II SWASAN FF : HANDED TO YOU II - CHAPTER 5 UPDATED pg.26 - Page 15

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi Zainab.
Read all 4 chapters in one go.
It was truely amazing reading them.
Your story is really very good.
You have portrayed sanskar and swara's characters very well.
loved all chapters,
Especially the last one.
The way sanskar said , " Swara GADODIYA , look at me right this instant " , with so much of intensity - wonderful
The flashback was too good , sanskar brought such a cute gift for swara.
And swasan hug ... was so emotional .
Loved it.
Pls update soon dear.

Wow YAAR you actually sat through reading... The chapter YAAR you deserve an award ... Not sure how you made it due to the fact my writing is nothing compared to your works ... WHICH I LOVE BTW

It's an honor that you liked reading it ... Trust me
Hmmm...thank you again 😳
I am glad you think I portrayed the characters well I try
I agree with you the flash back was probably my favorite part to write
Yeah dear an emotional roller coaster indeed
I will try my best to update soon

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU ... I woke up and saw your comment and it had me smiling. I appreciate it
------- Zainab -------

Originally posted by: sana2c

great update

Glad it was worth reading dear 😳

Originally posted by: raaz19

Already waiting for the next update...seriously what an emotional and symbolic reunion...hope she can heal his pain...

Loved the touch of the rings and how both still kept them close shows how much they mean to each other...If only swara had spoken to him first...wonder how he will take her reason for leaving so many questions...

Thanks for the pm and please update soon...shall be waiting. ...

Till next time...take care

..

Raz

Also waiting for you to read the next chapter once I finish writing
Hmmm an emotional reunion indeed Raz dear
Hopefully nah we will see
I honestly love cliche thing knowing me o had to add something in there 😆
If only she did kash ... I honestly didn't know how he will react let's see where my imagination takes me
Thank you for your comment always love them ... I will try to update real soon ...
I shall be expecting you 😉

Yes indeed take care dear
------- Zainab -------

awesome..

Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Nice

Thank you dear

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

awesome..

nice portrayal of emotion of SwaSan!!

continue soon..

Awww thank you sunshine
I try my best to reach your expectations... Glad it was worth your time
I will try my best dear

Superb update
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

Superb update
thanks for the pm

Very emotional update...