RAGLAK SS BANDHAN: The String of Hearts C5 Pg 8

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Hello I am Ketaki... you all can call me ketu... I am also RAGLAK and RAGSAN fan... I am trying to write some stuff on our special couple RAGLAK...hope you all will like it...

INDEX :
Chapter 1 : pg 1
Chapter 2 : pg 4
Chapter 3 : pg 5
Chapter 4 : pg 6
Chapter 5 : pg 8

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Wow...am too ragya and sangini aka,ragsan fan...I want u to write on ragsan too...
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4548821&TPN=21
Between this is the link to my ragya story...if u have time do read and comment...
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Chapter 1

At Delhi

Maheshwari's House

Man : Hello dadi kaisi ho aap? Wahape sab thik hain na?

Dadi : Haa beta sab thik hain. Tu achhese Delhi pahoch gaya na? Tera kaam kab tak khatam hoga?

Man : Haa dadi me thikse pahuch gaya aur kam 3 - 4 dinome ho jayega. Aap itni fikar kyun karti ho dadi me ab bachha thodi hu.

Dadi : Haan... haan.. pata hain ki tu ab bachha nahi raha bahot bada doctor ban gaya hain par mere liye tum mere wo chhote Lakshu hi ho.

The man is none other than our male protagonist Lakshya Maheshwari. Lakshya hospitalke kamke wajahse Delhi aata hain. Lakshya haskar, "Off oh dadi aap bhi na, ab me bada ho gaya hu ab toh mujhe Lakshu bulana band kijiye".

Dadi : Ab ye dramebaji band kar me achhese janti hu mera Lakshu bolna tumhe pasand hain aur wo hasti hain. Ab bata Sanskar ke yaha pahuch gaya tu? Sanskar aur Swara kaise hain?

Lakshya : Bhai aur bhabhi dono achhe hain. Bhabhi aapko bahot yaad karti hain aur bhai humesha ki tarah kaam me busy hain.

Dadi : Lagahi tha mujhe, tum dono bhaionko kam ke alawa aur kuch suzta bhi kaha hain? Pata nahi bechari Swara Sanskar ko kaise sambhal rahi hain. Dadi ke dimagme kuch aata hain Beta jara Swarako phone de mujhe usse jaruri baat karni hain.

Lakshya : Mujhe pata hain aapko kya baat karni hain par maine aapse kaha na dadi mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni hain. Abhi toh me jindagime bahot kuch karna chahta hu.

Dadi : Nahi, me kuch nahi janti, yahi sahi umar hain shadi ki abhi nahi toh kya budhape me shadi karega tu? Bilkul nahi. Swara ko phone de ab. Lakshya muh banakar Swarako phone deta hain. Dadise baat karke wo Lakshya ke taraf dekhti hain, "Toh batayiye dewarji kaisi dulhan chahiye aapko?"

Lakshya : Bhabhi me sach me abhi shadi nahi karna chahta. Abhi mujhe jindagime bahot kuch karna hain par dadi toh yeh baat samajhtihi nahi.

Swara : Toh kya hua tum shadi ke bad bhi toh apne life me bahot kuch kar sakte ho na aur aisa bhi ho sakta hain ki jo ladki tumhare jindagime aayegi wo bhi tumhari prerna bankar tumhara sath de.

Lakshya : Par bhabhi abhi itni jaldi...

Swara : Yahi sahi umar hain Lakshya. Tum ek bar achhese iske bareme socho.

Lakshya : Achha thik hain par abhi hum ye topic yahi close karte hain. Aapko pata hain waha gharme bhi dadi mera har roj iss batpe sar khati rehti hain. Swara iss bat par hasti hain. Sanskar fresh hokar dining room me aata hain, "Toh bata chhote kaisa hain tu? dadi kaisi hain aur tumhari practice kaisi chal rahi hain?"

Lakshya : Me thik hu bhai, dadi bhi thik hain.

Swara : Sanskar, ab jaldi hum dono ko ek bade kampe lagna hain. Sanskar confusingly uske taraf dekhta hain, "Kam? Kaisa kam?"

Swara : "Uff oh Sanskar aap bhi na kabhi toh apne officeke kamse bahar aakar aaspass ki duniya me dekho. Aap bhul gaye hain ki aapka ek chota bhai bhi hain aur uski ab shadiki umar ho gayi hain. Uske liye hume ladki dekhni hain.

