RAGLAK SS BANDHAN: The String of Hearts C5 Pg 8 - Page 4

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OMG ..
Dis is hell intresting and amazing...
Read both de chap nd trust me its outstanding..
Lubd dis Ragini, .
Laksh seems funny..
Plzz updte nd also plzz do PM me also.

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Chapter 3

Swara, Janki milkar panditjise achhasa sagayi ka muhurat niklawati hain. Lakshya Jhanjharme aakar official chutti leke dadi ke sath Delhi aata hain. Dadi usse Raginise milwaneke liye kehti hain. Lakshya dadiko lekar Raginike ghar aata hain. Waha Raginiki saheliya usse chidha rahi thi. Lakshya aur dadiko dekhkar Janki unke pass aati hain. Lakshya usse dadise milwata han. Ragini aakar dadike per chuti hain.

Dadi : Khush raho beta. Lakshu tune sachme apne liye heera chuna hain. Lakhome nahi karorome ek ladki hain. Wo Lakshyako Raginike sath khada karke unki najar utarti hain. Janki dadiko lekar andar jati hain. Raginiki sari saheliya Lakshya ko gher leti hain.

Gauri (Ragini's friend) Toh batayiye humare honewale jijaji, humari Raginime aapko aisa kya dikha jo aap usse dil dekar bethe?

Lakshya : Meri honewali saliji, kya batau, agar ek baat ho toh bataunga na. Agar me aapki Raginiki khubiya batane bethunga toh pura salbhi kam padega aur agar likhne bethu toh shayad novel bhi kum padegi. Sab iss batse haste hain.

Gauri : Kya baat hain Ragini, humare jijaji toh bade romantic hain aur majakiyabhi hain. Sab wapas hasti hain. Janki aur Dadi aati hain, Lakshya beta idhar aana, hum donone yeh socha hain ki sagaike liye ab sirf thodehi din baki hain toh tum aur Ragini jake sagaiki anguthiya aur tumhare dressesbhi le aao, hum tab tak panditijise bat karke bakiki taiyariya karte hain.

Dadi : Haa Lakshu tum dono jaldi jao aur haan Swarase meri jara baat karwa. Usse bhi yaha bulana hain. Dadi Swarako phone karke usse waha bulati hain. Lakshya aur Ragini bahar jate hain.

Thodi der bad RAGLAK dresses aur rings lekar aate hain.

Dadi : Lakshu beta humne panditjise baat ki hain unhone sagai ke turant 8 din bad shadika muhurat bataya hain. Hum sabne wahi muhurat fix kiya hain.

Janki : Haan aur humne unse shadiki taiyarionke bareme bhi pucha hain. Ab Ragini, humare pass bilkul time nahi hain, abhi hume invitation cards chapwane hain, hall book karna hain, mehmanoki list banani hain...

Ragini : Maa... please humari baat toh sun lo...

Janki : Kya hua beta? Jabse aaye ho tabse sirf hum donohi baat kar rahe hain.

Ragini Lakshyake taraf dekhti hain. Lakshya blink karta hain. Auntyji hum donone ye teh kiya hain ki hum shadi bahot simplesi karenge. Sirf humare close relativeskohi bulayenge aur shadi hum mandirmehi karenge. Waisebhi jyadatar log sirf dikhaweke liyehi aate hain. Yaha wahaki baate karke show off karte hain aur khana kha kar chale jate hain, toh isiliye humne socha hain hum jyada logonko nahi bulayenge sirf humare close relativesko hi bulayenge, aur hallme shadi karnese achha hain hum chahte hain bhagwanjike samne hum humari nayi jindagi shuru kare isliye humne teh kiya hain pehle hum register marriange karenge aur uske bad mandirme puri riti riwajonke sath shadi karenge.

Ragini : Haa maa aur jo paise bachenge wo hum humare instituteko denge.

