Swasan SS:Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Chapter 8 page 13 23/7 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.
In this update you beautifully said about the bond between laksh and swara.
And I also love the poem The road not taken by Robert frost.
In life we also face the situation as like swara. We have ambitions and dreams. But sometimes we afraid about it and we just leave it in the middle way.
In life every one have their own talents like in our hands the five fingers are different shapes and they are really important to us.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Awesome update and cannot wait to read more a nice way to move the story forward...
Loved it all and more...

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome..u write very well 👍🏼
I really like ur story..portrayal of characters nd situation are nice 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
"all the choices we make in life may not be the best but we can still make it best by our efforts. Perseverance is the key. Never think that your choice is wrong. Do all you can. If you still lose it then it was never yours . What belongs to you will always find its way back to you"... So true,..
Really outstanding update dear...
The road not taken aback...perfect book for this msg...
Waiting for next ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice swasan conversation...
Lucky and swara have good bonding..
Thank you for PM..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Such an awesome story line...
Loved it so much...
Plz do pm me while updating...
Btw wat is the movie name...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Dear Achu,

I chanced on this and started reading it, thinking of just stopping with the prologue, but I could not stop reading it. And with the perseverance bit and Frost's poem, you have me completely hooked.

Very intriguing - the prologue does not indicate any ill will or unpleasant memories yet it is almost five to six years that they met. Eager to know what exactly happened.

Glad to know that you plan to update this too.

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Hey dear...
What is your name.??..if u dont mind revealling...it get easy to address...

coming to story.Read all chapters in one go.its brilliant... left me all intrigued n captivated..enjoyed alot..loved the flow n natural dialogues...curious to know more..update soon plzzz...very excited.

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hey dear please update soon

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