SwaSan Drabble#3: Sepia Toned Memories..

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wonderful os 👏 👏
Loved it

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Dearest Viji,

You have a gift of including everything I love in to one shot every time you write.

Starting from the sunset that you described so beautifully, I was watching the sunset earlier, before coming to read this one and coincidentally felt the same peace reeling through me just as you said Sanskar had done.

Those wonderful colors, the hues they spare for the world below, it is truly a peaceful hour and in your beautiful writing seemed rather divine.

That conversation and the quotes I enjoyed absolutely. It just showed so many angles to their bond and also their characters. It was superb. I just love this perceptive Sanskar and sweet swara, Always meant to be together and I strongly believe created for each other.

Then the song, I did tell you before, didn't I, that I play guitar? Oh, I could relate to that experience immediately and as always your writing was spot on darling! There is so much you can convey with a simple raga or a perfectly heart touching song.

Is mod se, is one of my all time favorites, but never have I reflected upon how well it would suit Sanskar before. I guess it hit even Swara that moment, when she sang the words that the man described in them is sitting right before her...that was a very warm moment.

Oh, you hate Hate Story 2 as well and still feel for Aaj phir tum pe pyaar aaya hain? There one more mutual interest added!

I wish it had gone on, can't you write some more like this one, I could read them and never stop reading. You should write more of these moments stolen in between battles. They are ever so lovely.

loads of love,

Saku

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice

The sunset was well written

Sanskar's thought was beautifully portrayed. And swara was also nice.

Swara really miss her old sister. And their past memories was also nice. But sanskar realized the true intentions of ragini.

The friendship and understanding of swasan was beautifully described.

Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful concept.

Thanks for the pm

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laddu1691

@laddu1691

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Viji..🤗

It was superb...

The moment of Swara's realisation was Magical😊

never been a fan of old hindi songs but now searching youtube for Iss mod se... thank you for the song too...

Love

Latha

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reeyacute

@reeyacute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Lovely one viji!
Uvknow what we can actually suggest our cvs to hv a mudical sesdion in SR also with swara on guitar n sanskar singing for her on the terrace.
I loved this idea.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Thanks all for your most lovely comments. I've had to make some work related visits hence not able to reply individually now. Will catch up during the day tomorrow.

But I've read all your very motivating feedback, I am so, so happy you've liked this last part of my drabbles series. Means a lot. 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Very nice. The simplicity of the setting really made the story beautiful. Peaceful...that's the word that describes this drabble for me.

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

awesome...

loved the light moments between swasan...

lovely evening with a mini singing session..

loved it..

Hope swasan their love soon..

thank you for pm..

continue sooon,,

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

this was a really sweet one...connections of the heart forming ...giving them signs that they have found home...and in such a sweet way. waiting for realisations to creep in soon.

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a_uma

@a_uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

very lovely ... love your detailed description.. how at ease swasan are with each other.. two halves of one whole.. like an old married couple.. 👏👏.. totally loved it.. and that song is one of my favs too.. 😳

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