RagYa/RagLak OS : Khabhi Kushi Khabhi Gham

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Hello Everyone 😊 This is my first OS on RagYa.. Hope you all will enjoy it. I'm sorry for any spelling and gramatical mistakes as well as the lack of feelings in there so Here it all starts

Lakshy had finally Proposed Ragini that too infront of everyone, Ragini was over loaded with happiness she never thought a day like today would come in her life. Since ever she met laksh she was dying to recieve his love and gone beyond limits to make him her's only but Who knew all hopes and dreams of Ragini will be shattered into so many pieces that fixing it would be impossible

All those love, care and happiness he gave her were all fake, All those memories she spent with him was glued to her heart in such a way it would take forever to take it out and forget the pain

She didn't know what to do, everyone tried their best to console Ragini but nothing worked, she didn't wanted to believe in the word love anymore. Never did she know that the word 'Love' which gave her so much of joy would be the reason of her hatred. She just hated her life and felt like running away from everything.

Ragini didn't know whether to believe her ears or eyes. The eyes through which she saw the Laksh's love for her or the ears where she heard lines of hatred for her. After hours of darkness she finally decided to confront Laksh

Ragini - Laksh why did you do all this? All these fake drama of love and being a caring husband. If you really wanted the property papers then you could have told me, I would have definitely signed it. You know very well laksh I can do anything for you, even if you ask me to give my life .. I would have done so .. then why all this ?

Ragini was Crying bitterly in her room, Laksh was just standing there, he didn't know whether he should continue to let her cry or go and wipe her tears off. His heart did melted seeing her in this way, he couldn't see her in this condition, she looked much better with a smile around her face. He was feeling gulity for hurting her and playing with her emotions

Laksh moves slighter closer to Ragini however she stops him, not even letting him come close to her or touch her. Laksh decided it's better to let her stay alone for sometime, he left the room and and got into his car as he decided to go for a drive

Whole journey, he was just thinking about Ragini, he knew what he did wasn't a mistake but a sin, how could he deep so low just to seek revenge from Ragini. What Ragini did was wrong but what he did to her was even worse

After hours, Laksh re-entred the room, this time he wanted to apologies for his mistakes, he didn't know whether Ragini would forgive him or not but it's never too late to give it a try

Laksh - Ragini, I'm really sorry. I didn't mean to do this on purpose, I just wanted you feel the pain and betrayal which you gave us all, I wanted revenge for what you did to my family

Ragini - Laksh I'm leaving this house forever, I'm going back to baadi. Here you go, I don't deserve all these ( She gives the mangalasutra back to him) Give it to someone who actually deserves all this

Laksh - Wait a second Ragini, You can't do all this, You can't leave me alone and go

Ragini - (laughs) can't leave you and go ? I thought you always wanted me to go away from your life that's why you even decided to divorce me. But wait why will you divorce me? Infact I'll divorce you my self

Ragini goes and takes out the divorce paper from the cupboard along with the property papers, She signed them and hands it over to laksh.Laksh takes the divorce and property papers and tears them apart

Ragini - (shocked) why did you tear the papers?

Laksh - Seems like you didn't hear me clearly, I don't want you to leave me. I know what I have done was extremely wrong. You can give me any punishment you want but don't leave me.. I don't want to loose you Ragini

Ragini - No Laksh, I don't want you to be in this forced relationship with me ..

Laksh - (Holding her hand) No Ragini ...

