The Best of Things: Thread II - Part 74 on Page 139

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

Awesome update 👏
Hum chaar 🤣
Swaragini rocks 😎

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jyotikaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Finally ragini is feeling guilty abt her deeds...sanskar is try to normalize thngs...laksh is ryt it nt easy to handle it will be fun...thanx for pm

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

Hahah this one's awesome so ragini is generously repenting by taking dips...ohh! Come on she's good now...Sanskaar is talking sensible i like him but less than laksh in this fic ...RagSan & SwaLak have got a better bonding that's super..husband,wives and their silly talks 🤣 technogeeks and shopping freaks...seems like they're having an amazing time being excepted out from MM...love you bubble 🤗 update soon please

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qwerty012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

Why I feel something going to happen to Ragini? Like lost n found, with GPS n laksh concern about Ragini

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Oh yay I'm so glad my stalking...errr...pleading is working. 😆😆

This was such a lovely update Bubble, and for so many reasons. I loved, loved, loved Ragini and Sanskaar's conversation, they've battled through similar demons, that they do have an intrinsic understanding of the other's guilt and pain. And they really can help each other through it like noone else can.

And then my...I mean Ragini's Lakshya !! 😳😳 His concern and protectiveness for her shone through so subtly and so brightly at the same time...I really cannot wait to read more on his realization of his feelings for her !!

And SanLak and Swaragini bonding was adorable...really, the foursome is amazing together !! Hum chaar is appropriate indeed.

And Bubble IDK how, but the entire setting is so atmospheric with the gushing rivers and local eateries and chaai...that it feels like I'm right there with them and can see it all happen in front of my eyes...that's the power of your writing.

Just one chhotu sa thing...please make the next update longer, pretty please ? And could we please get an update quickly ? I know that we JUST got an update, but yeh dil maange more, your story is just THAT good.

Loads of love. 🤗🤗

Edited by StarshineHues - 9 years ago

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: alisha17
Awesome update
Loved how Swaragini were making plans on ditching the boys
Can't wait for next part

Haha, they're a Force 😆😆😆

Thanks a lot!

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Nice😆

Thank you, glad you liked 😳😃

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Yay!! 😃😃😃The 1st part was so sweet, simply put, endearing... Even i felt like giving a bear hug to Ragini, she seemed so wistful.. And she really is trying to make it up to everyone.. I like sanskar's way of silent support, its an art really... The SanLak part subtly shows how sanskar being the elder one takes care of the practical necessity and laksh being the younger one is more about the fun part.. Its the same with most siblings.. SwaRagini conspiring to lose their hubbys and shop away merrily😆😆😆 These sisters😃 Dono sahimein bhaari padne wale hai SanLak pe.. Now that they have bonded right back, the poor hubbys might have to woo them again if they want to be dalofied any ghaas.. Ooo that would be hilarious🤣 All in all a cute update Bubble!!🤗
Love,
Akshata😊

Thanks Akshata!!! 🤗🤗🤗

So happy you liked it, since I strengthened the Sanskar - Ragini scene on your request. Ragini is now trying to make up desperately... Sanskaar is something, isn't he? Just turns up silently wherever he's needed. I'll weave up a superhero avatar for him... 'The Listener' he'll just turn up everywhere and just listen to people! 😆

Yah, SanLak - you're very right. Sanskaar is being very responsible - not that Lakshya isn't but he's more ready to clown around if someone else is taking charge 😆😆

The sisters are going to be quite something - these two will have to be sharp to retain their wives' attention 😆 Swaragini are back, yo!