II SWASAN FF : HANDED TO YOU II - CHAPTER 5 UPDATED pg.26 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
zainab i am so happy girl u updated plz update more quickly . this is very emotional
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Posted: 9 years ago
Zainu my dear 🤗 🤗

Yaar this chapter was so moving, so emotional. The reunion between SwaSan after so many years, was described so powerfully.

Swara initially wanted to pretend she was someone else. 😕 Did she really think Sanskaar would forget her? And the way Sanskaar barred her way, placing his arms on either side of her, and then gently cupping her face was 😳 So lovely that she was wearing the ring gifted by him, tied to a necklace she wore. And Sanskaar has a matching chain around his own neck. These two love each other so much!

You described the flashback scene, of Sanskaar gifting her that ring on her birthday years ago, in a very lovely manner. It was evident even then, that their close friendship had grown to an intense, pure and warm love for each other.

It was so great to read about Swara hugging Sanskaar tight, weeping in remorse for the years spent apart from him, for literally tearing a part of themselves apart. Looking forward to reading more, how they put the past behind them and come together.

Lots of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update [/QUOTE
THANK YOU😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Very emotional update...

I'm loving it...
Update soon...
Thanks for the pm...


NO PROBLEM DEAR ...
thank you sooo much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Zainu...🤗

A very emotional and touching chapter yaar. I am Res-ing for further detailed comments for now. 😊 Will Un res tomorrow, haven't been keeping too well last few days.

Love,

---Viji




Thank you VI ... no problem take all the time youu need
hope you are better now😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Zainu my dear 🤗 🤗

Yaar this chapter was so moving, so emotional. The reunion between SwaSan after so many years, was described so powerfully.

Swara initially wanted to pretend she was someone else. 😕 Did she really think Sanskaar would forget her? And the way Sanskaar barred her way, placing his arms on either side of her, and then gently cupping her face was 😳 So lovely that she was wearing the ring gifted by him, tied to a necklace she wore. And Sanskaar has a matching chain around his own neck. These two love each other so much!

You described the flashback scene, of Sanskaar gifting her that ring on her birthday years ago, in a very lovely manner. It was evident even then, that their close friendship had grown to an intense, pure and warm love for each other.

It was so great to read about Swara hugging Sanskaar tight, weeping in remorse for the years spent apart from him, for literally tearing a part of themselves apart. Looking forward to reading more, how they put the past behind them and come together.

Lots of Love,

---Viji



vijiii are you feeling better now
... hopefully you are since you Unres.
I know quit an emotional chapter if I do say so my self
Thank you for your feed back always looking forward to it ...
yaar you dont know how much it means to me when you like and comment
cause I love your work although you should know that by now😆
Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aamias

zainab i am so happy girl u updated plz update more quickly . this is very emotional


thank you and I will try my best dear😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unres
Finally you updated 😆
Zainab seriously a beautiful update 😳
Loved it
Swara saying sorry 😳
Swasan 😳
All the scene was perfect 👏
Seriously you have written it beautifully 👏
And that rain sequence and swara caring for lovely
Please update soon because now i can't wait
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago

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