SwaSan Valentine's Day Drabble: 'Meraki'

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RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Hey Viji.🤗

Your Meraki in this drabble has made me Ekstaztic. Don't know if that makes much sense😆.This is so incredibly simple and sweet. Okay first off Hrithik Roshan!!! You know how much I love him. He is the epitome of Greek Godliness. So its usually beyond me when I here someone say they like Hrithik. I kind of expect everybody to share my enthusiasm and love for him. So yes Swara this crazy fan girl took a slight offense when you said you liked Hrithik but its okay I forgive you.😃

Fate can be equally testing and benedictory at the same time. Despite giving Swara a handful of shallow relationships it has also bestowed on her a concrete, solidifying bond with a man whose entire world revolves around her and who possesses equal strength to submit his entire being to anything he holds dear in is life. What girl can resist a guy who promises to never let her fall. Its the sweetest thing to say to a girl.

You had Swara and Sanskar blushing the deep red on Valentines day. As for me I thoroughly enjoyed that awkward hug and Swara's afterthoughts on how Sanskar has become a big part of her life. The last quote is so perfect. Has a nice ring to it.

By the way Happy Belated Valentine's Viji !! Hope you had a great one.🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: svg98
Awesome drabble.. Really miss those days when there love story was story evolving.. May CVs have shown more of it.. Sanskar was so intense while saying those lines..he really does everything with every fiber of his being..just like Swara does everything with all her heart.. Even Swara must of thought is she can love as passionately as Sankar does, give everything of his..holding nothing back.. You truly are a beautiful writer..u create some sort of magic which binds us all.. Its my humble request please if you can do write something on current track..Kavita's proposal of marriage to Sanskar to prove Swara innocent.. please..

Hey dear...thanks so much for your lovely words. 🤗 🤗 So very glad you loved this drabble.

I also miss those days of the SwaSan "pretend marriage", when there was so much warmth and camaraderie between them. Their evolving relationship, the growing attraction between them, was so lovely to see.

Sanskaar does pour his heart and soul into his adoration for Swara; he does everything intensely, with every fibre of his being. Swara too, does everything with her whole heart. Yes, I do feel, at some stage it might have occurred to Swara, whether she could indeed love Sanskaar back with the same intensity as he loves her, holding nothing back. I explored this possibility in my other recent SwaSan OS "Toska", where Shomi helps Swara resolve her insecurities..

Once again, thanks so much for your comment, it made my day.

I would sure think of writing an OS on the present situation, am kind of tied up in a lot of work this week though. Shall revert later as soon as I get some time. In the meantime, if time permits, you could read my previous completed works on my index. Link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Viji, my friend wishing you a happy valentine's day.
I knew that it is a late wish. Sorry for my late reply.
The Meraki was a gift for all the swasan fans. For all the swasanians, the current track is a real torture.
After seeing yesterday's episode I was sad for them.
The stories in the forum gave the positive thoughts.
My friend, the story Meraki was really nice.
In the first part you beautifully portrayed the character of swara. Her selfless character, and giving nature
Swara is a girl who always wanted to gave happiness to others. But she was betrayed by her sister.
She always tried to gave happiness to others. But for that she was ready to sacrifice her happiness.
The characters of swara and sanskar have so many similarities. They love their family unconditionally.
For the sake of the family they was ready to sacrifice their life.
But the destiny played in the story of their life, and they became pillars for each other.
Sanskar supported swara when she was alone.
She was shattered. He realized her pain and suffering.
They share a beautiful friendship bond.
They understand each other and they are uncompleted without each other.
The journey of their life was really different
But atlast their path of journey mingled with each other.
I really loved the story.
You beautifully crafted the story.
Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful os

Hey Sakkiyah my dear...🤗 🤗 🤗

Arre, please don't say sorry yaar...you wished me on time in fact, on Valentine's Day itself. 🤗 In fact I'm sorry for my later reply to your comment, as I had to go out yesterday. 😊

Thanks so very much for your lovely words, and I am really so glad you loved this drabble a lot. I was literally over the moon to hear you say that this OS could give you positive thoughts about SwaSan. Being such a huge SwaSan fan, I consider that a wonderful compliment.

Swara certainly is a very selfless, giving character. She gives her all for her familial relationships, with all her heart and soul. But apart from her Ma and Dida, she never got that love from anybody in return. Whether it be Shekar, or Ragini, or Dadi or Dada; or even Lakshya, they all fell short in reciprocating the kind of intensity with which she cared for them.

