Calypso : SwaSan (Complete) - Page 8

Originally posted by: foresight

beautiful put. i loved the way you portrayed all three of them in this one. the insights into this ragini, her insecurities, hatred love and fear of hatred, all amazingly portrayed. i saw some glimpses of the AP from the last chapter in her when she found the reality of laksh. AP's god too had feet of clay. it took her a while to realise that, wake up and do the right think, ragini isn't like that. she had reason to withhold the info until sanskar expertly wiggles it out of her tricking her, the only way it would have worked.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sakura,

Brilliant OS - you brought out Ragini's transformation so beautifully - it is so true - one does not become evil in an instant - there are numerous moments that over time gradually erode the goodness within oneself. And after sometime, there is no way of "knowing if the person who we think we are is at the core of our being. Are you a decent girl with the potential to someday become an evil monster, or are you an evil monster that thinks it's a decent girl?" (- Derek Landy, Death Bringer)

Ragini had drunk so deep of the poison that she cannot even feel a momentary pang of remorse, in fact she is sure that if asked she would do it all over again, without hesistation. And yet, she was taken aback when Swara asked "do you hate me so much?" And how ruthlessly she manipulated Swara. Superb backstory.👏

Nyna

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Icarus was my favourite and i really like reliving it through calypso.

Loved the first two OS on it. So you were trying to cover other pov. I am glad i still seem to remember it. I thought i might have to reread it. If i cant understand some part of it.

But i did. And i loved reading it. DP and AP realization about the husband she choose over her son. Lakshyaji guilt were well written in the first one.

And ofcourse Ragini insecruity,jealousy and her knowledge that Lakshyaji will always hate swara. Her determination to keep lakshya from never finding the truth because she never wants him to hate her.I loved reading it.

Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update Sakura

Long time dear

Was waiting eagerly for your update

It was truly amazing

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: swa291

saku dear thanks for the update

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Heck Sakura...I always thought ragini's evilness was portrayed enough in Icarus but in this spinoff u have actually delved into her psyche...how can she be such a horrible person...and all her reasons for hating Swara are just so superficial...I can't justify any one of them...Swara had her entire childhood being ignored and hated by her dad whereas Ragini was super pampered but tht coddled baby couldn't even bear it tht Swara was appreciated for her inborn talent??

Laksh...another hateful character...but Ragini manipulated him too tho I dunno why I somehow can never sympathize with ppl who are taken in by other ppl's words rather than believing their own heart ... N here laksh is the one who killed n he knew it...yet he feels tht in pinning the blame on Swara it's justified coz she betrayed him??? Ragini is truly pure evil tht she could make him believe tht!!

Loved this OS!

Tas

Originally posted by: princess_tara

Nice

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Sakura 🤗 This is brilliant!! Icarus is one of my favorites. I think Calypso will top my favorites list. I had liked Ragini, until they turned her completely dark. She was a layered character. When I read through the chapter I could see the Ragini I had loved. The back story was brilliant. Loved it!!

Originally posted by: Sanya17

We kept craving fr wht we dnt hv bt wht we hv we fail to realise its worth .there is a prvrb "wht we gt we dnt wnt wht we wnt we dnt hv" raginis situation clearly prvd this prvrb she wntd laksh did all d evil things to get him whn she finally gt him she realised tht he is nt worth of all d evil things she did to gt him . I lvd d line in d begining smtimes we wnt smthing so desperately dat we frgt if we really wnt it if its worth of all d things we wnt to gt it u r really great in making ur own qutoes i lvd all d qutoes bth clctd ones n d ones u made on ur own i lvd all d qutoes we gt bth in icarus n here dats one of my rsn fr lvng icarus n d way u explnd raginis pov its really briliant we gt clear insight of ragini she ruined her sisters life in jelousy ,in insecurity in wnt of laksh bt thn she rlzd he is nt worth it
hats off to u fr dis prt
u r making me greedy aftr reading dis one i wnt to knw d pov of all crctrs aftr laksh gt prvd culprit espcly ragini n dp i wnt to knw der thgt aftr laksh gt jailed

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

This update was heart wrenching... I almost teared up, not for ragini.. For swara.. Punished for just being herself, coz of someone else's twisted mind...So much pain, turmoil.. Beautifully written...