Ragini - Just leave my hand Laksh

Ragini takes her belongings and leaves Maheshwari Mansion . Laksh tries to stop her but she doesn't stop. All the Maheshwari wondered what is going on and inquire them about it, Laksh accepts his mistake in front of all and tells them the truth

Anupoorna - I didn't expect this from you laksh .. Now it's up to you to make everything back to normal

DP - I always thought I gave you good upbringings and now I feel ashamed to call you my son

All the family members leave and goes to their respective room. While SwaSan were still there, Laksh goes to them

Laksh - Bhai ! What should I do? Please help me sort out this mess

Sanskar - Laksh, you have created this mess so better you clear it yourself. I am sorry I can't help you. But first do think camly from your mind but always listen to your heart and do what it tells you to do

SwaSan also leaves. Laksh thinks carefully about what Sanskar told him. He drove his car and went to a location where he is seen talking to an unknown person. Afterwards, he drives the car to Ragini's house

He knocks on the door and Ragini opens the door

Ragini - You? Laksh please go back to where you came from

Laksh doesn't listen to her this time, as he steps forward, Ragini steps backwards

Laksh - I will surely go back to where I came from but also take you back to where you belong. Ragini please come with me once, I want to talk to you last time. After this if you still wish to return back then you can.. I won't stop you

Ragini agrees to go with him, they sit down in the car, Ragini looks out and thinks this is not the way back to Maheshwari Mansion then where is he talking her

Ragini - Laksh this is not the way back to MM. Where are you taking me to?

Laksh stops the car all of a sudden

Ragini - (Scared) Now what happened? Why did you stop the break suddenly?

Laksh - Wooh .. Ragini, Actually I'm feeling dizzy so I stopped

Ragini - Why didn't you tell before .. Are you Okay ? ...

Ragini realised she was still being concerned him and looked the other side to avoid looking at him

Laksh - Yes I am Ok .. Let's just talk here near the Garden if that's fine with you. I don't think I'll be able to drive

Ragini - Sure

Laksh tells Ragini to go ahead first and he will come after parking the car properly. Ragini walks into the grass area. At first everything seemed dark but all of a sudden a bright light was seen

Ragini followed the light and reached to a place beautifully decorated with red decorations and beautiful flowers. There were two chairs and a table with food on the table and surrounding them there was a wall with the scenery of a beach

Laksh - Ragini, I know in the past few days what I have done was extremely wrong and loving you was all a drama but maybe while pretending to love you,I have actually fallen for you in Real. I never realized how important you are to me and how empty my life would be without you

Ragini - Laksh ... (emotionally)

Laksh - Don't say anything, Let me speak my heart out today. I thought by taking you out of my life, I will be very happy and lead a happy life again but I'm wrong this time.. I'm Incomplete without you. If possible do forgive me.. I want to give you all the happiness that you deserve in the world

Laksh stands up, picks up a rose from the table and bends down again

Laksh - Ragini I want to spend my entire life with you and get old with you .. Will you marry me?

He makes her wear back the Mangalasutra and put Sindoor on her forhead

Ragini was all teary, she instantly huged Laksh, soon they both were huging each other so tightly that no wind could separate them

Ragini - I love you laksh

Laksh - I love you Ragini ... I really love you

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StarshineHues thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg this is amaaazing Anjale !!
So sweet and romantic !!

I loved Lakshya's realization and the scene at the end !!

Please make this a ff no ?

With happy RagYa times !!

Totally totally loved it !!

🤗🤗
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lovely anjale.😳😳.aww its amazing..👏👏
keep writing more😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it ...it was beautiful

Ragya..
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Res...

Unres...

Omg...ms Swara...oh god that's incredible...I loved laksh's confession to Ragini. .the way he proposed her😳
Thanx for making such a wonderful os..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just loved it dear.
It's so beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waawww...so beautifully written. Plz turn into an ff
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this is really nice and sweet ending
i like how Ragini left but Laksh went to get her

its good how is family told him to sort it out including Sanskar

thank you for posting it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Omg this is amaaazing Anjale !!

So sweet and romantic !!

I loved Lakshya's realization and the scene at the end !!

Please make this a ff no ?

With happy RagYa times !!

Totally totally loved it !!

🤗🤗

Thank you Aditi 😛 Glad you liked it,

I'll be keeping this as an OS, already have quite a lot of Ffs😆
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Originally posted by: mansinarang95

lovely anjale.😳😳.aww its amazing..👏👏

keep writing more😆

Thanks Mansi 😳 I'll try writing more, thanks for the encouragement😊

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