Dil Rota Hai-RagLak SS(chap up 26/11)

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: clarity
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love it.

Totally the kind of track I would want on the show. Would be so dramatic and interesting.

Update please. 😳</font>

exactly

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Me too..
Ragini should leave the house..

yes the sooner she does the better

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Yes..m making it a RagLak SS...
With a new dashing, handsome hero too..

yay can't wait read your next chapter please post it soon

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Dis is soo amazing.. I didnt see strdy epi nd aftr reading dis updte m jz imaging oll dis to take place in show.. Ragini left home .. She chngd her nme nd will start new life.. Idiot Laksh ( as for nw he is really an idiot ) , let him suffer... Thnkww for pm.

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Rachel006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

dis was awesum n amazing , I loved it , ragini starting new life n she changed her name tats amazing , Neha first of all ua a amazing

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alisha17

@alisha17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hey great start to ur story

Would love to read the next part

Can't wait to see how Ragini's character changes into strong

Plz could u pm me wn u update

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Thank you thank you thank you so much friends for liking my creation. Because of u all and more because I will love to write it I made this OS a SS..
Plz do give feedbacks. .bashings and suggestions will be accepted with both my arms opened...

Chapter 2..
ReCaP...
Ragini comes to know the truth of Laksh for his sudden change. .she gets hurt to the core..Laksh blaming her for the situation and questioning her and she damn answers him..her answer touches every soul except of Laksh..she leaves the house and attempts a secret suicide but is seen by Swara..Ragini dies in the view of swara but is rescued by some banjaare..
Ab Aage lol..
Ragini: par hum..mera matlab hai main yahaan kaise?
Sushila: beta tum humein nadi mein behti hui mili..par tum wahaan pohochi kaise?
Ragini: Woh main ..main..haan main mandir gyi thi wahaan jal de rahi thi aur pair phisal gaya
Ramdas: Radha...beta tum ho kaun..mujhe bataao main tumhare gharwaalo se tumhe milaaunga..
Ragini gets confused..she has no words..she manages to set an excuse ..
Ragini: baba humaara(she again corrects humaara to mera..its an habit which won't be changed easily) ..mera iss duniya mein koi nahi hai..
Deepak(a child): kahin toh rehti hogi tum didi..
Saundarya(his elder sister.. almost same age as Ragini): shh..unhe aaram karne de..
Ragini: arey nahi nahi...beta tumhara naam kya hai?
Deepak: mohra naam deepak hai..tum mohe pyaar se deepu bulaa sakti ho.
Ragini: deepak. .bohot achha naam hai..
Deepak smiles...

Everyone goes..
Note: deepak and saundarya have no relations with ramdas and sushila ..they are just same community.. and lives in the same basti. ..
While going sushila kisses ragini's forehead with teary eyes..Ragini also gets tears in her eyes because she remembers Shomi, jaanvi and dadimaa..
Ragini closes her eyes and falls asleep. .

In other hut
Sushila was crying..
Ramdas: kya hua...kyon ro rahi hai tu?
Sushila: aaj iss bachchi ko dekhkar apni urmila ki yaad aa gyi. ..
Ramdas: hmm..Radha bohot pyaari hai..
Sushila: suno ji hum ise yahin rakhle kya?
Ramdas: yeh kaay keh rahi hai tu? Ye achhe ghar ki lagti hai..aur hum ise iss jhopdi mein rakhenge...na na
Sushila: par isne hi toh kaha ki iska koi na hai..
Ramdas: achha toh abhi ise yahaan ghul mil jaane de phir isse baat karenge..
Sushila: ji..

In Ragini's hut..

She is dreaming something. ...the time when her truth came out...
"Tumhe toh kisise pyaar karne ka haq hi nahi hai..""tum se main kabhi pyaar karta hi nahi tha aur ab tumse nafrat krta hoon""tum kisike pyaar ke laayak hi nahi ho""I hate u Ragini I hate u"
She also remembers what happened b4 her marriage with laksh ..
"I love you Swara"
What happened some hours ago
"Tumhe kya pata dil tootna kya hota hai.. dhoka milta hai toh kaisa lagta hai.."
In short she was dreaming what all happened in her life in past few months.. but something unknown she sees, " tum ya Woh? "
On which she wakes up with a jerk..: Woh ..
What and whom she answered in the dream?

She is just remembering a face..a blur face..
Who is this? Why is Ragini bothered about it..?

Morning
MM
In laksh's room..
He comes out of bathroom after getting ready..
Laksh: meri tie kahaan hai Ragi..
He stops in between. .
Laksh: kyon yaad kr rha hoon main use..use jisne mujhe dhoka diya. .jisne meri life barbaad kardi.. jis'se main itni nafrat karta hoon..

Everyone is in MM..except dadaji, as I said
Shomi: shekhar kal jo bhi hua theek nhi hua..
Shekhar: haan mishti..par aisa hua kya jo Woh chali gyi...
Shomi: hume Laksh se pooch..
Shekhar: nhi..nhi mishti..Woh un dono ke beech ki baat hai..hume nhi poochhna chahiye..aur agar kuchh serious hua hai..hum Ragini se baadi mein jaakar poochh lenge.

Here Swara is shocked.. she can not believe her eyes.. she is crying..
Swara: main kaise bataaun sabko..kaise..

In basti. .
Ragini(to Sushila): aap log hain kaun kaki?
Sushila: mujhe maa bolegi?
Ragini smiles and nods..
Sushila: hum log banjaare hain. .jagah jagah jaa kar gaate hain. .waise hum barsaane se hain. .yahaan kolkata mein bhi hum isi liye aayein hai..
Ragini: par maa yahaan par kahaan?
Sushila: tere baba kehte hain is baar tujhe bhi le chalenge.. tera man behel jaayega..tu chalegi?
Ragini: haan maa zarur..par jaana kahaan hai?
Sushila: yahaan par ek bade vidhhayak hain. .Durga Prasad Maheshwari..unke yahaan pooja hai..wahin jaana hai..
Ragini: maa whaan mai nhi...
Deepak: Radha jiji Radha jiji..aao main tumhe apne dosto se milata hoon..
He takes her without letting her talk to Sushila..
Ragini: deepu kahaan?
Deepak: inse milo..yeh hai gappu yeh sonu..

Suddenly a manly voice comes from her back: Ragini..
She gets shocked. .

Precap
Who is the man...Swara telling truth to everyone. ..Ragini again in MM.
Hope u liked it..plz do give feedbacks

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Really nice update aww it's nice that Ragini found people who can stay with and I like how she has Deepu and his sister so sweet, why is Laksh thinking about her, wow it's been a day and Swara hasn't told any body yet

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

really nice update
continue
who was that man who called ragini
and waiting for everybody's reaction after knowing about ragini
waiting ... continue soon