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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww
😃it was so sweet
so cute🤗
love the bond which swara has created with all of the family members
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the link...between the 2 i prefer the updating when u can because it keeps giving me parts to read until its complete as opposed to having to wait weeks b4 u cud potentially post a completed one...and these r 2good to have to wait so long.
Coming to the upate 🤣🤣🤣 im in stitches...swara was alwys going to b th kind to get mixed in and sanskaars reaction to swara antics his beusement were 🤣 ...he is 5years old...your poin being??...no point 😆😆

sanskaar got involved and will have the family routing for her...anything to c sanskaar happy and carefree...sanskaar willingly getting involved, having fun, chasing swara good signs for the others..not so much for sanskaar..when he realises will he fight...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Un Res page 4 - first post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Angel,

This was such a lovey dovey post - Everyone playing hide and seek - though it makes me wonder if there is more to this than meets the eye - a hint that there is a 'hide & seek' game going on between emotions.

So how does Sanskaar, who certainly has a hidden agenda, let himself go completely and play with glee ??? (lifting Swara in this arms, more than once ).

Lakshya - upset and wondering what a trick the fates had played on him - And Annapurna noticing it (thank god, they behave maturely and decide to talk it out in private rather than create a scene).

For once Sujata came across as a nice person - truly happy to see her son happy and thankful to Swara for bringing her son back.

Nyna


Hi Nyna,

Sanskar letting himself go so quickly, several factors

- the subconscious pull / distraction Swara is... She is a force to be reckoned with
- presence of a person in his life and its impact... He can't ignore her
- Sanskar's mind is focused on the revenge, but his heart is not... He has not realised that time has if not healed his wounds, it has definately lessened the pain
- when there is fun and laughter in life, then only one spreads it... I want to show Swara as that person...
-Sanskar has bottled his emotions for so long, hence the avalanche.
- I want to finish this story in another 10 chappys... Hence expediting it😆.


I am debating whether to keep the story light or make it a little emotionally heavy.

The basic crux of the story is... Swara and Sanskar say that the marriage is temporary... However their actions will be contradictory... Sort of like as if subconsciously they have accepted each other.


Basically it shall be a battle between the heart and the mind for both of them.








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarra0

Thanks for the link...between the 2 i prefer the updating when u can because it keeps giving me parts to read until its complete as opposed to having to wait weeks b4 u cud potentially post a completed one...and these r 2good to have to wait so long.

Coming to the upate 🤣🤣🤣 im in stitches...swara was alwys going to b th kind to get mixed in and sanskaars reaction to swara antics his beusement were 🤣 ...he is 5years old...your poin being??...no point 😆😆

sanskaar got involved and will have the family routing for her...anything to c sanskaar happy and carefree...sanskaar willingly getting involved, having fun, chasing swara good signs for the others..not so much for sanskaar..when he realises will he fight...


Can't wait for Sanskar to realise how Swara is changing him... Can't wait to write about it... Will try to be hilarious about it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelpureness


Hi Nyna,

Sanskar letting himself go so quickly, several factors

- the subconscious pull / distraction Swara is... She is a force to be reckoned with
- presence of a person in his life and its impact... He can't ignore her
- Sanskar's mind is focused on the revenge, but his heart is not... He has not realised that time has if not healed his wounds, it has definately lessened the pain
- when there is fun and laughter in life, then only one spreads it... I want to show Swara as that person...
-Sanskar has bottled his emotions for so long, hence the avalanche.
- I want to finish this story in another 10 chappys... Hence expediting it😆.


I am debating whether to keep the story light or make it a little emotionally heavy.

The basic crux of the story is... Swara and Sanskar say that the marriage is temporary... However their actions will be contradictory... Sort of like as if subconsciously they have accepted each other.


Basically it shall be a battle between the heart and the mind for both of them.


That sounds interesting - it reminds me of a quote I had read and did write on another thread - "sometimes following your heart means losing you mind" - so guess that is what is going to happen here - after all the heart wants what the heart wants and the mind has to follow.
Nyna


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear... lovely update...ur outstanding😊👏
muahhh🤗
One request can u give us valentine day scene in pawn series...would love to see their reaction..ur version...☺️

Love talia❤️⭐️
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey dear... lovely update...ur outstanding😊👏

muahhh🤗
One request can u give us valentine day scene in pawn series...would love to see their reaction..ur version...☺️

Love talia❤️⭐️



I will try... But it won't be romantic... Because they are not at that stage yet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Superb Pawn series . I absolutely am enjoying this every bit.
I simply love this camaradie between Swasan. Its a delight to read it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Could u pls write the next part of this?? I am eagerly waiting to see what happens next!!
This is a really nice story

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