Swasan OS: Chocolate - Page 2

😆😆Can I just say that this particularly chocolaty lil story was absolutely and particularly and Swasaniliciously scrumptious !

Originally posted by: mystery75

now i want chocolate too😆

Ha ha ha.
U knw wht, I was actually in chocolate land while writing this one.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Very different kind of OS...I liked it...almost as much as I like chocolate!!

Chocolate is everyone's all time favourite. U, considering the OS appreciable as much as chocolate is a big thing for a novice like me.
Thank you.

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

amazing os! for a moment i forgot who is the centre of attraction swasan or chocolates :D
i love both swasan and chocolates so this is one if the best one's i hv read do write more wud be pleased to read more of ur works :)

Oh thnk u so much for this appreciation.

I know chocolate plays an important role here but what to do that's my love for chocolate.

Originally posted by: pearl.16

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">1. The title was delicious !!😃</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">2. The story was awesome !!👍🏼</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">3. The ending was wonderful !!👏</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">All in all a perfect OS that had both my fav things or should I say my obsessions.. SwaSan and chocolate !!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Do write more !! Keep me updated !!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And yes !! U are Awesome !!</font>

Thank you dear for such an encouraging comment. I'm surely touched.
Wld surely write more.
Thnk u once again.

Originally posted by: simsen23

Very nice dear..keep writting.
Love
simi

Thnk u Simi.
Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: piccola1

😆😆Can I just say that this particularly chocolaty lil story was absolutely and particularly and Swasaniliciously scrumptious !

Loved the concept ( putting chocolate and Swasan together), the particular particulars, the garbled chocolicious confession and the Sanskaari-Asanskaari realization of love!👏

Would love to see more..with choco bits slipped in between the lines😉

Thnk u thnk u so very much.
Ur encouragement is all that I need.

Chocolate, the title of the os is awesome.

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Chocolate, the title of the os is awesome.

The conversation between swara and sanskar was beautifully portrayed.

Waiting for your next update

Thnk u dear. Thnk u so much for the appreciation.
Wld surely write more.

Girl you need an award right know what a lovely combination of our power couple and oh how can I forget the thing I live off of CHOCOLATE.
Wow I am literally amazed on how you put all of this together.
Swasan was perfect like always
Haiii Tum keya kardia 😕
Now I want chocolate and I want it bad
No seriously I am not joking my mouth was watering everything I read chocolate
Thanks yaar now when my mom says chocolate is not good for you I can give her a whole list of why chocolate is absolutely amazing. 👏 👏