FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome!!!

Sanskarreached her in no time!!!

Saving swara was more important to him than any thing else!!!

Nice...

awww... he carried her in his arm!!!

DP whats in his mind???

Continue soon.. thank you for the pm...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Hi Nimmie,

I should be doing a victory dance, but since I'm dead on my feet I can't. I knew Durga would try to protect Lakshya no matter what his equation with the boy is. After all it is his blood.

Coming to G, (He will remain G for me I guess) Swara is effecting him too much. This was the first time he turned around without a dead man on the floor I guess. He should be careful. I knew taking Swara tugging along was a bad idea from the start.

At the moment I love the intensity building up between the fire and ice...It is a treat to read.

However I am too worried for both of them. Durga Prasad entering the game is not a very good omen in my opinion.

Will comment more on the next update I promise, very busy at the moment. Please forgive me.

loads of love,

Sakura

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

heya 😊
okk wonderful update👍🏼..and a long one too!
i just love long updates!! 😆

u know whenevr i read ur story..i feel like i'm watching some hollywood movie!! i can totally imagine evrything nd its wonderful!

u mentioned sanskaar as sanskaar when hes wd swara nd as gabriel when hes on his mission! loved it!👍🏼

Swara is surely making sanskaar do things that he never imagined!😃
even i thought hes gonna through her on the seat but nahi he didn't..but instead he placed her gently like she is his baby..awww my baby😳..loved it!

soo DP finally came in the picture! i'm exited whats gonna happen now??😊
waiting for the nxt update!

lots of love🤗

ammu

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Akshdeep Kaur

@_akaur_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Wow!!

A lot of action and SwaSan!!!

Love Sanskaar more than anything.. He is socarong ..he left Laksh for Swara... He gave in when Swara asked not to kill that man, even if he really wanted to kill him for trying to harm his Kitten...aww..

He took so much care of Swara and scolded her for spraining her leg in such a situation..

U r wonderful..keep writing ..i really love what u write

Thanks for the pm...

Continue soon

Aksh

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Pearl

@pearl.16

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

This was so beautiful !!!!

The chapter was awesome as always... Come on !! Don't write such nice chapters that makes me wanna comment again n again... U r awesome !! Remember it...

Do continue soon...

Waiting for the next update...

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Hi Nimmi 🤗

Loved this chapter dear, i liked how Swara tagged along with Gabriel , poor guy cant seem to say No to her😆

Loved her concern for him when she asked him to stay safe and his protectiveness towards her by keeping her close. I thought it was a trap by RP but it looks like i gave him more credit than he deserved. Lakhysa it is time to get seperated from your mobile , learn from Swara she lost her Samsung Galaxy 6 too😆

I know his choice would be Swara 😳and lakshya wont die this soon, but i loved how you made the entire scene logical and believable wish the cvs learn the words and their meanings 😆

DP entered , last chapter i commented on him being out of action for too long and he makes an entry , me happy.😃, if i have a soft corner for the villian trio , it is APTe so i feel bad that he was the one who got most of the blame

How can i miss out the entire Swara and Gabriel scene, his concern towards her ,his sarcastic lines like he failed his mission for the first time because of her, carrying her like photo sack , then like an hero. Wow all those scenes made me super happy.

P.S - Do continue soon and let me know😉

Edited by NitaMikealson - 10 years ago

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shamza

@shamza

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

MY GOD U ARE AWSOMEEE...HATS OF TO U...CONTINUE SOOON 😊

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

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What a chapter, Nimmi! 🤗

I didn't doubt for one moment that Gaby would have company in his hunt. 😆 I guess we all know got to know Swara by now. 😛 His kitten... here he goes again. ☺️

Gaby said Bozo was wise. 😲😲 Bromance. He's hatched his plan around Swara-- keeping her safe & near him-- how thoughtful. 😳

Ram! 😡 I think I gave him more credit than he deserved. I thought he'd be clever enough to see through this one!

Gaby's mind was half occupied by Swara-- truly her guardian angel. ❤️

I predicted that Swara would be messing up his plans () & I knew she'd ask him not to kill someone at some point but never did I think he'd let his prey walk free. 😲 Wow. 😳

Her angel... so finally she's started addressing him as hers... oh, these two. ☺️

His sarcasm & her monologues. 🤣👏 Killer combo.

So Swara, are you his heroine then? And he your hero? 😉 Why are these two so adorbs?

HA! So, Durga Prasad finally makes an entry in this game. He was always trying to keep his son away from becoming someone he wasn't made to be or meant to be wasn't he? And now he'll ask Gaby to let Laksh be... or maybe request to do anything but kill him..

I felt so bad for Apte. 😒 He respects his Saabji more than he loves Laksh doesn't he? And Ram on the other hand loves his nephew more than he respects his bade bhai. I wonder why Durga had the highest expectation from Ram but broke ties with only Apte.

Continuing my unresing spree. 🤗

Edited by -Ros- - 10 years ago

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

hey there, it's me :D

so chapter 31st, something HILARIOUSLY AWESOME AND GREAT and utterly non-assassin like meeting between the Dragon and the Angel/Assassin :D

cute little fluffs of SwaSan concerning Sanskar's name and story :D

Chapter 32nd and 33rd

cute little fluffs of SwaSan concerning the phone and small talks :D

then the ride and climbing to the mountain top :D

ya know it is not easy to keep curious little Kittens away from trouble and danger so eventually the sprained ankle :D with a villainish type rescue but a hint of kindness? (I'm stupid i know :D)

Super duper comedy, cuteness and then intense in the end

great story and writing hope to see the next update soon

P.S I was not tied to my chair this time and forced to read plus sorry for late reply I was kind of busy :)