But fate luckily had a wonderful destiny planned for her---she got to meet Sanskaar, who also gives his utmost to his activities and relationships, with every fibre of his being. He loves Swara so intensely, so unconditionally and selflessly. They truly have become pillars of support for each other.
Being true soulmates, they complete and complement each other, and are incomplete without each other.

Thanks again!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: soapbubble
What a sweet, open ended drabble!
And a few choice Sanskaari classic dialogues thrown in for good measure!
Indeed, he is Swara's refuge and harbour... the sweet monotony that comes from knowing..

Thanks 😳

And oh, Happy Valentine's 😃

Hey Bubble...🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton, dear! So happy that you loved this. Hope your Valentine's day went fab too!

How could I resist those awesome Sanskaari dialogues. 😃 😉 Such classics they are!!

Yup, I certainly do think that is exactly what he is to Swara: a warm, secure harbor and sanctuary, where she can be comfortable and secure from all the madness and storms outside. I guess, in a very real sense, they have become pillars of support for each other. They are each others best friends, confidantes, sounding board, guide, support systems, what have you. 😊

And indeed, there is that absolutely sweet monotony from knowing, being comfortable with someone who has become an indispensable part of your life, your very self.

Thanks again sweetie!!

Cheers

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Hi Rithu, Toshi, Uma, Priya, Nandini, Nita, Swathy & Ruqu: 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton guys, for your very warm words on this drabble. I've been incredibly touched and humbled by all your comments.

I'm really sorry to have not replied individually yet, but work today has been killing---have a customer as bad as a Norwegian Ridgeback, escaped from the Harry Potter books, breathing fire down my neck!! 😭

Will revert pakka tomorrow. In the meantime---really, really happy that you liked this drabble so much.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Rithu, Toshi, Uma, Priya, Nandini, Nita, Swathy & Ruqu: 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton guys, for your very warm words on this drabble. I've been incredibly touched and humbled by all your comments.

I'm really sorry to have not replied individually yet, but work today has been killing---have a customer as bad as a Norwegian Ridgeback, escaped from the Harry Potter books, breathing fire down my neck!! 😭

Will revert pakka tomorrow. In the meantime---really, really happy that you liked this drabble so much.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Lol Viji😆. Think positive. It could be worse you know. You could gave got someone who is like the Hungarian Horn tail.😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Lol Viji😆. Think positive. It could be worse you know. You could gave got someone who is like the Hungarian Horn tail.😃

I have another one who calls/ emails to torture me from time to time, Ruqu...he fits the Hungarian Horntail I guess...😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

^^^ But Hungarian Horntail ho, ya Norwegian Ridgeback, I will reply to you all individually tomorrow morning, pakka. 🤗 🤗

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RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

I have another one who calls/ emails to torture me from time to time, Ruqu...he fits the Hungarian Horntail I guess...😆

Oh God!! 😆😆Tell me about it. I have a couple of those on my back too. They can drive you crazy.🤢 I

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Res, dearest, I'm still on travel will unres tomorrow when I go home. For now, this was as sweet as honey and warm as spring!

Unres

Viji my dear, darling, sis,

I'm back finally and unpacked my stuff, had my dinner...and now finally back in bussiness😊 So coming to Meraki, you do know how much I was looking forward to this one. Thank you so much X thousand for the dedication dear!

I don't know now SwaSan are an officially established couple and their wedding track is going on, still I have a soft spot, almost a yearning in my heart for those old times. They had a charm of a different level no? It was what made me a crazy fan for one fact, even if you keep my love for them aside I really feel that old SwaSan was once in a life time couple. They had such a forged in pain bonding, such trust and friendship... All that they had in that dark era of vile Ragini, it is here in this drabble!

Do I have to say how much I loved the way you drew a parallel between Swara and the lovely word Meraki? I mean it was so true in the way you put it. She is a girl who always put Meraki in her relationships...and yearned to have the same level of Meraki returned to her..only to get disappointed each time she had high hopes.

As for Sanskar. I guess his capacity at Meraki is far greater than his lady love's. And so is his expectations. I guess that explains why he was so afraid of falling in love initially, he didn't want to place someone in that god like position he imagines for his love and get disappointed in return.

Now from this angle, I can see no one better to be treated with Sanskar's Meraki than Swara and no one who deserves the Meraki Swara puts in her relationships than Sanskar.

The scene you wave between them, the casual discussion, the chocolate sharing, the comforting and planning, this is the SwaSan I fall in love with. As you had mentioned the next part containing bitterness, I think it will be a continuation of this story line? I'm so excited to read it already! YOu know I am a fan of lighter moments, but painful ones have an appeal to me equally.

Loved it so much, that I don't know a perfect word that would fit here. Waiting for the next.

loads of love,

Saku

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago