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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic update. I loved how sanskar handled Kavita. though i feel he has her wrong in one place. he only saw her as warm and caring but when shomi asked him to be away from swara, she played him as well. she wanted him, whether because she liked him or for some other reason i cannot comment. so while her comments to him might have been logical, they also had her interest in mind not his. what he told kavita was harsh, but i guess he was so desperate to run away from winterland, that he held on to her like a dying man does to a wooden plank in the middle of the sea. hoping for it to be his salvation.
i am glad swara and sanksar realised that they were part of each other so there was never a choice. you weave your stories with beautiful words. so swasan took solace in each other and warm from each other as they prepared to fight the chill of the batter and the multitudes of the front knights not to mention the biggest and most evil snow queen of them all.

i wonder if there was more to kavita's disappearance...i don't mean just her capture, but more the entire plot about her father being journalist and her investigating chander. i wonder if any of that was real. i also wonder if she was always a pawn of vasudhara but feel for the rook she wanted to take out.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊

Saku dear...for me, the standout sentence in this chapter was Sanskaar's statement to "Kavita" 😛: "I fear losing her, for I know it would hurt me far, far more than it did when I thought I lost you. You possess a few very beautiful memories--but she possesses my life". 👏 👏 👏 Standing ovation, darling.

That was it, right there. The concerned Sanskaar, showing empathy and concern for his past love--which, really, as he admits to her, asking her for her understanding and forgiveness, wasn't really love at all. One can't help but respect the man for laying down his ugly truth bare for all to see, who admits to Kavita that while he found her a warm and lovely personality, he was willing to elope with her, start a life with her mostly as an escape from the winterland, the crown he so hated. And that guilt, the thought that it was this attempt that had killed her, had haunted him for five long years, driven him to a beastly war to get her "justice" to rid himself of guilt. But finally, all that guilt itself was misplaced...and in the course of that war, he found his very life again...that portrayal was so very powerful.

Sanskaar is willing to help Kavi move on and move away, but the way he calmly told her that he is no longer her destination, nor is she his; since he belongs to another now, has submitted completely and utterly to Swara's love for him, and his love for her---again, mindblowing. 👏 👏

I also loved the steely warning Sanskaar conveyed to "Kavita" 😛: that if she dared try to harm Swara, he would forget all about their past, and treat her just as a foe, an enemy to be vanquished, to protect his love against. That's the steely Sanskaar we know. 😉

I loved the SwaSan conversation, their lovely understanding and passionate interaction which rounded off the chapter. That whole bit about Swara telling Sanskaar his punishment for isolating her in a mistaken effort to keep her safe, was lovely. 😊 So she passes sentence, that there are to be no more individual wars for him, no more secrets he holds back from her. 😉

And the way she reassured him that the mistakes he made weren't due to any tainted genes he fears he got from Chandraraj, but rather because he loves with his entire heart, mind and soul, just as Ram does---that was so lovely. And even lovelier was her promise--that she'd be right by him, holding his hand, to ensure he doesn't lose himself in either guilt or love. She would keep him sane, keep him afloat. And yeah, that bit about not being able to choose someone who is so much a part of the very fabric of your being, was wonderful too.

That's so profound in a way, because we always look at choosing things or people who are external to us. The thought of choosing something or someone so intrinsic to oneself may not even occur...because there is really no choice there, after all...

The last bit, where Swara and Sanskaar finally surrender to each other, the meeting of the wind and the flames, was poetically lovely. Very beautifully conceived and executed Saku. A pleasure to read it, truly.

I think I have rambled on and on...I started identifying parts of the chapter that stood out for me, what I particularly loved, and I think I have written a precis of about a half of the entire update! 😆

Waiting for the next chapter, dear! 🤗 🤗

Viji dear, thank you for making sure I'd have a very beautiful dream tonight, you know this lovely comment made me so happy that I can now go to sleep with a smile, thank you so much 🤗
Sanskar has matured from the young man Kavi knew once and as you can see, he is very clear about what he want and where he stands, with whom. He is concerned for her, but love, as he says was never there. In my opinion only the ice king would have been strong enough to accept such an ugly truth point blank.
OH, you noticed that subtle change in address from "Kavi" to "kavita" as she did the mistake of threatening the queen. Well, that's is the ice king finally melted in love.
The SQ is harsh in her punishments, she just downgraded a king to a knight bound to her in a matter of few sentences and still managed to make him agree too. She just addressed his insecurity there. This fear had once made Sanskar refuse her and choose the easy escape Kavita and try to leave the winter land, now that Swara knows it, she assures him that she would keep him afloat and warm, safe in the winter land, so that he would not harm himself and others trying to escape pointlessly.
About the choices that was what I intended to say, I mean those you choose are always outsiders the closest ones, who have became a part of yourself are always overlooked, taken for granted, because there's no choice really when it comes to them. They remain with you all your life😊
I'm glad you extracted half the chapter dear, that means the chapter was so filled with lovable things.
I would post the next chapter soon!
loads of love,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sakura 🤗 I loved the analogies you used in this chapter. The chess one, the moth and the flame one. I loved it!!!
I had once believed love was a very selfless emotion. But in one of the other shows I watched, they said true love is often selfish. To protect the person you love from every harm, you stand in front of them as shield and take all their pain. You do so not only to protect them but to protect your self from the pain too because it would hurt you more to see them hurt. So in selfish way you are being selfless. Sanskaar and Swara's relationship in the whole series reminded me of this - Selflessly selfish love.

