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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: RAONE8
Awesome update👏
so it was all a swalak plan all d way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...didn't see it coming though...awesomely written👍🏼

well I still doubt laksh's intentions...maybe he still is more than what meets d eye...u have shown him smarter than d show.
lets see whats in store for us
eagerly waiting for d next update
thanks fr d PM
cont sooon

thanks so much for liking the twist...i am glad i was able to surprise you. oh laksh is fishy alright,...you will see more in the next one. 😃 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: _akaur_
Superb update..
OMG I was literally surprised when the man turned out to be Laksh, I thought it would be Sanskaar..
He is not Maheshwari but he is Agarwal..interesting
Waiting to see how will SwaSan first meet..
Continue soon...thxx for the pm...

Happy New Year... :)

happy new year to you too! aksh..

sanskar will make his entry a couple of updates down the line...but it will be worth waiting for him 😉 😳

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: _akaur_
Interesting update
So its all SwaLak set up to convince Shekar of how good Laksh is..
Waiting for see what happens next
Continue soon

yup...swalak did it to convince shekhar...but of something else for now...

you will see more glimpse into this laksh's mind in the next one

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Lovely update
Gut feeling is that there is much more than what is seen

thanks so much 😃 😳

and your gut feeling is right 😉 👏

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

thanks so much...glad you liked it 😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Here I go doing my victory dance I was right! He is planted! By Durga Prasad none the less. I had this fear in mind that the Maheshwari's and Gadodia's might be business rivals, but I was too engrossed with working out Lakshya's intention to voice that.

Now coming back to Lakshya I'm not sure whose side he is anymore. Is it possible that he has half a mind to help Swara unnoticed to Durga and because he got caught he now came up with this story...no, my first theory is better, he is using Swara and working for Durga Prasad.

I really like Shekar here, that's a first for me, as I usually hate him. He is much more affectionate father and a intelligent man here. I hope he won't suffer much because of this one mistake.

That last bitter taste in his mouth was Sanskar...I think.

Waiting for Sanskar still.

Continue soon Sapna!

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

oh god laksh is evil and the way i want him is evil only
Waiting for next part

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Hey Sapna...so the case is getting curiouser and curiouser 😊 I knew Lakshya was upto no good...and my mistrust of him paid off...that accident was pre planned, though poor, trusting, silly Swara being part of plan, was a masterstroke. I never expected that. 😊

I am always prepared to think the worst of Lakshya...so before the meeting with Durga Prasad, I was pretty sure he was a plant. Now that he is revealed to be a Maheshwari, Durga Prasad's son? I am even more certain he is only trying to worm his way into Shekar's trust. Does he really feel for Swara I wonder? Or is she just a convenient Trojan horse?

Looking forward to Sanskaar's entry. And I can't help but feel that Swara should have knocked Lakshya a tad bit harder...a few fractures would have been no more than what he deserves. 😆

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

U always leave the shocker fr the last dont u Sapna!! Tho i did guess laksh was upto no good...he couldn't hv just come at the beckoning of swara and to help shekhar just like tht...

So he is planted...but by Durga prasad?? Dp didnt look tht happy to see him with shekhar...so is laksh acting on his own to help his dad oust shekhar even more deeply than he seems to hv done already earlier...shekhar hasnt met with much success over tenders bfr has he...

Cant wait fr sanskaar's entry now...and how n when will he meet swara

Update soon dear!

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Here I go doing my victory dance I was right! He is planted! By Durga Prasad none the less. I had this fear in mind that the Maheshwari's and Gadodia's might be business rivals, but I was too engrossed with working out Lakshya's intention to voice that.
Now coming back to Lakshya I'm not sure whose side he is anymore. Is it possible that he has half a mind to help Swara unnoticed to Durga and because he got caught he now came up with this story...no, my first theory is better, he is using Swara and working for Durga Prasad.
I really like Shekar here, that's a first for me, as I usually hate him. He is much more affectionate father and a intelligent man here. I hope he won't suffer much because of this one mistake.
That last bitter taste in his mouth was Sanskar...I think.
Waiting for Sanskar still.
Continue soon Sapna!

hahahah 😆 😆 ...he has been playing his own games alright...you were right about that..👏 👏 oh maheshwaris and gadodia's have good bit of rivalry...that is why the accident ploy and surname helped. there will be more about DP, Laksh and Swara in the next one and yes also about our one and only Sanskar. you will know a bit about where he comes in.

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