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rashidhingra

@rashidhingra

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Bdw no issues with updating it in parts! Infact it keeps us hooked to the part until its complete ;)

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

yaar even tho it says incomplete on the title its already perfect

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Ress 😛

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Unres. 😃

Happiness just oozing out of this chapter. I'm glad you didn't add more. It was just perfect and free.

Seems like chachi and Arjun makes quite a team. I loved how even Adarsh and Parineeta got

involved, while the elders looked on contently. 😳

SwaSan. the waist grabbing is ☺️. I like their easiness and comfort level with each other.

Laksh... Can't blame him for feeling jelly... is he going to demand for the same toy his bhai is playing with from his mummy?

Edited by -Ros- - 9 years ago

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Pearl

@pearl.16

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awww this was sooo cute !! First Swara shocked n Sanky rocked !! Then Sanky shocked n Swara n arjun rocked !! Lovely...

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Complete

I had planned to add more. Reading some comments... I felt I should not take the risk to add on to an already hilarious update. Oh this chappy was fun to write.

I shall continue the rest in the next part.

Glad you all enjoyed it

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Andreea

@chibi_deea

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

So much fun. Loved it. It's nice to see this side of Sanskar: carefree, happy. Can't wait for the next part 😊

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

another awesome piece of writting totlly enjoyed the hide n seek part & i wonder for sec if Sanskr realised wht he was doing.. swara is too cute & love her bonding with arjun very cute updt

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Dearie

Amazing update...loved it...best chapter ever...loved chapter 6 too...

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Res-

UnRes

Dear Angel,

This was such a lovey dovey post - Everyone playing hide and seek - though it makes me wonder if there is more to this than meets the eye - a hint that there is a 'hide & seek' game going on between emotions.

So how does Sanskaar, who certainly has a hidden agenda, let himself go completely and play with glee ??? (lifting Swara in this arms, more than once ).

Lakshya - upset and wondering what a trick the fates had played on him - And Annapurna noticing it (thank god, they behave maturely and decide to talk it out in private rather than create a scene).

For once Sujata came across as a nice person - truly happy to see her son happy and thankful to Swara for bringing her son back.

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago