ENDLESS LOVE NEW FF ON SWASAN UPDATED Part 7[p no 34] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Tapu congrats on your first FF🥳
Nice character sketches..
Story is interesting..
But SwaSan are cousins.. 😆
I am hooked now.. update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Tapu sorry for the delay..
Awesome beginning.. Love it. No idea on the movie though.
Continue fast and update karte waqt mujhe pm bhejna..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
tapu good start 👏👏

love u re for this story. pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Tapathi... Hugs re... Congrats for your first ff...

Nice story re... So rival between both family...

Ahhh waiting to read more...

Love yaa..

PS.. Sorry yaar just now ce home.. So late...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome start
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Tapathi

Yes Anu its my fav movie...😊and very romantic movie so i want to put our swasan in this...😉



carry on even dat was 1 of my fav movie 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Thank you soo much friends for your comments and likes here I updated First chapter after that incident happened Durgaprasad left Mumbai with his family and shifted to Kolkata he started a business and got suceed in that this new city give everything to his family.Reputation and Respect and new friend Very close friend who always support him not a friend just like a family man.In this iam going to introduce few characters.

Character Sketch:

Ragini Maheshwari(Wife of Laksh Maheshawari,Elder daughter in law of Durgaprasad Maheswari)

Ragini and laksh did love marriage but they said about their love to their elders and with their permission they got married.)

Note:Durgaprasad he not against to love he is angry with his sister because she didn't said about her love to him and ruined the family respect.

Bishwakarma Family:

Ramprasad Bishwakarma(close friend to durgaprasad,and Business partner also)

Sujatha Bishwakarma(Ramprasad wife)

Aadarsh Bishwakarma(Ramprasad and sujatha's only son)

Parinitha Bishwakarma(Aadarsh's Wife)

Uthara Bishwakarma(Ramprasad and sujatha's only daughter and Aadarsh only sister)

Chapter-I

Present:

Darjeeling Year 2016

Early in the morning one beautiful young girl in the age of 23 jogging and enjoying the lovely weather of the town.while she was coming to home one of her colony met called name SHONA...!

HEY...SHONA HEY SHONA...!

HEY..SHONA HEY SHONA...!

Girl gets angry and lift a big stone to hit that man...by seeing this that will get afraid no SHONA...dont do SORRY..Sorry and run away from their.

Bose House:

SHONA...!SHONA...!Kaha hoo tum...may tereliya juice laya hu...(an woman comes out by calling this name.)

Errr...😡!kitini baar bol may nay dnot call me with that name.i will kill you...stop calling with that name.saying this she wil catch neck of a woman.

Shomi:Arey aisay kisay baachpan say hum tum may issi naam say bularey .by the way shonaa...!is sounding very sweet .

Swara:For you its sweet par bhar sab muje iss naam ko lekar tease karey maa...!

Hehehe...😆an young boy is giggling...swara shouts at him shut up Aryan.

Shomi:Tum uspay chaal kyu rahi hu.and waisay tumari baba nay rakha hai aa naam.Ja kay usay pouch theek hai.

Swara:haa pouchungi zaroor?may kisi say daarti nahi hu.

From Hall:

Shekar:Shona...!

Swara:Ahh...!😕silently she will say Shekaarrr...!😡

Shekar:Shona aaj ka newspaper leaky aana beta...

Swara fastly get the today's news paper and gives to him.He again calls her shona tumari jogging hogayi ?

Swara with sacry smile..😊 replies yeah its done.

Aryan is giggling and teasing swara by standing behind of the pillar.😉

Shomi comes and give signal to swara that did u ask about SHONAA...!😊

Swara close her eyes...and says Hey bhagwaan...!

After sometime:

Swara and Shomi are sitting in swara's room and arranging the cupboard and talking in their talkings they will get topic about which kind of person that swara wants to marry.

Swara:Maa agar mujh say shaadi karna hai usko kuch qualities hona hai.

Shomi:Acha kyun say qualities batao jara.

Then swara thinks and goes near to the window and close her eyes and think about her dreamhero and starts explain about him.

He should have height in between 5'7 to 6.Mujh say jayaad ghora hona hai.uska baaday baaday ankhon hona hai uss ankhon may meray liya deday sara pyaar hona hai.Agar merey koi musibat aaya tho wo mera saath dena hai har waqt meri haat pakad kar meray saath chalna hai.meray liya kisay bi ladna hai.like that swara explains about her dream hero.

Meanwhile when swara explaining about her dreahero here in.

Kolkata:

Bike race spot:

So many people are gathering their within 20mins bike race is going to start

Adarsh:Laksh Sanskar kaha hai?

Vijayprasad:Aaa sanskar kaha rah gaya bike race tho abhi shuru honaywala hai laksh Sanskar ko phn karna

Laksh:Haa chahu wahi tho kar raha hu par phone nahi lagraa.

Ramprasad:DP aaj sanskar hum ko dump karey ga dekh race ka time hora abhi kaha hai wo?

Durgaprasad:RP wo mera beta zaroor aayega dekh na tu abhi bi 1 5mins bakhi hai na.

Laksh:Papa...Sanskar aara...

DP:Bolna may nay wo mera beta hai.

An young man in the age of 26 coming on sports bike.He is wearing jeans and white T-shirt with black and red coloured combination jacket,he wore black colour gloves to his hands and black goggles .He stopped his bike and got down from the bike and walking towards his family memembers by removing his helmat from his head after that he removed gloves with help of his teeth's from his hands,and removing goggles from his eyes.as soon as sanskar entered all people who are crowed there are shouting by seeing him saying SANSKARRR...!SANSKARRR!.and girls are just admiring him cheering him.SANSKARR...!WE LOVE YOU...!WE LOVE YOU SANSKAR...!

DO COMMENTS AND HIT LIKE YOU PEOPLE LIKE IT.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Tapathi... Hugs re... Congrats for your first ff...

Nice story re... So rival between both family...

Ahhh waiting to read more...

Love yaa..

PS.. Sorry yaar just now ce home.. So late...

Its okay kamila no need of sorry...😊ur busy na ur brother engament so no problem.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Res I'm first... Unres...

Tapathi... 🤗 ... Awesome update... Loved it man... Shona... Hey shona.. Was nice .. So Swara has respect for her father.. Shoswa bond was tooo good man.. She can speak about her dream boy to her... 😃 ...

He should have height in between 5'7 to 6.Mujh say jayaad ghora hona hai.uska baaday baaday ankhon hona hai uss ankhon may meray liya deday sara pyaar hona hai.Agar merey koi musibat aaya tho wo mera saath dena hai har waqt meri haat pakad kar meray saath chalna hai.meray liya kisay bi ladna hai... These lines are simply superb.

Description about Sanskaar entry.. He is removing his gloves by his teeth I can imagine that...

Waiting for next... Soon...

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Great... update...just luvd da introoo of swasan... waiting for the nexttt👏👏
Edited by Chexa123 - 9 years ago

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