Janki ye sari bat sunkar naraj hoti hain. Yeh kya baat hui Ragini? Tum meri ek lauti beti ho aur Lakshya beta tumhare pariwarme bhi toh yeh aakhri shadi hain na? Dadiji aaphi kuch boliye na.

Dadi : Janki beta waise bachhebhi sahi keh rahe hain. Hum un logonpe paisa kyu kharch kare jo shadise jyada ek dusreki chugliya karte hain aur sirf dikhawa karne shadime aate hain. Usse achha jo bachhone socha hain wo sahi hain. Janki sochti hain. Sahi kaha dadiji aapne. Ab waisebhi agar miya biwi raji toh kya karega kaji? Iss batpe sab haste hain.

Sagaike do din pehle

Shadi aur sagaiki taiyariya dono gharome badi dhumdhamse shuru hoti hain. Ragini Jankike kamreme aati hain. Janki usse balonme malishkarne lagti hain. Kya hua Ragu beta kya soch rahi ho tum?

Ragini : Maa aapko yeh sab ajib nahi lag raha?

Janki : Ajib? Matlab kya hain tumhara?

Ragini : Dekho na maa, uss conferenceme Lakshyaka challenge dena, uske dusrehi din Lakshya aur uske bhabhika ghar aana, aapko Lakshya pasand aana aur ab yeh sagai aur turant shadi ye sari baate aapko ajib nahi lag rahi? Ye sab bahot jaldi jaldi nahi ho raha?

Janki : Oh toh yeh baat hain. Beta tumhe kya lagta hain me teri shadi aisehi kisi ajnabike sath karungi? Jab tune mujhe conferenceki bat batayi thi maine ussi din Lakshyaki sari information nikali thi. Ragini yeh baat sunkar shock hoti hain. Kya? Iska matlab aapko Lakshyake bareme sab kuch pata tha? Par kaise?

Janki : Jab tumne mujhe conferenceki bat batayi ussi din maine uss conference organise karnewali Mrs. Guptase Swarake bareme pata kiya aur fir Lakshyake bareme pata kiya. Ladka sachme bahot achha hain Ragini. Usne apne bachpanmehi maa baapko khoya tha, uski parvarish uski dadi aur bade bhai Sanskarne hi ki hain. Lakshya apne dadise bahot pyar karta hain. Uske dadaji gaonke mukhiya the. Jhanjhar jaise gaonme reh karbhi wo purane sochke nahi the. Unhone apne sath Lakshyake dadijiko bhi padhaya. Unka sapna tha gaonme school aur hospital kholneka aur yeh sapna Lakshyane pura kiya. Wahake sare log Maheshwari khandanko bahot mante hain. Sanskarki padhayi hone ke bad wo Delhime shift hua aur ab ek MNC me kam karta hain. Uski biwi Swarabhi bahot achhi ladki hain.

Ragini : Maa aapne itni sari information ek dinme nikali?

Janki : Haan thodi basic pehle nikali aur bakiki dadijine batayi. Sach kehti hu Ragini, dadiji bahot achhi hain. Wo tumhara bahot khayal rakhengi aur waisebhi mere honewale damadjibhi tumse bahot pyar karte hain. Ragini wahase jane lagti hain. Chaliye maa aap so jayiye. Bye good night.

Janki : Are meri sherni sharma gayi.

Ragini : Maa me sharmati nahi hu. Ab aap so jayiye. Wo wahase chali jati hain.

Ragini chatpe aati hain. Usse uski friend Rashmika phone aata hain. Ragini, me yeh kya sun rahi hu? Tum shadi kar rahi ho? Humne toh shadi na karneka teh kiya tha na toh tum ye shadi kaise kar sakti ho?

Ragini : Rashmi relax ho jao. Me yeh shadi sirf meri maaki wajahse kar rahi hu. Waise bhi tujhe pata hain mujhe iss shadike bandhanme bandhneka koi shauk nahi hain, mere liye mere kam aur maa se jyada iss duniyame koi important nahi hain. Aur tu bilkul fikar na kar, me yeh shadi sirf uss Lakshyake bachheko sabak sikhaneke liye kar rahi hu.

Rashmi : Then ok, warna mujhe laga tha tu bhi typical ladkionki tarah ban gayi hain.

Ragini : Yeh toh ho hi nahi sakta Rashmi darling. Ab tu dekh ek bar shadi ho jane de fir uss Lakshyako me kaise pareshaan karti hu. Iss batpe dono hasti hain.

Sanskar's House

Lakshya apne kamreme kitab padh raha tha. Swara usse coffee dene aati hain. Yeh kya Lakshya? Abhi tak kam kar rahe ho? Ab toh kam chod dijiye dewarji.

Lakshya : Kya karu bhabhi, kam bhi toh jaruri hain. Bas thodasahi baki hain.

Swara : Ye lo tumhari coffe, thandi honese pehle pini hain samjhe na. Lakshya hasta hain.Lakshya mujhe tumse jaruri baat karni hain.

Lakshya kitab band karta hain. Haa kahiyena bhabhi. Kya hua bhabhi? Sab thik toh hain na?

Swara : Haan waise sab thik toh hain par pata nahi kyu manme ajibsi bechaini ho rahi hain.

Lakshya : Kya hua bhabhi?

Swara : Lakshya, me janti hu tu Raginise pyar karta hain par kya wo tujhse yeh shadi apne dilse kar rahi hain? Lakshya usse confuse look deta hain. Mera matlab ye hain ki tumne usse jo challenge diya tha isliye wo tujse shadi kar rahi hain aur ye baat tum bhi achhese jante ho. Mujhe issi baatki bahot fikar ho rahi hain. Ragini normal ladki nahi hain. Wo Jhanjhar jaise gaonme kaise adjust kar payegi aur agar usne tumhe pareshaan kiya toh? Dadi bhi toh tumhare sathhi rehti hain. Agar usne unse kuch ulta seedha kaha toh? Yahi soch soch kar mera sar phata ja raha hain. Har bar mere dimagme yeh ekhi baat aa rahi hain. Tune usse shadi karneka faisla galat toh nahi liya na?

Lakshya : Bhabhi, aap in sab batonki jyada fikar mat kijiye. Yeh sari bate mainebhi achhese sochi hain. Me yeh bhi janta hu wo aisa kuch nahi karegi jisse dadiko bura lagega aur rahi baat meri toh wo agar sher hain toh me bhi toh sawasher hu na bhabhi. Dono iss batpe haste hain. Isliye keh raha hu aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye. Maine usse pyar kiya hain bhabhi aur dekhna mera yeh pyar ussebhi badal dega.

Swara : Me janti thi tum aisehi kahoge aur I am sure tum usse jarur badloge. Lakshya hasta hain.

RAGLAK ki sagai achhese hoti hain. Sab log shadiki taiyariya karte hain. Sari rasmonme bache huye din bit jate hain aur shadika din aata hain. Raginike ghar RAGLAK ki register marriage hoti hain aur sab log mandirme jate hain. Sari rasme honeke bad panditji unhe pati patni ghoshit karte hain. Shadike bat sare dost RAGLAKki bahot khichai karte hain.

Nikhil : Beta Lakshya aakhirkar tujhe shernine apne jaalme odhhi liya.

Lakshya : Odh toh ussi din liya tha jis din usne tujhe sunaya tha. Yad hain tumhe maine kaha tha jaldhi tumhari bhabhise tumhe milwaunga dekh maine milwa diya. Dono haste hain.

Kalpana NGO ki chairman Kalpanaji Raginiko wish karne aati hain. Ragini Lakshyase unhe milwati hain. Dono unka aashirwad lete hain. Khush raho dono. Ragini beta bahot achha ladka mila hain tujhe. Khush raho beta, me aaj tumhare liye bahot khush hu. Wo usse foreheadpe kiss karti hain. Lakshya beta, humari Raginika khayal rakhna, manaki wo thodi gussel hain par dilki bahot achhi hain.

Lakshya : Aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye. Me uska issi janamme nahi balki pure sat janmome achhese khayal rakhunga. Kalpana iss batpe hasti hain.

Janki bidaiki sari rasme nibhati hain. Lakshya aur DF se Raginika khayal rakhneke liye kehti hain. Sab log Jhanjharke liye nikalte hain.

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RagLak shaadi done super. Loving sherni ragini she is too good.
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Awesome...just pat shadi...wow...let's see how lakshya makes,her fall in love and what will ragini do...I really like the strong attitude and confident laksh here...u r brilliant...and I really like swalak relationship as well...super cute bond...
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Nice update wow wonder what Ragini will do after the marriage I hope she doesn't hurt Dadi she seems like a really nice person
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Originally posted by: sudhi03

RagLak shaadi done super. Loving sherni ragini she is too good.

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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Awesome...just pat shadi...wow...let's see how lakshya makes,her fall in love and what will ragini do...I really like the strong attitude and confident laksh here...u r brilliant...and I really like swalak relationship as well...super cute bond...

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bhabhi devar bond hain super cute hoga hi 😆
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Nice update wow wonder what Ragini will do after the marriage I hope she doesn't hurt Dadi she seems like a really nice person

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actually dadike bareme socha nahi maine ab tak 😕
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CHAPTER 4

Shadi honeke bad sare log Jhanjharme aate hain. Wahake log RAGLAKka swagat unke traditional methodse karte hain. Ragini bahot irritate hoti hain par wo chupchap rehti hain. Dadi, Swara pehle jakar gruh praveshki tayari karte hain. Sare log Maheshwari Mansionme aate hain. Swara RAGLAK ki aarti utarkar Raginika gruh pravesh karati hain. Dadi RAGLAKko Lakshyake maa-papake photoke pas le aati hain,"Dekha Annapurna, humara Lakshya kitni achhi bahu le aaya hain humare liye, tum bhi ab inki khushiyal jindagike liye inhe aashirwad dedo". Wo RAGLAKko hath jodneko kehti hain. Fir Dadi unhe gharke mandirme le jakar Raginise bhagwanke samne diya jalaneko kehti hain. Lakshya uski help karta hain.

Lakshya (dheere se) : Wo...wo me tumse kuch kehna chahta tha...

Ragini : Kya?

Lakshya : Waise kehna toh kabka chahta tha par maukahi nahi mil paya toh socha abhi bol du.

Ragini : Dekho itna footage khaneki jarurat nahi hain. Jo bhi kehna hain wo jaldi bolo.

Lakshya : Tum aaj bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Ragini : Kya?

Lakshya : Kya matlab? Maine kaha you are looking beautiful.

Ragini : Wo toh me humesha lagti hu. Kuch naya batao.

Lakshya : Uff oh... tum bhi na ajib ladki ho yar, tariff ki to wo bhi tumhe pasand nahi aayi, tumhe kya sirf jhagdnahi pasand hain?

Ragini : Tumne toh khudne jawab bhi de diya, toh ab iss sawal ka kuch matlab nahi raha.

Lakshya : Ufff... kya ladki ho tum...

Ragini : Thanks for the compliment Mr. Lakshya Maheshwari. Wo use aatitudewali smile deti hain.

Itneme Sanskar unko awaj deta hain,"Agar tum logonka diya jalana hogaya ho toh tum bahar aa sakte ho ab. Hum sab wait kar rahe hain". Sab log haste hain. Ragini embrass feel karti hain.

Dadi : Uff oh Sanskar, ab bas bhi karo, ek mauka nahi chhodte tum log tang karneka. Swara beta, jao Raginiko tayar kardo. Abhi kuch derme receptionke liye mehman aane shuru honge. Jaldi jao beta. Swara Raginiko lekar roomme jati hain.