Lakshya : Bhabhi aap bhi...plzzz spare me... aur wo apne room me jata hain.

Next Day
Lakshya apne dost Nikhil ke sath shopping karne Delhi marketme aata hain. Rasteme Nikhilka per fisalta hain aur wo ek ladkise takrata hain." I...I am sorry. Wo pata nahi kaise mera per fisal gaya aur me aapse..." Uss ladkike sath ek aur ladki hoti hain. Wo Nikhilke pass aakar usse sideme karti hain. "Kisne bataya tha? Kitneki shart lagayi hain?"

Nikhil : Ji... me samjha nahi. Kis bat ki shart?

Ladki : Itne nasamaj toh tum dikhte nahi ho fir bhi mere muh se sunana chahte ho toh thik hain. Batao ab ladkise takraneke liye kisne kaha tha aur ye sabke liye kitne rupionki sharth lagayi thi?

Nikhil : Nahi madam aap...aap mujhe galat samaj rahi hain. Mera sach me per fisal gaya aur iss wajahse me inse takra gaya. Aap jaisa samaj rahi hain me waisa ladka nahi hu.

Ladki : Oh achha toh tum aise kabul nahi karoge...abhi batati hu tumhe aur wo usse marne ke liye hath uthati hain par timepe aakar Lakshya uska hath pakadta hain, "Excuse me madam yeh kya kar rahi hain aap?"

Ladki : Me kya kar rahi hu ye me achhese janti hu lekin tum hote kon ho mera hath pakadnewale? Hath chhodo mera. Lakshya uska hath chhodta hain, "Me janta hu isse galti hui, par isne yeh jaan bujkar toh nahi kiya aur usne maafi bhi toh mangi hain na, toh aap iss baatko itna kyun khich rahi hain?"

Ladki : Me koi baat khich nahi rahi aur me yeh baat achhese janti hu iss ladkeka koi per wer nahi fisala, ye sab isne jaan bujkar kiya hain.

Lakshya : Are par wo bol raha hain na aur ek baat batayiye aapka aaj tak ek bar bhi per nahi fisla kya ya aap kabhi bhi kisi ladkese takrayi nahi?

Ladki : Dekho tum apni hade par kar rahe ho. Me tumse baat nahi kar rahi. Tum aapne raastese chale jao.

Lakshya : Kyun? Kyu jau me yahase? Agar mujhe dikh raha hain ye sab galat ho raha hain toh me chup kyun bethu? Aur aap bhi kyu pad rahi ho in sabke bichme? Jiss ladkise ye takraya hain hum ussise puch lete hain ki kya iss ladkene usse koi badtameezi ki ya nahi? Ladki apna sar naa karke hilati hain. Dekha aap iss bechareko khamkha suna rahi thi. Aapko me ek free advice deta hu kabhi bhi natija nikalnese pehle puri baat ko achhese jan lijiye aur uske bad natija nikal lijiye. Wo Nikhil ke kandhepe hath rakhta hain "Chal dost chalte hain."

Ladki : Oh ab me samajhi yeh sab tum apne dostko bachaneke liye kar rahe the.

Lakshya : Oh god lagta hain aapko meri di hui adviceka sach me fayda hoga. Dekhiye aap wapas natija nikal rahi hain, me toh bas sachhai ka saath de raha hu.

Ladki : Dekho tum...par uski dost usse time dikhati hain, "Kya kar rahi ho Ragini, time dekho, tumhari meeting hain na chalo jaldi". Ragini Lakshya ko tough look de kar jati hain. This ladki is none other than our female protagonist Ragini Gadodia.

Nikhil : Bhai ye tu kya kar raha tha? Tumhe pata hain wo kon thi?

Lakshya : Kya kiya maine aur tu itna kap kyun raha hain?

Nikhil : Are wo Ragini Gadodia thi. Ragini...Gadodia...

Lakshya : Thik hain na tu aise bol raha hain jaise tu sherni ke hatho bacha hain.

Nikhil : Bhai ye Ragini Gadodia shernise kum nahi hain. Isse log sherni kehte hain. Koi bhi aadmi iske muh nahi lagta. Log kehte hain iske muh lagna matlab khud apna sar shernike muhme dalne jaisa hain. Ye ek NGO hain Kalpana NGO uski manager hain aur sabse badi baat she hates men. Lakshya sochta hain, "Oh achha interesting. Ms. Gadodia lagta hain aapse wapas ek bar toh milnahi padega".

Nikhil : Kya soch raha hain tu?

Lakshya : Soch raha hu ki jaldi tumhe honewali bhabhise mila du.

Nikhil : Kya matlab?

Lakshya : Kuch nahi abhi tu darke mare apne senseme nahi hain. Chal aur wo wahase jate hain.

At Night
Lakshya Swarase Raginike bareme puchta hain par usse sirf itnahi malum hota hain ki Ragini ek NGOme kam karti hain aur log usse sherni bulate hain. Lakshya netpe Kalpana NGO ke bareme search karta hain. Usse NGO ki sari information mil jati hain aur sath me Raginike kam ke bareme bhi pata chalta hain. "Ms. Gadodia kaam toh bahot achha kar rahi ho aap par haa thodisi akad hain aapme par koi bat nahi me usse bhi sambhalunga, aur wo Raginiki photo ke taraf dekhta hain, "Ms. Gadodia urf Delhi ki Sherni" aur wink karta hain.

Gadodia Niwas
Ragini pure din Lakshyake bareme sochti hain. Janki uske kamreme tel lekar aati hain, "Are oh meri sherni beti ab kam ke bareme itna mat soch. Aaja me tumhare balonme tel laga deti hu".Ragini uske samne beth jati hain. "Kya baat hain Ragu tumhara dhyan kidhar hain? Aaj kam bahot tha kya?"

Ragini : Nahi maa, aapko pata hain aaj market me kya hua aur wo usse sari bate batati hain. Janki hasne lagti hain. Maa aap has rahi ho aur mujhe tab uss ladkepe bahot gussa aa raha tha.

Janki : Par galti tumharibhi thi na, tumnehi uske dostko galat samjha tha. Sare ladke ek jaise nahi hote beta.

Ragini : Mana ki galti meri thi par wo ladka bhi kuch kum nahi tha. Agar mujhe wo wapas mila na toh me usko achhese sabak sikhaungi bada aaya mujhe free advice dene wala.

Next Day
Swarako uske kitty partyke friendse ek conferenceka invitation milta hain. Wo Sanskarko batati hain par wo waha jane ke liye mana karta hain, "Nahi Swara mujhe iss conferenceme koi interest nahi hain. Tum ek kam karo, Lakshyako le jao. Kya pata udhar itni sari ladkionmese janab ko koi pasand aa jaye".

Lakshya : Please bhaiya mujhe isse dur hi rakhiye. Bhabhi I am sorry par mujhe nahi aana. Mujhe thorasa kam hain.

Swara : Tum dono bhai na kabhi nahi sudhroge. Humesha sirf kam..kaam...kaam..Wo conference ka card t-poy pe rakhti hain. Lakshya card dekhta hain aur Special Guest ke neeche Ragini ka nam dekh kar bahot khush hota hain aur almost chillata hain "Bhabhi mee aaunga aapke sath". Sanskar, Swara dono uske taraf jerkse dekhte hain, "Par tumne toh mana kiya tha na aur tumhe kuch kam bhi tha na?"

Lakshya : Haan kam hain par wo kya hain na bhabhi conference ka topic bahot achha hain aur mujhe interesting lag raha hain. Me aaunga aapke sath Bhabhi aur it's final. Wo apne roomme aakar ek bar invitation card dekhta hain, "Lijiye Ms. Akdu humare dusri mulakat ka time aahi gaya" aur wink karta hain.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Wow...am too ragya and sangini aka,ragsan fan...I want u to write on ragsan too...

hii 🤗
actually mere dimagme RAGSANki story bhi chal rahi hain aaj ya kal tak post karungi wo bhi 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4548821&TPN=21

Between this is the link to my ragya story...if u have time do read and comment...

are you gonna update it today 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4548821&TPN=21

Between this is the link to my ragya story...if u have time do read and comment...

i m surely read this 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ketaki19


i m surely read this😃

you have too it's AMAZING
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Please post the next part soon

yes sure 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

you have too it's AMAZING

ab toh padhnahi hain 👍🏼

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