SwaSan Drabble#3: Sepia Toned Memories..

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Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update Viji.

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Super awesome OS Viji!!!

Iss mod Se jaate hai is one of my all time favorites too!

Will reply in detail in the morning dear!!

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bones123

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Posted: 9 years ago

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These drabbles are such a delight to read. I hope you write more and don't just stop at three. A page out of their lives, memories unseen...some sepia others technicolour !!

The chai pe charcha's are just fabulous !! The easy nature of their relationship, the beginnings of that kuch kuch and music to accompany it all...amazing !!

Loved how you've described the sunset. What vivid imagery !

Aandhi, Gulzaar, Pancham...man so many of my favourite things together :) The song is so apt..for them...for this situation...Home coming ho toh aisa ho !

Both their emotions very well described...Lovely read Viji...thank you for this today !!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unres @ Page 1 Vij xoxo

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thanks so much dear friends. Have woken up your amazingly lovely comments and my Tuesday is made. 🤗 🤗

Will catch up with my individual replies all your insightful comments, during the course of today.

Lots of Love

---Viji

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moonstonespirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Viji 🤗 You need to write more drabbles!!! You can make something as simple as them crooning classics together into something truly magical.

I loved how you described the feeling of them being together as home. They both were lost and mislead by what they thought was love, only to find each other. With each other they found the strength to mend their broken hearts and embrace love. I truly loved the it.

Have I ever told you that I love your end of chapter notes??

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: The.Lannister
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I had kept this for 10PM today & I knew it would be the right thing to do😆 Just the LU gave all of us on WA a searing headache

Nature is beautiful but when you describe it you just increase its beauty ten folds😳 That description of the sunset...marvelous!👏

Ragini. Oh the good old times when we all dreamt of getting the old Ragini back. Naive fools all of us😆

Ah that song & those lines. So apt, so apt Viji👏 Exactly what he wants to say, but then she says it & its really what both of them are feeling😳

Oh trust Sanskaar to find an appropriate answer. I didnt know Arijit Singh had sung that song as well. I have heard the older version only.

And both are finally home. Such a beautiful & meaningful OS Viji. You should continue writing these drabbles Viji. Golden moments snatched by our lovely couple.

Hey Shruti sweetheart...🤗 🤗 🤗

SO glad that you loved this drabble about their warm moments together, in those lovely days of their "pretend marriage". 😊

I recorded watched the episode, fast forwarding quite a few bits...it still gave me a heartache and a headache. 🤢 So much of unnecessary MU...Anyway, I still refuse to acknowledge the existence of this resurrected (zombie! 😛) Kavita, so it makes it easier for me to tune out this part of the plot! 😆

About this drabble--I am fairly obsessed with sunrises and sunsets you see. 😉 So I can't resist putting them in occasionally in my Fics. Thanks for all your kind words about my description.

Is Mod Se...is an awesome song, nai? I just get lost in dreamland whenever I listen to it (which is fairly often 😆). That and Ehsaan Tera Hoga Mujhpar...and those other songs I mentioned in the footnote, are all favorites of mine.

I couldn't help but think that those fabulous lines by Gulzaar saab are so apt for SwaSan. I would so love to see Sanskaar singing this to Swara sometime in the serial. On their next date, perhaps? Without the devils snapping at their heels? 😊

Oh you MUST listen to the latest version of Aaj Phir Tumpe...I would say it is one of the few songs, where the re done version beats the original, and that too by a long shot. Arijit is simply outstanding, and Samira is good, too.

I wanted to show that these two feel that sense of belonging, of being home in its truest, best sense; when they are with each other. So, so happy you loved that. SwaSan really are meant to be na? They complete and complement each other so beautifully.

Would love to write more drabbles yaar...but at the moment have written all that I had the ideas for. I've been working on an AU 3-Shot for SwaSan, which has a fair bit of angst. But seeing the way the serial plot is going, I haven't had the heart to pen it down the way I want to...I am feeling too angsty to write too much angst. 😛 Does that make sense? 😕

Anyway, once some sunshine streams back onto SwaSan land in the serial, I hope to post my 3S. And then maybe will go back to lighter drabbles. I'll PM you as always, whenever I do.

Thanks again Shruti! As always, your feedback means a lot to me. 🤗 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
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Lovely Drabble Viji, I liked it, as you said i love the fact in your drabble series the fake marriage went longer than few weeks, i usually like that sort of friendship turned into love concept. Also that why i liked this one so much.

Swara playing guitor and them watching the sceneary drinking her new improveed Chai. I liked it . Her still hoping to see her sweet sister back while agreeing with Sanskar at the same time , i love Swasan conversations . Thanks for the PM dear.

Hey Nita my dear...🤗 🤗

So happy that you loved this one. Yup, I always envisaged their "pretend marriage" as going on for longer, allowing them time for their friendship to deepen, and blossom gradually into love. I am a sucker for friendship turning to love stories as well, you see. 😉

I love music (learned the violin--Carnatic Classical) for 6 years. So I really wanted to show that side of Swara, since in the serial we don't really get to see much of her earlier passion for music at all. Swara playing guitar to Sanskaar's crooning of his favorite old Hindi film songs would be like the ultimate expression of SwaSan romance for me. 😳 ☺️

Thanks again for your lovely words about how you loved the SwaSan conversation and their portrayal in this series.

Loads of Love,

---Viji