At Reception

Receptionke liye Lakshyake hospitalka staff, uske sare friends, Janki, Raginike sare friends aur kuch VIP guests aate hain. Dadi sabko welcome karne gatepe khadi rehti hain. RAGLAK neeche hallme aane lagte hain. Lakshya purple colorki sherwani pehnta hain aur Ragini red colorki sari pehnti hain. Lakshya apna hath Raginike samne karta hain. Ragini use what look deti hain.

Lakshya : Ab newly wedded couple hain hum toh sabke samne hathme hath dalkar janahi padegana warna socho hum aisehi muh uthakar gaye toh sab log sochenge ki humare beech shadike pehle dinhi jhagda ho gaya fir wapas sab hume chidhane lagenge, wo attitudese kehta hain "me toh seh lunga" aur Raginike taraf dekhta hain "lekin tum..." Ragini sochne lagti hain aur turant Lakshyaka hath pakadti hain. Lakshya hasta hain,"Good girl". Ragini use tough look deti hain,"Maine tumhara hath pakda hain iska matlab yeh mat samjna ki me tumhare explainationse dar gayi thi, wo toh maine bas...

Lakshya : Nahi...bilkul nahi, me toh achhese janta hu ki Ms. Ragini Gadodia... wo Raginike taraf dekhkar cutesi smile deta hain,"Nahi mera matlab Mrs. Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari to kisisebhi nahi darti. Wo to sherni hain.

Ragini : Jyada bate mat karo aur ab chupchap neeche chalo Mr. Maheshwari. Wo dono neeche aate hain. Sab log RAGLAK ko congratulate karte hain. RAGLAK sabko welcome karte hain. Raginiki friend Rashmi aakar use tightly hug karti hain,"Kaisi ho Ragini? Sab thik hain na?"

Ragini : Haan sab thik hain. Tu kaisi hain?

Rashmi : Me thik hu. Ragini use Lakshyase milwati hain.

Kuch der bad Rashmi dadise kuch bat karke unse permission leti hain. Wo centerme aake mic hath me leke announcement karti hain, "Ladies and gentlemen, attention please, aaj hum yaha Ragini aur Lakshyako badhayi dene aaye hain, par bina nach gane ke koi bhi function pura toh ho hi nahi sakta, aur shayad aap sabko pata na ho isliye me ek raaj ki bat aapko batana chahti hu, humari Ragini ek bahot achhi dancer hain. Lakshya surprise hokar Raginike taraf dekhta hain,"Kya baat hain Ragini, tumne bataya nahi mujhe?"

Ragini : Wo toh bas aisehi thoda bahot seekhi hu. Wo casually bol jati hain,"Waise bhi ab toh sathmehi rahenge toh aur bhi bate janhi loge tum..." wo cutesi smile deti hain. Lakshya Raginike replyse khush hota hain aur uske taraf intensely dekhta hain,"Chalo man to liya tumne ki ab hume sathmehi rehna hain". Ragini jerkse uske taraf dekhti hain. (Eye lock) Sabki talionki awajse dono eye lock todte hain. Rashmi Raginiko dance karnekeliye bulati hain par wo mana karti hain par sabke kehne par wo man jati hain. Rashmi Lakshyake taraf dekhati hain,"Waise jijaji aapke liyebhi ek surpeise hain" aur wo hasti hain aur Lakshya confuse hokar dekhta hain.

Hallki sari lights off hoti hain aur spot light Raginipe girta hain. Wo dance karne lagti hain.

Chammak challo chel chabeeli
Kehte hai mujhko raas raseeli

Wo nachte huye samne aati hain. Baki ladkiya usse join hoti hain.

Haan chamak challo chel chabeeli
Kehtein hai mujhko raas raseeli

Wo Rashmi jisne pura Lakshyake jaisa costume pehna tha uske pass aakar uske chehrepe pyarse hath ghumati hain.