Sanskaar and Kavita's conversation was so brilliantly done. Sanskaar's guilt for using Kavita works only till she stays away from Swara. Once she involves Swara he would forget his guilt and destroy her.

Waiting for the next!! Update soon ❤️ 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkylibbi

Oh My God Saku...
Are you for real?
Gosh, I'm so lost in the miraid of emotions you're taking us to.
I hate my Exams... No wait... I loathe them...
Had it not been them, I would have never missed This journey to the Battle field with the Frost Knight and his Queen.. God, I so hate myself for this..
But I'm glad in one way, that I read all in a go and I've joined the journey better late than never...
I'm Speechless... Word.
I all literally feel like fighting the world to come to you and give you a Tight Hug so that I can convince myself that You're for REAL... God, I Love you ^power infinity...

Now I'm waiting for the End Game...
Being a Chess player, I just loved the way you connected the wonderful game with our SwaSan... Yes, in this game of brain, I personally love Knight for he having more stronger and wiser than the King himself to protect the King... And I'm thankful to you for making Sanskar the Knight and Shona his Queen...

I'm irrevocably in love with each and every lines, no, every Words, no, every Letters of this Masterpiece... Every time, I tell myself that this could have been your best, you simply prove me wrong and I'm super glad that you're.

If I start with all the 6 chapters, which I so badly want to, I would end up spamming your thread, which I definitely don't want to. So maybe, I'll pour my writings as a PM...
Waiting for the End Game and my selfish mind wants it to again end up being a middle game so that it won't end soon...

Thank you so much for this Saku...

Oh Pinky you're such a sweetheart! Thank you for the wonderful comments. Uh, I share you enmity with exams, have one myself just around the corner. But I am glad you finally caught up the journey of FK and loved it. I don't know how to thank you enough for the lovely words dear, you;re too generous!
Well, I have a oft corner for chess too, had been a school player, the winter lands are where I could employ those analogies perfectly so I thought of putting them here and there. The queen is my personal favorite, but the Knights are cool too!
Thanks again, will hope to hear more from you once your exams have finished😊 Good luck!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Sakura,
This update made me smile! The KavSan convo yaar!! I loved it sooo much! And then the awesome SwaSan scenario! My god, Sakura.!!!!! The passion was so well written! So freaking beautifully worded! <3

Finally the lines are drawn and the battle begins. I cannot wait for the next update!

Please update soon :)

-V

Thanks V, I really wanted something transparent in their discussion, glad you liked it. The wind flame scene...did you feel the heat? 😳 Then I am happy. I will update soon dear, it's going to be the battle now😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanya17

awesome, amazing perfect i just wntd to keep reading my god sakura u hv made me greedy i just wanted to read more n more
every word is perfect sanskars replies to kavita or kavitas answers to sanskar or swara n sanskars interaction perfect i lvd it a lot
swasans truthful answers to each other that was amazing be it power doesnt suit u lose ur sense there or sanskar agreeing to her or swaras reply to him when it comes to love u just lose urself so true so perfect nobody is flawless everyone have their own flaws
u knw wht sakura u have the talent of making the readers cnctd to nt only d hero or heroine but also the negative characters mkng the readrs cnctd to ngtv characters r mr hrd dan mkng them cnctd to leads bt u do it wonderfully u mk us cnct to each n every crctr of ur story thats why i am a big fan of u n ur stories

Thank you Sanya, it's nice to know you liked it and thought it was perfect. I really wanted to give Kav...San a proper ending and SwaSan a proper start, so I'm glad you loved it. Yes, he is a little confused when it comes to power and love, that's why he needs Swara in this battle.
I believe in transparent stories, where you know why everyone is doing what they do, even the villains!😊
Thanks again!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

So much happened in the last 3 chapters...I don't know from where to begin!!

Sharmistha was an unexpected one the greyness of her character!! How she was instrumental in janki's death and also how she cheated Swara into signing those papers...kind of justifies Shekhar and his mom's hatred and prejudice.

So did Swara return to the maheshwari house or are they somewhere else?

Sanskaar has opened his cards in front of vasundhara too and all set to battle her and kavita...so now wht happens next!

Pls do pm Sakura...hv not got fr last 3 chapters

Hey Tas,
I'm really sorry about the Pms darling, my network connection kept pulling my leg and I wasn't sure half the PMs I sent went or not. I guess yours did not. Anyway I am back home today and the network here is good, so I will PM you surely. Please forgive me if possible.
They are in Sanskar's infamous penthouse, you know the one in winter tales with that glass wall where he keeps watching his reflection? That's the one filling with stars at the moment.
I will update soon dear and you'll know what happens next. Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

no matter what kavitha can't separate swasan king will always protect his queen.

Very true😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

well i love this sanskar to say clearly to kavita that she might have been his love in past but swara is his life present and future
On the torture the show is giving as i wish sanskar there had the guts to say this

I guess the on screen Sanskar is more warmer and far too selfless than the IK But glad you loved him for being his cold self, thank you so much dear😊

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