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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

it was interesting to see AP-DP confrontation. He knows he is wrong, but his ego doesnt permit him to accept it. That would have been so like the nature of the men in that period right. I don't think it would have mattered even if it was just the two of them he would have done the same thing. Both seem to be thinking about sanskar and fighting over him like he is there son...soul son. forgetting the real parents and even what they must be going through. i wonder how ram and sujata manage to say so restrained...and ram saying he will be found...still dutiful to his brother? at the cost of his son? or is there more that is going on or he is implying. hmmm

sanskat backing off again in light of what he expects...he tried to steal away a day with her and now he is preparing to steel his heart to her loss. swara not being okay with it now...without realising why she feels that really. you cannot stop being your self and when push comes to shove you always draw from your real self. the unknown men brought that out in sanskar...and swara knew it would. he took the lashes from them..for the villagers and even for her...even when she knew how he felt about his welts...glad she could see another side of him...the one that the old man was implying. so wonder who is standing in front of him. adarsh?? iwho went with his men when he didnt need to. why do i now feel that he was the one who saw sanskar run away with swara and also what ragini did...and could use it to his favour.

btw pawan is conveniently missing as well...hope he doesnt turn up with the shadow enemy...he is sanskar best friend and as many have said, sanskar inspires loyalty. but then kavita did take him for a ride though.

loved the update...cannot wait for the next one already

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Sanya17

@Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Annapurna my respect for her is going higher day by day the way she showed the mirror to dp👏 ram dp conversation I felt there is more to what meets the eye if its not true ram dissapointed me big time sanskar is his son he may not be close to ram n sujata like he was with ap n dp but I expected him to know his son more well at the same time I felt there is more to what he said his line after all you are not the traitor didn't sounded any assurence or statement to dp nor any anger towards sanskar it sounded hmm "a taunt???" What was he reffering to just DPS betrayal to ap or is there smthing more

Sanskar how much more awsm he will keep becoming😳 he wanted to save that man had to bear their lashings BT no one who said smthing bad to swara has been able to save themselves from his wrath till now😃 I like that 😊i think sanskars plan in sending swara is not going to succeed what he did is going to give their hideout this is the only plan of sanskar I don't want to succeed😉 I actually not only me but everyone want them to solve this together and I think there is more courage to show fr om our warrior princess's side in future part

Cliffhangeeerrr😕 who is it and for whom that person works waiting to know

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

amazing super..yaar suspense is it laksh...omg now even swara is there...what is the next action...cant wait

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

Another superb update. It was very engaging. Loved it immensely. A cliffhanger...very interested to know who it is. Do continue soon.

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Shruti...

Unresed on page 78...😊

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
amazing super..yaar suspense is it laksh...omg now even swara is there...what is the next action...cant wait

Hello! Thank you so much and glad you enjoyed it! Aha the suspense eh?! Well Lakshya is a possibility of course. You will just have to read in the next part, where it will be revealed who it is 😉.

Love, Shru x

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

omg a cliffhanger!!! why...m soo curious to know whose the new guys in the scene in last...cont asap.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

Thank you dear people- I woke very early on this Sunday morning and it dispelled by tiredness to read the comments that have come in. I am dealing with some write ups and comments on other threads but will respond individually soon!

Lots of love and Happy Sunday all!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Shruti, my friend
It was really a awesome update. You again surprised me with your update.
I am really sorry for my late reply.
In the updates the swasan sequence were really nice.
It was really a tough time for swasan. Swara was worried for his health and she cares him.
After seeing the wounds in his body she realized the pain he suffered.
Swara was talking to him. The tears from swara's eyes were touched the heart of sanskar.
They share a beautiful friendship bond.
They knew how to handle each other. Swara unknowingly started to love him.
And in unconscious too, sanskar was thinking about swara. And really loved the character of veer too.
After regaining the consciousness sanskar was worried for swara. But swara was only thought about him.
The teasing of sanskar was really nice.
He knew that swara told that and she asked forgiveness.
Swara find the real sanskar, a innocent prince who will sacrifice his life for the country.
But swara felt awkward about the situation. But in sanskar's words also the love for his angel was visible. Swara and sanskar affected by each others presence.
And really loved the innocent swara.
Sanskar told swara about the haveli and they have trust towards each other.
Sanskar gave clothes to swara and he said he wanted to live the life of a normal prince. It was really heart touching.
Sanskar told about Kavita and his life.
Swara's eyes were filled with tears.
Veer's character is also a important in this story. Swara and sanskar share a beautiful bond with veer.
The update was really heart touching.
The ice between swasan is melted. They now know about each other.
The feeling of love is mutual. But who will confess it first?
It will be interesting to read.
Waiting for your next update

My dear Sakkiyah 🤗

I am so embarrassed I am so late with my response- please forgive me! If I surprised you and you loved it, I am happy! 😃

Once again you excellently summed up what I wanted to get across, including the finer nuances so I am afraid that part of my response cannot live up to the original but I love reading your detailed take and feeling that I have managed to convey all the things I meant to 😳.

