II SWASAN FF : HANDED TO YOU II - CHAPTER 5 UPDATED pg.26 - Page 12

Originally posted by: princess_tara

Nice

Thank you for your comments

Originally posted by: raaz19

Superb update but must say a bit short...no worries please make it longer next time...

Anyway back to the story loved it all and more...from the meeting on the train to the memories they shared through music and packing...

Wow even sujata was cute still mothering sanskaar...bless...

Waiting for more...

Raz

Thank you ... Trust me I try to make chapters longer but I am busy ( education comes before nah)
I had a 5 - page mla paper due so I couldn't
I promise I will try my best to fufill you wish

Glad you like the rest
Thanks for your suggestions

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb update 👏
Seriously it was lovely
Swasan meeting 😳
This is cheating why did you end there
Update soonish please

Thank you dear love your works means a lot

Haiii don't hate the player hate the game ... I am sooo sorry dear I don't like cliffhangers myself but had lots to do so I will promise I will not do that next chapter

Originally posted by: kavita_b_2004

Awesome.. Y did she go

Hi dear .. I think you skipped the last parts just read them if you would like

Thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Zainab,

The update was really nice...

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Thanks for the pm

Awww No thank you for reading my work means a lot

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊

Thanks for the dedication my dear. Means a lot. 🤗 🤗

Will un res for a detailed revert during the day.

Un-Res

Zainu my dear 🤗 🤗

Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your sweet dedication, darling.

My heart bleeds literally for SwaSan, being separated for 5 years 3 months 1 week and 4 days. 😲 😭 So much pain, so much yearning, so much anguish. Its like an open wound for both of them isn't it? Since they had been so much a part of each others lives. Even without realizing it, they were much more than best friends. They were literally other halves of each other.

In this chapter, I loved the way Sanskaar was recollecting how Swara would help Sujata with packing his bags, whenever he had to travel for his sports championships. And invariably, how this packing session would end with him chasing her all over the house, both of them laughing and yelling like little kids.
Such a wonderful, carefree bond they must have had!

And cut to the present day, both of them meet in New York, on the subway, while riding in the same railway car! Truly, their destiny is intertwined and fate had willed that they should meet again, come together again.

Liked how Swara noticed the changes in her Sanky. His dressing---from casual tracks, he was now wearing a classy suit, he looked as if he had lost some weight, but his disorderly dark brown hair and long eyelashes were the same. Swara noticing that was 😳

And when she gently placed her hand on him, trying to awaken him and warn him that the last stop on that track had been reached, poor Sanskaar, he immediately realized that the voice was so familiar to him, of someone so very precious to him. And he realized immediately, looking into her eyes, that she had recognized him already, too. Though she was pretending she didn't know him, by calling him "Sir". 😕

Looking forward to their confrontation in the next chapter!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Hi again!!

Nice to know you indeed! No sorry and thank you accepted here! Me a Sanskar devotee so can't take it!😉

No need of ups and downs.. just give one happy update and I'll be dancing again!! Just the way i do when SwaSan come on screen together!😆

Now I understand what you meant when you said Hindi is your 3rd language and you not good there.. it's mujhe! 😃

Talking about long comments.. so what to do.. when I read such wonderful fictions.. emotions flow out of me!😳

You are so cute you know!!🤗 Enjoy your day!

Love

Saumya😳

Originally posted by: abika

Awesome

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

Hmmm sanskar did come to New York not for champion ship tho ... It's been 5 years it was just a flash back . He came to New York for business purposes ... Hmmm they do meet at metro
Thank you means a lot for your time on commenting love your comments dear

First... Sorry.. Zainab... Sometimes it won't register on my mind what I'm reading... What I'm writing... Ohh.. He is on business.. Okay.. But I missing that minutes and seconds.. then.. How long they are missing each other... Loving your story...

Extremely sorry sissy... If I hurt you...

Love you...

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

First... Sorry.. Zainab... Sometimes it won't register on my mind what I'm reading... What I'm writing... Ohh.. He is on business.. Okay.. But I missing that minutes and seconds.. then.. How long they are missing each other... Loving your story...

Extremely sorry sissy... If I hurt you...

Love you...

😳