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Posted: 9 years ago
Priya, Vrinda : thanks so very much for your awesome comments. I shall reply in detail as soon as the AO mens final finishes. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

I will be the happiest tennis fan when i see Novak losing a finals. Hope my dream comes true this year.


Nita...Let's root for him to win THE Grand Slam this year. Them next year he can lose 1 or 2 slams, it's OK. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna

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Dear Viji,
I'm a little tied up due to exams so a short comment on this wonderful 2 part drabble during the short time I have.
I enjoyed reading it to the core. Swara has a crush on Varun Kapoor 🤣 hahaha. Damn awesome way to put in the whole couple fighting for tv at 9.30. I really enjoyed reading each word you had written. Part 1 had me ROFL. Poor guy was gyming to get calf muscles 🤣 and during the much awaited show off he did show off a lot more than calf muscles. I was literally in tears laughing during part 1. Thank you for this short break during tense exam studying.
Part 2 was beautiful in the emotional sense. I wish the CVs had put in some more sweet moments between SwaSan when they were fake married. The emotion content in this part made me go all crazy. They love each other without realizing it. Damn beautiful and loved reading it.
Please keep writing. :)

-V


Hey Vrinda...🤗 🤗

First off, good luck for your exams...and please don't worry at all about the length of comments. As I always say, I just want my pals to read when convenient, and your feedback always means a lot.

So happy you loved this drabble series. I am extremely glad I could give you a cheerful break between all the intense studying for your exams. 😊

Sanskaar the poor dude has become possessive about Swara without really realizing why. 😆 😉 He wants all her focus and attention to himself, and is a tad jealous of her mild fangirling over Varun Kapoor and Roger Federer. 😉

All that toning and getting ripped impressed Swara anyway...😳 😉 And then of course, the towel decided to play cupid as well.
😆 😆

Part 2 showed SwaSan intense care and protectiveness about each other. Yes, I would certainly say they have started moving from their close friendship to a much deeper adoration, without consciously becoming aware of it as yet.

Thanks again V. 🤗

Love,

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Hey dear. ...do I address you as Tanni?🤗🤗

Thanks so very much for your comment. I am so very happy to hear that you loved this drabble series.

Possessive and slightly jealous Sanskaar is really adorable na?😆😉He had subconsciously become quite possessive about Swara, and wants all her focus and attention to himself. 😉He can't help but get a wee bit jealous at her mild fangirling over Varun Kapoor and Roger Federer.😳

That's why he goes all out to get a ripped and toned physique, to impress Swara. A better physique than Federer.😆And he certainly does impress her.😉Of course the towel also decides to play cupid between SwaSan. 😳

Ragini is a complete wacko. She wants to advertise to Swara, the fact that she has got her "haq" since she feels this would make Swara dejected and go back to the baadi. She doesn't realize that Swara doesn't want to separate Lakshya from her at all. But who will make that paranoid schemer understand anything rational? 😃

Sanskaar is so caring and protective about Swara, he would never mind scratching himself all over his back, if that means shielding Swara from RagLak's taunts and insults. And Swara is so concerned about Sanskaar's cuts, she applies ointment and gives him the much deserved TLC. ☺️☺️

So happy you loved this piece. Am hoping to post couple of more drabbles tomorrow.

Cheers

Viji



Viji 🤗
yep u can call me tanni or ovi whatever u want..because both the names r mine😊
I agree possesive & slightly jelous sanskar is sooo adorable...y swara wont impress yaar ..we fangirl cant resist from him...aur here sanskar is her husband...that too even he is getting better physique & well toned body to impress her actually i wanna see this possesive and jelous sanskar in near episodes...not only him i wanna see swara too do something to impress him😊
umm what ll i say about ragini she always stay in her delutional world...alltime uski paila pyaar,uski pati & uski haq...bla bla bla bt she never gets happy with these too...actually without taunting swara she cant digest her foods,isiliye she is always behind of her 😆
sanskar can do everything for swara nd she too take caring him,i am loving it😊
Yayyy i am eagerly waiting for your next drabble series..though i already read finished your all stories bt dnt comment there bcz its always very tough to comment from mobile...and i am not good in expressing my words...😔
Btw thank you sooo much for writting all the beautiful stories...keep writting ...u are such a great writter😊
Loads of love😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bones123

ooo what a lovely set of drabbles

Love All

1. RogerFedererforLife

2. Loved the entire interaction, I wish the makers spent time on some moments like these. That fake marriage and one room mein bandh was my fav time in the serial :) Totally get Swara's fascination and bechara Sanskaar...what else can he do than compete :P Calf ki izzat ka sawaal tha ;)


Scars of Love

If the fake marriage was my fav part, the Lakshya Ragini gloating and parading was my least fav part in the same time. Ughhh... each competing with the other for doofus crown !!

