ENDLESS LOVE NEW FF ON SWASAN UPDATED Part 7[p no 34] - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely looking forward for nxt part!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@tappu haan agar aise sanskar kabhi aaya na...maine to marr jana he vahi k vahi...i just love his dressing...kab hoyega swasan ki meeting???? update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
hi tappu...🤗
firstly i am so sorry that i am late to comment here...😔
title is awesome... *(means it got maximum votes)😆
about flashback, it was very interesting very nice..👏
read the first chap...⭐️
its lovely... so swara ko "shona" acha nai lagta. and she hits a man...😆
sanskar the bike racer
very nice work buddy.😳
thanks for the pm🤗
and continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tapathi ... its just awesome. ...


Waiting for more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.
The introduction of swara was nice. But why she hate the name shona. She is strong girl. But some one is teasing her about that name and she dislikes the name.
The qualities for swara's life partner, it was nice. She beautifully said her thoughts.
And the family bonding between swara, Shekhar, and Aryan was nice.
And the introduction of sanskar was also nice.
Really loved the whole story
Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice storyline.. Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Friends thank you soo much for encouragement.Here I got next chapter for you people.If you like it click like button and express your views in comments.Both I will take it as a complement.Here we go.

Chapter-II

ALL PEOPLE IN TH CROWD SHOUTING SANSKARR...!SANSKAR...!

GIRLS WE LOVE YOU SANSKAR...!WE LOVE YOU SOO MUCH...!

Sanskar raise his hand and say hai to all...and gives flying kisses to girls...

Laksh:Sanskar kaha ho tum I am trying to your mobile jaldi chalo race is going to start

Sanskar:Aarahu bhai

Both reach to their family members.

Durgaprasad say sanskar to put gloves and kneecaps so that he should not get injury

DP:Sanskar aa phenlo taaki tumay choot nahi lagega

Saying that DP start putting caps to sanskar meanwhile sanskar says papa uncle bolara aap ko.DP turns and sanskar give that kneecaps to laksh and says to hide it.

Meanwhile one man announces

Friends...!Friends...!This Gungol Race ki baarey may aap sab ko pata hai hum pechilay 4 saal say aa Race karey iss Race may koi rules nahi hai par agar koi Kalighat mandir jaakar vaha ek naariyal fhoda na bas aahi hai game.Agar koi participate karna hai tho yeha aakay 20,000/- Deposit karna hai.who will win the Race they will get the all that money.Allthe best...

All people starts depositing money.Then Sanskar comes and says

Sanskar:Hey bro wasssup...!and gives money

Meanwhile one man comes and says take this 1 lakh and says anybody have that capacity.indirectly he is Challenging Sanskar.Sanskar Just give smile...😊Meanwhile DP interrupts and say just 1lakh lo 2lakh I have faith on my son.

Race starts:

Sanskar and Rest of the people are ready in their postions .And started their race

While race going in the middle competitor will put rod in between wheel of sanskar's bike and sanskar fells down.and the competitor will move thinks that he is going to win.after 5mins sanskar will get up he is bit injured at his elbow was bleeding and he got little scratch on forehead side.But he will lift his bike and start his race again while his competitor is going to reach the ending spot sanskar comes with high speed. By seeing sanskar reaching to very fast competitor will increase his speed and reach to the spot and go towards naariyal stand.Meanwhile laksh will throw naariyal to sanskar,he jupms from his bike and catch the naariyal as competitor comes to break the naariyal meantime sanskar will break it and win the competition.

Laksh and Aadrash comes and lift Sanskar with joy.Competitor in angry will throw the naariyal by seeing his behavior Sanskar will give him a strong slap.Laksh and Aadarsh try to fight but sanskar stops them.Meanwhile Durgaprasad comes and asks sanskar what happened to you how you got this injuries..and worries.Sanskar says him nothing has happened Papa... chalo hum Ghar chaltey...chalo..chalo...

[Durgaprasad and Ramprasad houses are in one compound and building structure of both houses are same.Two big builidings with a huge lawn and at backyard if filled with huge rocks which resembles like mini mountains and in middle a beautiful swimming pool.]

Maheshwari House:

Annanpurna is waiting for her family man near the door to welcome them.Ragini is standing beside her with taali,Sujatha,parinitha and uthara are also present.

All the mens will enter by lifting Sanskar while they reach to door they will put Sanskar down and AP starts giving aarti to him and her eyes catches injuries on sanskar face and elbow she will gets panic.

AP:kya huva tumay aa chot kisay lagi terey ko...?

Sanskar:Nahi maa aa chota sa hai.

AP:chota saa...itina khoon aara...yeha may tumaraliya pareshan hu tum ko uss race ki padi hai agar tumay kuch huva tho...!mera kya hoga...?

DP:Annu abhi kuch nahi huva na...

AP:Aap chup rahiya aa sab aap ki wajh say huva...paisay kaam hai kya humaray pass...

RP:Sanskar Race may 1st aaya bhabhi.

AP:Tumbi chup raho..tum sab dekhna chaiya na isa khatarnak race may hissa ley nay ki permission kyu diya tunay.

RP:may nay bol par kya karay baccha hai na ziddi kiya.

AP turns towards Sanskar..

Sanskar:may nay kahata maa,"Maa ko aa sab pasand nahi hai."Par papa nay force kiya.

Now AP turns towards Dp

DP:with panic look mujh par kyu daal ray sanskar...?may nay kuch nahi kiya Annu sab Vijay nay kiya.

Vijay:mujh par kyu inzaam dal ray bhayaa in sab ki kaaran Laksh hai

She turns towards Laksh

Laksh:May na kuch nai kiya maa sab Aadarsh nay kiya.

AP:Aap sab merey saath kehl karey kya...?Dekho Sujatha...😭

Sanskar:Baas kar sab log maa k saatha no prank, Maaa...!

AP:chup kar tu bahut baadmash hai tu drama kar ray chalo may tum say baat nahi karungi.

Sanskar:Maa...maa...plz suno maa...

AP sits on sofa and start crying all will go convince her.sanskar sits down and start conivincing her.

Sanskar:Maa...plz tu roo mat promise agli baar may races ki side may nahi jaounga..papa ki kasam...! Annu dear smile smile and starts chukl her..and she smiles...😊

Boss house:

Shomi is in kitchen she is cooking Bhaskar and Eshwar are also helping her in cooking Aryan is eating cookies

Swara enters

Swara:Hai chahu's Darling meri Pilot Traning ki baar may chod kar aap yeha kya karey...?

Shomi:Pilot Traning nahi kuch bi nahi agar tumari baba ko pata chal jayega...tumay maareyga

Swara:Maa...Maa..pls...!😕

After sometime

Shekar is sitting in the hall with his friend Shomi gets some eatables to them.and swara from back side forces shomi to talk about her Pilot Traning to Shekar.Shomi informs to shekar that swara want take Pilot Traning.

Shekar:Pilot Traning aacha hai is may galat kya hai...?

By listening his word swara starts dancing...

Shekar:Do it anyhow agalay saal hum socha ki tumari shaadi karwan chahitey Meanwhile aap ko kuch course kiya aisa satisfaction hota hai na do,and smiles

By listening shekar words swara gets excited and get application form for his sign...😊

Shekar friend ask swara

Shona...Traning kaha hai...?

Swara gives angry look to him and says Kolkata...Kolkata...!

Shekar:Kolkata Bahut dhooor hai Shona...where you will stay?

Swara:baba waha ladies hostels hai waha

Shomi:Kya Hostel Koin jaroort nahi tu ghar may rehna na

Swara keeps puppy face

Shekar:Shona...tu aakelay itinay waha...!

Meanwhile his friend intrupts and says why you people are worrying one of my firend name Ramprasad is staying their only and his wife is relative to us humari Shona...stays their I will call him now and inform he will definatly accepts and try to call RP.

Maheshwaries & Karmas Company:

Durgaprasadand Ramprasad are in office cabin and talking about company

Outside

Sanskar,Vijayprasad,laksh and Aadarsh are chit chatting.

Aadarsh:Guys this weekend meray pass ek plan hai Kolkata ki outskrits may ek nay resort hai waha.pay jaatey waha we will enjoy with drinks and waha Thai massage free maaza aayega...what you say

All shouts Aaa...!

Vijayprasad:par iss plan ki baaray may senior citizens ko maat bata na...

All says yes...!😃

Inside the cabin:

DP and RP talking then RP gets call

Shekar friend:RP may Govind ek favour chahiya yaar my friend shekar ki beti ko Kolkata may pilot traning hai par wo ladiki hostel may rehna mushkil hai thoo..

RP:Arey pagal hai tu may margayi kya hum rahtey hua why she will stay in hostel she will stay in our home.And about her pilot traning humara Sanskar hai na he will take care theek hai tu kab aari bol?

Govind:This coming Monday.

RP:Theek hai I will pick you people.And ends the call

Govind:They accepted.

All are happy by listening this.😊

Outside:

All are shouting and dancing that they are going to enjoy weekend.Meanwhile DP&RP comes

RP:Aadarsh you know Mr.Saxena Right.wo Jalpaiguri may rehta ha

Aadrash:Haa I know him.

RP:Aaj sham ko waha jana hai Sunday uskay saatha meeting hai tu wo meeting attend kar kay Monday waaps aana.tumari ticket bi confirm hogaya.

Aadrash:Mujh koi Saxena vaksena nahi jantha...!

Sanskar:Arey jhoot kyu bol rahi hu last time wo yeha aaya ta na tum usay apani compny ki barey explain ki wo aap ko appreciate bi kiya bhool gayi aap...😉

Aadarsh:I wont go send laksh.

Vijyaprasad:Laksh ki tabiyat theek nahi hai.usko bhukar hai tu jaana

Aadrash:Sab ek hokay mujh dhoka deray...chee...!😕

Sanskar:Haa tu jaa kay waha Saxena ka saath enjoy karna may Monday aap ko station say pick karungi ba bye...😉

This is the end of 2nd part.your likes and comments are heartly accepted.

Edited by Tapathi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Me first again...

Tapathi... 🤗 wonderful update yaar loved it...

AP Sanskaar bond he convincing her was awesome...

So Swara coming to Kolkata for piolet training.. Ahhh haaa.. Me eagarly Waiting...

That convo between the guys.. Vijayprasad is senior citizen naaanaaa 😆

Thai massage... Enjoying... But Adarsh got bjkt... 😆

Loved it re waiting for next...

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
tapathi 😊
wow sanskar is a heri afterall..
his family is too cute and funny
swara wants to do pilot training and coming to rp's hope
full on excited for next part
update soon
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting story. Sanskar's entry was amazing as well as the bond everyone in the family shares. I really liked how they all brought Sanskar home and how he pavified AP. Lekin I have a question 😳 sanskar and swara are cousins, right? So how can they have a relationship later if they are cousins? Or maybe I got it wrong.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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