Bach ke tu rehna dildaar sajna
Ho mehanga padega tujhko pyaar sajna

Wo Lakshya (Rashmi)ke perpe jorse per marti hain.

Baja re baja re baja band baaja
Arey iska baja re dekho band baaja

Lakshya, Rashmiko dekhkar samaj jata hain ki yeh sab Ragini aur Rashmika pehlesehi plan kiya hua tha. Wo kuch react nahi hota aur dance enjoy karne lagta hain. Ragini dance karti hain.

Haan chammak challo chel chabeli
Kehtein hai mujhko raas raseli
Bachke tu rehna dildaar sajnaa
Ho mehnga padega tujhko pyar sajna
Chamak challo chel chabeli
Haan haan ho ho..

Ragini aayneme apna chehra dekhti hain. Wo Lakshyake taraf dekhti hain. Lakshya wink karta hain.

Yeh roop rang mera jad hai fitno ki
Arey niyat badal gayi jaane kitno ki

Yeh roop rang mera jad hai fitno ki

Chorus dancersmese ek ladka uske pass aata hain.

Arey niyat badal gayi jaane kitno ki

Ragini uss ladkeko smile deti hain, wo ladka faint honeki acting karta hain.

Hanske jidhar main apni nazar utha doon
Udhar bane afsaane

Do - teen ladke heart shape pe Raginika nam likh kar uske peeche aate hain.

Yahan milenge tujhko gali gali
Mere naam ke deewane

Rashmi (Lakshya)ko wo pass lati hain

Ho... aisi-waisi main nahi raja
Tere jaise kitne hai, jaa jaa

wo use dhakka deti hain... Wo dono dance karne lagti hain. Real Lakshya wahase chala jata hain. Ragini yeh bat nahi dekhti. Swara samaj jati hain ki Raginine yeh sab janbujkar kiya hain. Wo gussese Ragini ki taraf dekhti hain. Sanskar use shant rehneko kehta hain. Suddenly sabko real dhol bajaneki awaj aati hain. Sab log waha dekhte hain. Rashmi Ragini udhar dekhti hain. Lakshya dhol lekeunke pass aata hain. Rashmi sideme hoti hain. Lakshya dhol bajate huye Raginike round ghumta hain. Dhol sideme rakh kar wo dance karne lagta hain. Wo Raginiko apne taraf khichta hain.

Teri ada, Ada lagti hai qaatil
Bade hi pyar se loote mera dil

Ragini use dur jati hain, Lakshya wapas use apne taraf khichata hain.

Ho.. teri ada, Ada lagti hai kaatil
Bade hi pyar se loote mera dil

Wo use uthakar gol ghumata hain.

Zidd pe agar main aaun
Tto pal mein tujhko abhi utha le jaaun

Wo use neeche khada karta hain.

Yeh samajh le gori meri hai tu
Tujhe pyar se samjhaaun

Lakshya use apne taraf khichata hain aur dono ek dusre ke taraf dekhake thumke lagate hain.

Arey aa naino ke pench lada le
Arey mere jaisa rog laga le

Wo use gol ghumata hain aur bahonme cover karta hain, Ragini uski aankhonme dekhati hain.

Haan, banke rahunga tera yaar sajna
Ho tujhse kiya hai maine pyar sajna

Swara Sanskar unhe join hote hain.

Baja re baja re baja band baaja
Arey iska baja re dekho band baaja

Ragini sharmati hain, Lakshya uske taraf dekhta hain. Rashmi Raginike pas aakar pat karti hain. Ragini apne senseme aakar Lakshyase dur jakar dance karti hain.

Chamak challo chel chabeli
Kehtein hai mujhko raas raseeli
Bachke tu rehna dildaar sajna
Ho mehanga padega tujhko pyar sajna

Dadi aakar RAGLAKki najar utarti hain. Ragini Lakshyake taraf attitudese dekhti hain, Lakshya wink karke use cute smile deta hain.

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