyebrows curve...yes he feels bad..he does..he made her cry so much. ..
(Tainu itna main pyaar karaan
Ik pal vich sau baar karaan)
She again takes her wheel bag n without uttering a single word, without changing her bitter expression she goes towards the main door.. all are looking at her from the back..she wipes her tears once again..
(Tu jaave je mainu chhadke
Maut da intezaar karaan)
He unwillingly n unknowingly steps towards her but kavya holds his hand..he looks at her n then Ragini with teary eyes...
(K tere liye duniya chhod"di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke )
She goes outside n hides behind the wall next to the door n cries her heart out..
(Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake)
To be continued. ...
Hope u liked it..it is just to take my frustration out so I m ready for chappals n tomatoes...
I'll catch them..I'll wear the chappals n make soup with tomatoes..
But not eggs..m vegetarian lol..
Mangal Lakshmi