You are right in that the feelings are now rooted on both sides. Sanskaar understands his a lot better than Swara but that is natural I think for such an innocent and inexperienced soul. However, what is important to me is that regardless of saying "I love you" which sometimes can be a bit too easily used, both of them do something far more fundamental- they are already showing each other in such deep and meaningful ways of what they mean to each other. As to who will say the words first- that also depends as there is saying to yourself, to someone you trust and to each other! 😉 There might be stages in that journey for both of them but for me, I am in no rush to simply make them blurt that out- the story I have in my mind for them is far more complex and hopefully more significant and the journey is as important as the destination to me. For now, I want to focus on each understanding every aspect of the other, loving it and for their feelings to grow to a point where the other is as essential as breathing for each 😳. I hope this makes sense!

I am hoping you will have liked 15 and no doubt I will converse with you on that. Thank you for constantly encouraging me. Lots of love to you, Shru xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Chapter 15:

I had thought that after that early update this week you might not update during the weekend. But you did 🥳XOXOXOX

Finally DP has spoken. I had thought you had made both the brothers mute in this FF😆...though its better DP keeps quite (you see I still haven't forgotten how he got SwaSan divorced in the show & hence still dislike him!) since he is an even greater loser here than there😡

Annapurna...how you so FAB! This woman is seriously out of this world😳 So much dignity & poise & grace. In few choice words she showed DP his place just like she had done with Kaveri. And it is easy to be direct & brutal to an enemy but if you can manage that with your husband👏 I am so happy she told DP to his face that Sanskaar was not a traitor & even if she did know his whereabouts she would never tell him👏 #RESPECT

So Laksh has already run away from Ragini 🤣 Aisa kya kar rahi thi wo ke isko bhaag jana pada so soon after marriage 🤣 I have full doubts that he must have jumped at the chance to leave with Adarsh

I like this little change in swara where when she gets up in the morning this time she isn't worried seeing sanskaar missing from next to her. She now knows he won't leave her alone, she has full faith that he will come back for her, come back to her. In just a couple of days that seems to be great progress in their relationship 👏

Sanskaar, no matter how noble his intentions, can be a real jerk at times. That time when he threw away the flowers she gave him & now today almost avoiding her. And Swara is such a baby! Had she not been so sweet & tender hearted Sanskaar would not have come across as such a jerk😆 but oh god she actually starts crying when they leave. Little baby really 🤗 And of course he melts immediately & lavishes her with his undivided attention for a few minutes...that is all she wanted JERK!😡😆 Swara here reminded me of a kid who doesn't want to go back home after a particularly fab vacation😆

I hope he doesn't release Swara in the care of Laksh or Adarsh since they seem to be heading their way🥱. Though I doubt he will allow Swara anywhere near Laksh since he thinks Laksh is a traitor, but not even Adarsh please. Let her stay with you Prince & take her back with you😳

Trouble troubles those who trouble trouble sunny boy! While I do understand (I am struggling, but I am trying😆) he feels this need to protect his subjects from such bullies now he has landed himself in an even bigger trouble. He might get recognized by whoever this new person is & then what will happen to his plans to get back the map? Who is that man?! Waiting for the next chapter...hope it reveals who that rider is

Lanny 🤗

Big time mmmwah for this. As for updating, since writing DK I have realised that the need for sleep which I previously believed indispensable, is overrated 😆😆

No no the brothers are not mute, the women don't give them much chance to speak and the sons have left them unable to say much 😉😆. Oh DP isn't so bad- I have always had a soft spot for him, in the show too and I was furious beyond measure when the CVs spoilt that in the show during that forced divorce rubbish. Here, well he is a very flawed man sure but he might yet surprise you so don't write him off too soon 😉

Annapurna now is undoubtedly a regal queen, and good or bad, she would always inspire awe I feel. I wanted this sense of a woman who has held herself in check but can even fell her husband if needed. Very silly example but Jaya Bachchan as Nandini in the cheesefest that was K3G- the scene where towards the end she tells Yashvardhan off so perfectly and quotes back his "I have spoken" dictum back to him in the most dignified and awesome manner- that is the type of Annapurna I see. My own mother is rather like that- she will fight for her children against anyone, even my Dad and I have seen this all my life 😃. I so wanted her to say she wouldn't reveal where Sanskaar was even if she knew as that screams her trust in his innocence louder than anything.

Lakshya ji- 😆 Endless singing bouts of "Yeh Moh Moh ke Dhaage" probably finished the poor man off? 🤣

Exactly right about Swara- as ever her subconscious is faster than her rational mind and she is already in a rosy haze from the precious day and well night 😳 to believe Sanskaar would abandon her. Of course the jerk as you call him 😆 dispels the haze rather too quickly . Not that it makes Mr Macho any happier to be mean I may add so as usual- cut off your nose to spite your face Sanskaar 😆. Haha- the example of a kid not wanting a vacation to end is perfect here 👏👏 I like that being kidnapped has been a vacation for her thanks to Prince Scrumptious and the romance conducing Haveli 😳

Well the holiday is at a rude end for sure! Sanskaar is like that- he can be supremely analytical and logical but there is a wild child hidden in him and if he feels it is something he MUST do according to his code of honour, he will and then damn the consequences. That was the way with the stepping in to save the poor man. I deliberately began with the quote I used to apply to a number of people but especially Sanskaar in this part. I see no bigger coward than the one who stands and watches wrong being committed- my eternal love for the Mahabharata comes in here 😃. He will have believed that they would finish this exchange and be on their way before long but of course chance being a fine thing, that has backfired!

As for the identity of the new arrival- 16 will reveal that rather quickly 😉 and the current bets already seem stacked in favour of Crown Prince Adarsh I see! Ah well till 16 then. Thank you as ever and love always xoxo

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