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Porkalai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

interesting
nw de game s on...
wants to c raglak intense luv story

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: .IPKKND.
Nice start
But ur chapter was too shorrrt...hope we get longer updates in the future
Cannot wait to read more!!!!

Sure dear,I promise that next chapter will be long 😳

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: gopikashalu93
seems interesting😊
Can't wait to read what happens next
Please continue soon

Well..thanks for reading dear..glad u find it interesting 😳

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892
interesting
nw de game s on...
wants to c raglak intense luv story

Glad you find it interesting... 😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Thanks for the likes and comments..will post the next chapter tomorrow 😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: .IPKKND.
Pls updateee

Will update in an hour 😳

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Shinning_AD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Part 1 was Lovely 👏

You should definitely continue

Do make next part Longer 😉

Waiting for chapter 2

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD
Part 1 was Lovely👏
You should definitely continue

Do make next part Longer😉

Waiting for chapter 2

Thanks dear...

The next part is longer..I promise

😳

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Ardhanarishwara

@Ardhanarishwara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Wow...what an amazing chapter...i really want to see the bad boy side of laksh..n it's a dark ff..i am in.
I feel from the first chapter that its totally of my taste..let the game start..i am totally in team Lakshya now..but I can change it anytime..
Have u updated anymore chapter..i have got only the first chapter..if yes then update the index.

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Chapter 2

Ragini was staring at the sky...the stars were looking at her warmly,"don't cry" the cool breeze whispered in her ears...Ragini closed her eyes ...tears fell down from them,"you have to be strong Ragini" she mumbled to herself .."you have to be strong"...you are strong" she kept chanting it like a mantra.. "you are right ragini, you are strong ..you are very strong".Ragini looked towards the door and found swara standing there,her eyes were red which indicated she was also crying ...ragini looked at her lovingly..there was a time,when she cried because of swara ..there was a time swara cried because of her..there was a time when they became the reason for each others tears...

But when swara got arrested ...when she was taken by the police for maasi's murder..a tear drop fell from her eyes,that wasn't hearing about her maasi's murder,that tear drop fell without her consent for swara...for her sister...and she was sure Swara won't even kill an ant..all the evidences were against her..everyone slowly lost hope...but she and sanskar never did..and finally when they made kavita confess the truth..when swara finally became free...she expected swara to first go to sanskar but swara came running to her without sparing anyone a glance,tightly hugging her..smiling and crying in the same time..she kept saying how she was sure that her sister will trust her..how she was sure that her ragini will never give up on her,shocked and frozen for seconds she slowly hugged her back ,everything flashed through her eyes..she pushing swara to the river.. to her asking swara to don't marry sanskar ..everything flashed through her eyes...and there she broke down..in her elder sister's arms...apologising each other...promising each other that they will never get seperated...that they will forever remain Swaragini..

They only broke her hug when sanskar came to them and took swara in his arms...smiling at her sanskar said"you have no idea ragini how happy I am getting back my friend" "and you all have no idea that how happy I am to have my both daughters back...how happy I am to see them as Swaragini" maa was smiling through her tears...everyone was smiling...she and swara hugged their parents ,laughed with them..cried with them...and she went to lakshya who was standing with sanskar with a smile..he took her into her arms ,he whispered to her that how proud he feels ..how much he loves her...

"Ragini..."swara's voice awakened ragini from her thoughts, she looked at her ..swara's eyes were still wet...there were tears...but she wasn't crying because of her..she was crying for her..ragini couldn't help but smile at the thought.after all the things happened...after what she did...she still had her dear ones with her...but he wasn't there for whom she did everything...for whom she killed herself every minute...he was never there...

"You smiled Ragini...and it just got vanish..I want you to always smile" Ragini smiled at what swara said, "I will smile swara,I know after what happened today ..you all are worried about me...I won't lie swara ,I am hurt...I am in pain...but I will move on...
I promise you that I will never do something stupid..and I think you should go back ...I am fine here..maa and baba is here and you can visit me anytime..now go and let me sleep..I am so tired" . swara kissed ragini's forehead and said" Ragini..you are my sister and you mean the life to me and I promise you that I will never let lakshya comeback to your life..I will never even let his shadow fall on you" hugging her swara went from there ...looking at swara's retreating back...ragini whispered to herself.."why would laksh come back to my life? He wanted freedom from and he got it" . a small tear drop rolled down from her eyes...memories came back to her..her remarriage with lakshya...the celebrations...and..and...the truth...AP and she slapping him...lakshya pointing gun on DP...

"No...I won't cry anymore for you...I wish we never meet again..never...ever..." Ragini wiped her tears and closed her eyes..,waiting the sleep to engulf her.

" Ragini...Ragini...I think I am used to you..I am unable to sleep without you .. .I just can't wait to see you and have you in my arms...! and anyone who comes between us and my game will have to face this..." Lakshya looked at the gun in his hands and chuckled quietly.

So...how was it guys?

Good?

Bad?

Should I continue?
jiyar

Edited by dewcute - 9 years ago

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