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Hi Zainab.
Read all 4 chapters in one go.
It was truely amazing reading them.
Your story is really very good.
You have portrayed sanskar and swara's characters very well.
loved all chapters,
Especially the last one.
The way sanskar said , " Swara GADODIYA , look at me right this instant " , with so much of intensity - wonderful
The flashback was too good , sanskar brought such a cute gift for swara.
And swasan hug ... was so emotional .
Loved it.
Pls update soon dear.
Read all 4 chapters in one go.
It was truely amazing reading them.
Your story is really very good.
You have portrayed sanskar and swara's characters very well.
loved all chapters,
Especially the last one.
The way sanskar said , " Swara GADODIYA , look at me right this instant " , with so much of intensity - wonderful
The flashback was too good , sanskar brought such a cute gift for swara.
And swasan hug ... was so emotional .
Loved it.
Pls update soon dear.
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