Swasan OS: Chocolate

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey SwaSan shippers, my first OS here in IF. Hope you all will enjoy. Feedback both positive and negative are welcomed.

Njoy.


*************** Chocolate. ********************


Chocolate is the most commonly used form of comfort known to man kind. There are over 500 flavor components, which is twice as much as Vanilla and Strawberry. Although most people find it addictive, it has less caffeine than coffee. Chocolate has long been heralded for its value as an energy source. Think of it this way: a single chocolate chip provides sufficient food energy for an adult to walk 150 feet; hence, it would take about 35 chocolate chips to go a mile, or 875,000 for an around-the-world hike. Did you know that chocolate does not affect acne what so ever? The average consumer spends more on chocolate than on their house. The Aztecs believed that chocolate was the equivalent to love...

Sanskaar sat on a particularly comfortable couch, with a particularly large amount of colorfully wrapped chunks sitting in a particularly large basket in front of his. It was true that the particular comfort of the couch was particularly comforting as was the silence of the particular empty room. So as Sanskaar sat on that particularly comfortable couch, in the middle of the particularly quiet common room, with a particularly peculiar smile across his particularly pale face he was after all rather comfortable. It wasn't until the silence was broken by a particularly, loud thump from the door opening that he considered how particularly comfortable the silence had been.

"Hi Sanskaar." A particularly beautiful girl in yellow anarkali and matching accessories said from the source of the particularly loud thump. "What's goin' on?"

"Oh nothing." Sanskaar replied in a particularly annoyed voice as the particular girl came and seated herself next to the particularly large basket. "I'm just enjoying this particularly large basket your mother sent me."

Chocolate is THE most popular flavour for any type of recipe. It is used in over 3000 recipes all around the world; the two most common being Hot Chocolate and Chocolate Chip cookies. It is an uncommonly known fact that chocolate is not fattening, although most people are unaware of this it is true. A commonly known fact about chocolate is that it is the way to a women's heart.

Swara scowled. "I didn't get any chocolate." she pouted. "And she's my own mum." Sanskaar laughed and patted the particularly large basket beside her. "No need to fret," He said with a particularly flirtatious smile, for Sanskaar, "There's enough for the both of us."

So as these two particularly close friends sat on that particularly comfy couch, in the particularly empty room eating particularly wonderful chocolate from that particularly large basket they had a particularly interesting conversation. It is a well known fact that chocolate will prove to be a conversation starter in any awkward moment of any kind. It is also a well known fact that there are eight different types of chocolate tastes available, but let's not get ahead of our selves...

So the conversation. Yes, the conversation. Ah, the conversation. To be honest, there was known. I know what you're thinking! Chocolate is a conversation starter in any awkward moment'. But, sigh, there were no awkward moments. And do you know why that is? Because as I mentioned earlier they were particularly good friends. But there is always room for more. For instance, chocolate. It is a well known fact that it is inhumanly possible to not want more chocolate. Who could resist that creamy texture? No one.

"Sanskaar." Swara said through a particularly large mouthful of particularly delicious chocolate. "Yes?" he replied, equally chocolaty.

Swara took a particularly deep breathe and sighed. This particularly huge moment in her life was about to happen and she was particularly nervous. She loved Sanskaar and there was nothing she could do about it. After overcoming all the obstacles and doing so many things, it was particularly obvious what she had to do. No, she did not have to make a big deal and start the Haq jaap like Ragini nor was it necessary for her to cry and make a big fuss about him. No, it was perfectly obvious what she had to do. It was only a matter of doing it.

"I, I..." she trailed off.

He gave her a particularly Sanskaar-ish look. "Yes?"

"I... I..." she attempted once more. "Ilovechocolate."

My, that was particularly fast.

"What?" Sanskaar asked in confusion. "Sorry, say that again."

With a deep breathe Swara sighed and spoke again in a much calmer voice. "I... I love chocolate. It's... It's delicious and wonderful and is perfect in it's own ...weird little way." She stood up now and began to pace as she spoke. "And... It's just impossible not to love chocolate because... because... I don't know it's chocolate. The way it tastes in your mouth and the way it feels in your hands. The way... the way it turns red when it speaks... and the way it smiles..."

Swara trailed off again with a pleading look in her eyes. "Sanskaar." she spoke softly.

This time in a particularly unSanskaar-ish way, he did not reply, he just listened.

"I love chocolate."

And before either of them knew what was going on, they were in each others arms with that particularly large basket off chocolate on the floor beside them. Its peculiar how things turn out that way isn't it?

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 Really liked it Sanavi. It combined 2 things I'm addicted to: SwaSan and chocolate. 😉 The entire conversation was hilarious. ...Swara trying to say she loves him...but instead saying she loved the chocolate. 😳
The entire lead up to that, with the general facts about chocolate, the way Sanskaar was sitting on the couch with the basket of chocolates in front of him...everything was very hilariously described. A nice light hearted OS. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a deliciously chocolately OS Sanavi! I've got to be brief as an on my way to meetings but I love chocolate and love SwaSan possibly more than my love for chocolate so this was a double pleasure:). Very sweet indeed- sorry for the rather poor puns! :)

I loved how Sanskaar seemed to know exactly what suddenly shy Miss Bose/Gadodia wanted to say and the ending was rather nicely unexpected- after all that pheromone inducing chocolate, who needed words eh?! X
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome sanvi 👏
Chocolate 😛
Loved it
Do write more please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very different kind of OS...I liked it...almost as much as I like chocolate!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing os! for a moment i forgot who is the centre of attraction swasan or chocolates :D
i love both swasan and chocolates so this is one if the best one's i hv read do write more wud be pleased to read more of ur works :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok !! So here are my views regarding the OS...

1. The title was delicious !! 😃

2. The story was awesome !! 👍🏼

3. The ending was wonderful !! 👏

All in all a perfect OS that had both my fav things or should I say my obsessions.. SwaSan and chocolate !!

Do write more !! Keep me updated !!

And yes !! U are Awesome !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

😆Really liked it Sanavi. It combined 2 things I'm addicted to: SwaSan and chocolate. 😉The entire conversation was hilarious. ...Swara trying to say she loves him...but instead saying she loved the chocolate. 😳

The entire lead up to that, with the general facts about chocolate, the way Sanskaar was sitting on the couch with the basket of chocolates in front of him...everything was very hilariously described. A nice light hearted OS.👏



Thnx yaar.
Chocolate is my favourite too nd this was drafted during the initial swasan days seeing their liking towards chocolate especially Swara. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

What a deliciously chocolately OS Sanavi! I've got to be brief as an on my way to meetings but I love chocolate and love SwaSan possibly more than my love for chocolate so this was a double pleasure:). Very sweet indeed- sorry for the rather poor puns! :)

I loved how Sanskaar seemed to know exactly what suddenly shy Miss Bose/Gadodia wanted to say and the ending was rather nicely unexpected- after all that pheromone inducing chocolate, who needed words eh?! X



Oh dear, thnk u for such a lovely comment.
Though being brief , u easily depicted ur feelings. That only matters.
It was really encouraging nd that is what I need.
Thnx once again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome sanvi 👏
Chocolate 😛
Loved it
Do write more please



Thnx for ur encouraging words.
Wld try to write more about SwaSan.

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