The comment on Lucky not doing work was amazing 😆😆 He seriously does precious little...and Ragini and her Haq and her Pehla Pyaar...abbe yaar seriously nobody cares ;)

Loved how Sanskaar retailiated, egg on their faces. I raise your silly hickey to my feral scratches...buhahahahaha

Loved how Swara's concern was more for his scratches than the Haqckey 😉 Total Aweeeness !!

Such breezy reads to a past that would have held these lovely moments and more :) Shall hang on to these stories till the ghosts of present clear :P


Hey Priya. ...🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton yaar. So very happy to hear that you liked this 2 part drabble series.

Roger Federer is one of my favorite players too, though I always preferred Nadal earlier and now Novak. 😊

Yup, Sanskaar certainly got miffed at Swara's mild fangirling over Varun Kapoor and Roger Federer. 😆 And then started the 30 day insanity workout and the 15 days to get super ripped programs. 😉 Well, his toned and ripped physique certainly impressed Swara. 😆 Somehow I don't think Swara minded the towel malfunction that much. 😉😳

As for part 2, Sanskaar is hyper protective and caring of Swara. ...He just cannot tolerate RagLak taunting HIS Swara. 😉 Oh those feral scratches beat those silly hickeys and stubble burns Ragini was proudly displaying, hands down. 😆

I so loved writing those lines about how...well, perpetually vela Lakshya Ji was those days. 🤣 🤣 SO happy that you liked reading them too.

Am hoping to post my next 2 drabbles tomorrow. These are actually a spin off from drafts i wrote for my earlier fics, which I had set aside during final pre post editing. I had planned to use these fot my later works.

Love,

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ovi_Tanni



Viji 🤗
yep u can call me tanni or ovi whatever u want..because both the names r mine😊
I agree possesive & slightly jelous sanskar is sooo adorable...y swara wont impress yaar ..we fangirl cant resist from him...aur here sanskar is her husband...that too even he is getting better physique & well toned body to impress her actually i wanna see this possesive and jelous sanskar in near episodes...not only him i wanna see swara too do something to impress him😊
umm what ll i say about ragini she always stay in her delutional world...alltime uski paila pyaar,uski pati & uski haq...bla bla bla bt she never gets happy with these too...actually without taunting swara she cant digest her foods,isiliye she is always behind of her 😆
sanskar can do everything for swara nd she too take caring him,i am loving it😊
Yayyy i am eagerly waiting for your next drabble series..though i already read finished your all stories bt dnt comment there bcz its always very tough to comment from mobile...and i am not good in expressing my words...😔
Btw thank you sooo much for writting all the beautiful stories...keep writting ...u are such a great writter😊
Loads of love😊


Thanks so much Tanni. 🤗 🤗

Am so happy to hear you've read my previous works and loved them so much. Made my day to hear that. 🤗

I will be posting my next 2 drabbles tomorrow.

Love,

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


Nita...Let's root for him to win THE Grand Slam this year. Them next year he can lose 1 or 2 slams, it's OK. 😊


Nope me rooting for Novak is not happening 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson


Nope me rooting for Novak is not happening 😆



Bwahahaha I knew you would say that. 😆 But try karne mein kya jata hai right? 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Bwahahaha I knew you would say that. 😆 But try karne mein kya jata hai right? 😊


Well the one good thing about the result is you seem happy.😊 , But me supporting Novak is only possible if he plays against player i hate more than him . I do have such players but other than that it is quite impossible😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson


Well the one good thing about the result is you seem happy.😊 , But me supporting Novak is only possible if he plays against player i hate more than him . I do have such players but other than that it is quite impossible😆


Arre at least let the poor dude cross the Sampras--Rafa mark of 14 slams...I tho hope he would cross 17 slams too. 😊 😉

Maybe 20? 😆

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